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#1 2011-04-09 01:20:55
My song!
Is it real life?
Verse 1:
Is it real life
that I'm afraid of
is it real life
that i don't like
is it real life
where people say I
where people say that I don't exist
Chorus:
I dream a lot
i live my life
but people say
it don't matter
it's a fantasy
so don't you believe it
you
don't
exist
Verse 2
I look down
down at my feet
i see
see what I'm not meant to see
they say
'real life' is not what you think
It's only, only a fantasy
Chorus:
I dream a lot
i live my life
but people say
it don't matter
it's a fantasy
so don't you believe it
you
don't
exist
Verse 3
I start dreamin'
wonder what is real
Go tell the people
that guys like me don't feel
most people do that
they don't understand
we just have a different way
way to show what we feel
Chorus x 3
I dream a lot
i live my life
but people say
it don't matter
it's a fantasy
Last:
hold on to all your dreams,
Then you will see what is real,
They let you see through your mind,
and let you see what you need.
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So, what do you think?
Hey. It's me SSSS, back from the dead!
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#2 2011-04-09 01:28:19
- RobotKitty
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Re: My song!
I like it.
It reminds me of Bohemian Rhapsody, a little bit.
ssss wrote:
Go tell the people
that guys like me don't feel
most people do that
they don't understand
we just have a different way
way to show what we feel
This part actually confuses me a bit.
Last edited by RobotKitty (2011-04-09 01:30:30)
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#3 2011-04-09 01:29:14
- Alternatives
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Re: My song!
Meh, its not bad, but a little weird without music.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#4 2011-04-09 01:39:51
Re: My song!
RobotKitty wrote:
I like it.
It reminds me of Bohemian Rhapsody, a little bit.... Have to search that one up...
ssss wrote:
Go tell the people
that guys like me don't feel
most people do that
they don't understand
we just have a different way
way to show what we feelThis part actually confuses me a bit.
Oh, this part was showing what the dream kinda was about, if you reorganise my line breaking it would be
Go tell the people guys like me don't feel. Most people do that, they don't understand we just have a differemt way, way to show what we feel
0h, and thanks 
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#6 2011-04-09 01:42:17
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Re: My song!
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
Meh, its not bad, but a little weird without music.
Once i get the microphone working, i will get music. Then add instrumentals in...
I can play guitar and piano.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#7 2011-04-09 01:43:23
- RobotKitty
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Re: My song!
Yeah. In Bohemian Rhapsody the beginning is "Is this the real life? Is this just fantasy?"
It's the slightest bit similar, just the tiniest resemblance, lol.
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#8 2011-04-09 01:43:23
Re: My song!
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
Meh, its not bad, but a little weird without music.
Once i get the microphone working, i will get music. Then add instrumentals in...
I can play guitar and piano.
If you could play guitar for me, that will be nice...
Piano 
...
Hey. It's me SSSS, back from the dead!
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#9 2011-04-09 01:48:02
- Alternatives
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Re: My song!
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
Once i get the microphone working, i will get music. Then add instrumentals in...I can play guitar and piano.
If you could play guitar for me, that will be nice...
Piano
Jus' give me the chords 
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#10 2011-04-09 01:57:19
Re: My song!
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
I can play guitar and piano.If you could play guitar for me, that will be nice...
PianoJus' give me the chords
... Will after i write them
Do you think it shall be a dreerryy sound or a ENEEEEEERRRRRRGGGGGGGEEEEEEEETTTTTTOIIIIIIICCCCCCCCC sound?
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#11 2011-04-09 02:07:51
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Re: My song!
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
If you could play guitar for me, that will be nice...
PianoJus' give me the chords
... Will after i write them
Do you think it shall be a dreerryy sound or a ENEEEEEERRRRRRGGGGGGGEEEEEEEETTTTTTOIIIIIIICCCCCCCCC sound?
i tink it muzzt bez slowz butz fastz.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#12 2011-04-09 02:54:49
Re: My song!
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
Jus' give me the chords... Will after i write them
Do you think it shall be a dreerryy sound or a ENEEEEEERRRRRRGGGGGGGEEEEEEEETTTTTTOIIIIIIICCCCCCCCC sound?i tink it muzzt bez slowz butz fastz.
.... Like repetition ?
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#13 2011-04-09 03:27:04
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Re: My song!
ssss wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
ssss wrote:
... Will after i write them
Do you think it shall be a dreerryy sound or a ENEEEEEERRRRRRGGGGGGGEEEEEEEETTTTTTOIIIIIIICCCCCCCCC sound?i tink it muzzt bez slowz butz fastz.
.... Like repetition ?
Yes, with a good "dun dunnnun dun" beat
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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