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#1 2011-03-29 19:28:54
- Musicstar888
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Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
I wrote this poem.......
I wrote:
Soccer
I hate you
You hate me
A hate-hate relationship
Between me and soccer.
As I kick it into the wrong goal
Everyone stares
My cheeks flush and I shrug
Maybe I should be on the boy's team.
No matter what I'll always suck.
I guess I could do better
...Maybe you're not so bad
I've converted
Soccer is awesome!
Ha-ha. You fell for it.
So, do you all like it? Any feedback? Please disscussify.
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#2 2011-03-29 19:30:48
- AnimeCreatorArtist
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
i just drew a face on my soccer ball and punched it
I'm basically honorary nasty. N-n-n-n-nasty jazz
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#4 2011-03-29 20:31:06
- soupoftomato
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
rufflebee wrote:
Maybe I should be on the boy's team.
i don't get that part
this is not sexist, but considering boys are generally the main team, i dont get it either
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#5 2011-03-29 20:42:01
- bananaman114
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
i just drew a face on my soccer ball and punched it
Kicking it naturally seems more logical.
Last edited by bananaman114 (2011-03-29 20:42:30)
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#6 2011-03-29 20:44:27
- Reverberated3
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
Don't be hating on the world's greatest sport!
It's interesting...not exactly deep...but I guess that's fine.
Last edited by Reverberated3 (2011-03-29 20:46:09)
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#7 2011-03-29 20:53:54
- EmperorEvil
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
I could've wrote that! It applies to me.
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#8 2011-03-29 21:06:34
- Musicstar888
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
rufflebee wrote:
Maybe I should be on the boy's team.
i don't get that part
In my grade we play soccer boys vs. girls. With some exceptions, because there aren't enough girls.
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#10 2011-03-30 11:27:56
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#11 2011-03-30 11:30:14
- Alternatives
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
werdna123 wrote:
I really can't think of the tune...
+1
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#12 2011-03-30 18:10:48
- Musicstar888
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Re: Do you guys like this poem I wrote?
Well, I've written many different poems in my life, I'll edit this post so I can show you some other poems I wrote. I'm sorry I'm hating on soccer, to all you sportsfans out there, but I was raised influenced that sports didn't matter. I focus more on stimulating my mind, not my body. I play soccer anyway, even though I suck
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