Scratch

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-25 13:50:19

Hello. I want to know what you think of chapter 2 so far.

Last edited by Calebxy_Test (2011-03-27 09:45:42)

-iNetMaster- · 2011-03-25 14:53:52

I think you should keep all chapters in the same topic.

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-25 15:57:56

-iNetMaster- wrote:
I think you should keep all chapters in the same topic.

But don't you think that would be a little bit too much to read?

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 05:29:54

bump

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 08:14:55

Updated! big_smile

ssss · 2011-03-26 08:16:41

cool wink

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 08:20:14

ssss wrote:
cool

Thanks. smile

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 11:18:13

Updated again! big_smile

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 13:07:59

Updated! I've almost finished the chapter now! Be sure to tell me what you think of it. smile

turtlewarrior · 2011-03-26 13:23:55

Didn't you quit four times already?

Anyway, about the chapter itself. It's not good enough to get published or anything, but it's still pretty good. The dialogue is nice, but there's a lot of it however that's excusable because you're just starting. What's the name of this anyways?

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 13:40:11

turtlewarrior wrote:
Didn't you quit four times already?

Anyway, about the chapter itself. It's not good enough to get published or anything, but it's still pretty good. The dialogue is nice, but there's a lot of it however that's excusable because you're just starting. What's the name of this anyways?

I remember your competition. big_smile You liked my Solar Fox game. But anyway; why aren't I allowed a visit back from time to time? Although, this isn't just a visit. I have a reason. THE TOPIC!!!! I want your opinions on my book in progress. Is that too much to ask without being criticized for "coming back?"

turtlewarrior · 2011-03-26 13:49:04

Not criticizing, just making a statement smile

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 13:55:43

turtlewarrior wrote:
Not criticizing, just making a statement

Sorry. But people used to criticize me a lot when I was originally quiting.

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 14:21:45

And there it is! The finished chapter! big_smile

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-26 16:36:23

Nice! big_smile smile wink yikes

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-26 17:02:35

ProgrammingFreak wrote:
Nice!

Thanks! big_smile smile wink yikes

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-27 09:44:50

I don't want to give away the whole book, so I'm going to delete this chapter when I post the next. smile

08jackt · 2011-03-27 10:09:51

i copy and pasted all the chapters so far and am planning to send them of to a publisher soon.
wish me luck smile

Calebxy_Test · 2011-03-27 10:12:57

08jackt wrote:
i copy and pasted all the chapters so far and am planning to send them of to a publisher soon.
wish me luck

lol

I'll sue. neutral

Scratch

archived forums

#1 2011-03-25 13:50:19

Chapter 2 (so far)

#2 2011-03-25 14:53:52

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#3 2011-03-25 15:57:56

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

-iNetMaster- wrote:

#4 2011-03-26 05:29:54

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#5 2011-03-26 08:14:55

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#6 2011-03-26 08:16:41

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#7 2011-03-26 08:20:14

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

ssss wrote:

#8 2011-03-26 11:18:13

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#9 2011-03-26 13:07:59

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#10 2011-03-26 13:23:55

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#11 2011-03-26 13:40:11

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

turtlewarrior wrote:

#12 2011-03-26 13:49:04

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#13 2011-03-26 13:55:43

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

turtlewarrior wrote:

#14 2011-03-26 14:21:45

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#15 2011-03-26 16:36:23

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#16 2011-03-26 17:02:35

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

ProgrammingFreak wrote:

#17 2011-03-27 09:44:50

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#18 2011-03-27 10:09:51

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

#19 2011-03-27 10:12:57

Re: Chapter 2 (so far)

08jackt wrote:

Board footer