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thebuilderdd wrote:

This topic can be insulting to other Scratchers if they get a bad score.

Nonsense, a bad score with Rub's constructive criticism can introduce ways a Scratcher can improve a project.  They just have to not take it the wrong way.
(You'll probably say "yes they will" so perhaps Rub0Gameton needs a note after his/her scores saying not to take a review the wrong way)

Edit:  Uh oh, I may have changed the page and pushed out requests for scores on the previous page.  I'm pretty sure there are still ones on the previous page.

Last edited by Kileymeister (2011-03-28 19:46:21)

Kileymeister wrote:

thebuilderdd wrote:

This topic can be insulting to other Scratchers if they get a bad score.

Nonsense, a bad score with Rub's constructive criticism can introduce ways a Scratcher can improve a project.  They just have to not take it the wrong way.
(You'll probably say "yes they will" so perhaps Rub0Gameton needs a note after his/her scores saying not to take a review the wrong way)
Edit:  Uh oh, I may have changed the page and pushed out requests for scores on the previous page.  I'm pretty sure there are still ones on the previous page.

Exactly! This page is to help people make better projects so they can learn as much as possible from using Scratch. And if you dont want your score to be published, just tell me and Ill delete all of the posts related to that!

EDIT: For example, Shadowsonics' project was scored 47% and after he updated it... (look at the first post!) He is a very good example of what Scratchers could get to!

Last edited by Rub0Gameton (2011-03-28 19:44:09)

Brick Breaker Ultimate by nathandrake (90%)
Scripting 8/10
Controls 3/3
Art/Graphics 5/5
Music/Sounds 2/2
Originality 4/5
Entertainment 5/5
Neat game! Just a few advice... Use variables for levels instead of broadcasts. Apply this also to the number of lives. Those things make the game more flexible and less scripty. Instead of receiving the broadcasts, make a "When I receive (Play Game)">Do level 1 stuff>"Wait until (level = 2)">Do level 2 stuff... and so on. I'd like to insert a comment here telling you that you made a very good use of PowerPoint in your graphics! There are billions of games like this, but as this is one of the best, it has a high originality! The sounds are nice, and this kind of game doesn't need that much background music, so full scoring for that! Very entertaining game! Hope to see more of you!

Last edited by Rub0Gameton (2011-03-28 20:33:59)

Rub0Gameton wrote:

Reverberated3 wrote:

My latest project...too lazy to post a link.

Too lazy to check it out then!

Fine, it's in my sig.

Speech Test by TVflea (93%)
Scripting 8/10
Controls 3/3
Art/Graphics 5/5
Music/Sounds 2/2
Originality 5/5
Entertainment 5/5
Very good job doing this project! There are some scripting things that would make it better: 1) Use Backgrounds instead of sprites for the text of results, credits and about! 2) You used a variable (start) for the player. Use a list and the start variable for the options! For example: When it is clicked> If item (start) of list = B then change score by 1, change start by 1. And another script for costume making: Set costume to start. Those examples are for the sprite called "B.)" For another one, replace B for that letter. That was a very creative project!

EDIT: Oops, forgot to calculate the percentage! xD

Last edited by Rub0Gameton (2011-03-28 20:55:14)

Ok, 7pm, time to go socialize xD. I'll be back tomorrow, and I'll make sure to prioritize those who are in my waiting list, so don't worry about it. Do any appeals ASAP so I can finish by tomorrow!

TVflea wrote:

Rub0Gameton wrote:

Speech Test by TVflea (93%)
Scripting 8/10
Controls 3/3
Art/Graphics 5/5
Music/Sounds 2/2
Originality 5/5
Entertainment 5/5
Very good job doing this project! There are some scripting things that would make it better: 1) Use Backgrounds instead of sprites for the text of results, credits and about! 2) You used a variable (start) for the player. Use a list and the start variable for the options! For example: When it is clicked> If item (start) of list = B then change score by 1, change start by 1. And another script for costume making: Set costume to start. Those examples are for the sprite called "B.)" For another one, replace B for that letter. That was a very creative project!

EDIT: Oops, forgot to calculate the percentage! xD

It still works, though. That was actually a project i tried to make when i was young so we did not have lists.

K, but make sure to have that in mind for future projects! Thanks a lot for posting!

Could you see my project?  I want to know what people think of it...  Pinball

can you see this? SQUARE BOY

Last edited by jonzo (2011-03-29 07:04:55)

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ImagineIt/1669736 I'm new so I'm not the best.

Here is my project- it is still in development though
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Hadlab/1665021