Scratch

I have the lyrics to my song written.

technoguyx wrote:

And mine were written months ago, lol. I guess I'll show them to you guys, so you can see whether it needs improvement or not:

(Guitar + Drum intro, then verse)

I come from the city, a freakin' huge city
where everything's easy, easy, so easy
they say I am crazy, mad, but more crazy 'cause
I'm going on a trip to the ol' country, I say,

(CHORUS, which is actually me nanananana-ing to the main riff)

The guys from the city, freakin' boring city
they say they need money, it's a necessity
I say I don't care about either guys' money, 'cause
I'm going on a trip to the ol' country, I say

(CHORUS x2, on the last one a guitar solo is played then it ends)

I know the lyrics might be a bit weird, but I didn't really mind that. 

nice :]

bumps

technoguyx wrote:

veggieman001 wrote:

here are my lyrics if anyone cared:

vehicle
it's a miracle
that it stayed together
all these years

yeah
vehicle
miracle
staying around awhile

no one cared about it
except the two of us
i don't know why we did
but now there's something there besides it

vehicle
it's a miracle
that it stayed together
for this long

yeah
vehicle
miracle
lingering round the fire

we took the broken pieces
and put them back together
i think that we could do this
for a while, forever?

vehicle
it's a miracle
that we've stayed together
for this long

vehicle
vehicle
vehicle
vehicle

Hmm, the verses are very short lol.    Not like it's bad or anything but I'd like to hear these verses sung, just like the rest of the lyrics posted so far. I also can't seem to figure out what the song is exactly about. 

yeah, it's pretty vague and mysterious. of course, i know what it's about, but i'm keeping it vague. and yes, the verses are short.

bump

We need less bumps and more songs! Nobody else is even starting to put together their songs? I'm making the drum track for mine in FL Studio right now.

I'm joining! I already posted em, the song's called 'When I woke up' and it's under the thread "My Band's Songs."

Hmm, I'll remove the Minecraft forum for my sig (it's inactive.) and put this thread in it to see if I can get more people.

Also remove the "(possibly)" after my name, I'm definitely making it 

Last edited by technoguyx (2011-03-27 13:17:21)

Yay, 101 bars of drum track done! Now I just need to practice the solo (I keep messing it up, though it's pretty simple) and then I can start recording 

i'll probably start recording my song tomorrow

add me

Well anyway there is one in my stuff.
I'll upload another one later

sanddude wrote:

Necromaster wrote:

Well anyway there is one in my stuff.
I'll upload another one later

This should be track #1. It's always good for an album to get an energetic start.

+9001, though I don't think it'll fit much with my Trip to the Ol' Country remake.    Still, awesome lead guitar is awesome.

Last edited by technoguyx (2011-03-28 11:32:23)