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ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 14:31:59

Here you can post your songs and we will discuss them! big_smile

ProgrammingFreak's Story
I have always wanted to be a singer. Even though I'm a guy. Which some guys look down upon.

Anyways, I have started a band, but I also have a couple solo songs without the band. I might undergo a secret identity with the name, Kris Tyler. But I may not.
Hope you enjoy my songs!

Crazy By ProgrammingFreak

Yeah Ooh Yeah Uh huh

Girl you know I'm giving my all
I'll catch you when ya fall (yeah)
But your not sharing your love
I thought you were sent from above
And I can't make it on my own.
[CHORUS]
'Cause girl I'm going cra-cra-cra-crazy
And it ain't ea-ea-ea-ea-easy
'Cause I am giving my all
And you are taking it all
from me
'Cause I am giving my all
And you are taking it all
from me

You make me look crazy
Cause I'm getting Dizzy
I can't go on anymore.
Cause I need your love.
You are sent from above.
And I can't make it on my own.

(CHORUS)

We keep going Round and Round
And I'm gonna fall down
Do you really love me?
And girl I love
But I can't love enough
Cause I'm drowning
And can't get up
So won't you share your love? (ooh)

(CHORUS)

Takin' Takin' Takin' (noo)
Sharin' Sharin' Sharin' (Ohh)
I'm Givin' Givin' Givin' (Noo)
Gettin' Gettin' Gettin' (Whoa)

(CHORUS)

'Cause I am giving my all
And you are taking it all
from me

Together By ProgrammingFreak
Sometimes I wonder why you had to leave
Sometimes I sit around in disbelief
Why do I feel this torture?
Waitin' for the future
When I meet you
When I meet you again
We'll all be...

[CHORUS]
Together Forever
We'll be inseparable
inseparable
Together Forever and always
We are inseparable
inseparable in those days

When I see you with him
I start cryin' cryin'
When I see you kiss him
I start lyin' lyin'
That I don't miss you
One day we'll be...

(CHORUS)

Every time I turn on the radio
I hear you, I hear yooou
Every time I turn on the TV
I see you, I see yooou
So why don't you
So why don't you come home

(CHORUS)
(CHORUS)

Tooooogeeethher. Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah.

La La Land By ProgrammingFreak
It was our first dance.
We were taking a chance.
But you seemed to be somewhere else
And I look into your eyes
and say

[CHORUS]
I'm in La La Land
Waitin' for you to come
Its our first dance
We're dancin' to a slow song
Forget about your worries
And I'll hold you close
Remember all those stories and
We're in la la land

You look behind your back
See if someones there
You don't lack
that pointless fear
I keep on telling you that
We're safe
But you are worrying
everyday
and I say...

(CHORUS)

So lets dance
Lets Dance..

(CHORUS)

Boy Meets Girl By ProgrammingFreak
There's a boy in Illinois
Got no one to talk to
Theres a girl in in the same small world
Who's heart is broken in two

Two worlds collide
Love doesn't hide
And Boy Meets Girl!

[CHORUS]
Boy Meets the Girl
Boy Meets the World
of love (of love, of love, of love)
When Boy Meets Girl
Their the only ones in their world
Boy Meets Girl

Come on lets dance
In this romance
Though there's no music playin'
Hold my hand
And we'll stand
In this world together

(CHORUS)
(CHORUS)

Cause when this Boy Meets Girl
She will be his world
C'mon, be my girl

(CHORUS)

To Have Your Heart Broken by Musicstar88

Is there a way
To get myself out
Of this roller coaster
That can't slow down
Now a piece of me is gone
And there's nothing I can do
I wonder what the problem was
Between me and you

I can't get you outta my head
Though you were so heartless

CHORUS
To have your heart broken
Is nothing you would know
To have your heart broken
Left out in the cold
To have your heart broken
I never thought
That having your heart broken
Would be so hard

Slamming the door
In the shadows I creep
I can't do this anymore
Its deserted me
I'm thinking to myself
Why you were with me anyway
Seems like we were made for each other
But that's not the case

I can't get you outta my head
Though you were so heartless

CHORUS x3
REPEAT 1st verse quietly

There. How do you like it? Please comment.

Last edited by ProgrammingFreak (2011-03-24 15:02:41)

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 14:54:05

Bumpo

werdna123 · 2011-03-22 15:19:50

Pretty good. big_smile

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 15:21:08

werdna123 wrote:
Pretty good.

Thanks. big_smile

scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 15:23:25

There's a song by Gnarles Barkley called Crazy.

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 15:23:34

Which is your fav? (if you care for it)

TheSuccessor · 2011-03-22 15:27:53

Nice!

I'm great at writing music, but I couldn't write lyrics to save my life. tongue

scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 15:29:05

I write music too! cool

By the way, how do I edit my signature? I became a Scratcher today.

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 15:30:50

TheSuccessor wrote:
Nice!

I'm great at writing music, but I couldn't write lyrics to save my life.

I think I've heard some of your music. hmm It was good! big_smile
Do you have a fav?

scratcher7_13 wrote:
I write music too!

By the way, how do I edit my signature? I became a Scratcher today.

GO to the top of the forums. It says 'Profile'. Click that. Then go down to a link called 'Personality'. Write something in that Text Box.

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scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 15:33:02

Thanks! big_smile

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 15:50:05

scratcher7_13 wrote:
I write music too!

Post some of your songs here! I'll make this an official Song Thread! big_smile

scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 15:53:49

ProgrammingFreak wrote:
scratcher7_13 wrote:
I write music too!
Post some of your songs here! I'll make this an official Song Thread!

None of my songs have any lyrics. Or are you talking about posting recordings?

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 15:55:43

scratcher7_13 wrote:
ProgrammingFreak wrote:
scratcher7_13 wrote:
I write music too!
Post some of your songs here! I'll make this an official Song Thread!
None of my songs have any lyrics. Or are you talking about posting recordings?

Oh. No. I thought you had lyrics. tongue

scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 15:57:34

Okay. I'm no good with lyrics.

cuddlycub · 2011-03-22 15:58:04

i write songs
like baby
oops, no that isnt me
thats mr. beaver

scratcher7_13 · 2011-03-22 16:00:28

cuddlycub wrote:
i write songs
like baby
oops, no that isnt me
thats mr. beaver

What?

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-03-22 16:09:08

scratcher7_13 wrote:
cuddlycub wrote:
i write songs
like baby
oops, no that isnt me
thats mr. beaver
What?

I don't know. He's just being annoying. Moving on...

sanddude · 2011-03-22 17:14:33

Wow! Some really well written pop songs here. They sound like they can be popular, but yet aren't generic! You're lyrics are something I'd like more of in pop music.

bbbeb · 2011-03-22 17:39:25

+1

Musicstar888 · 2011-03-22 18:13:34

I wrote many songs. Here's one:

To Have Your Heart Broken by Musicstar888 wrote:
Is there a way
To get myself out
Of this roller coaster
That can't slow down
Now a piece of me is gone
And there's nothing I can do
I wonder what the problem was
Between me and you

I can't get you outta my head
Though you were so heartless

CHORUS
To have your heart broken
Is nothing you would know
To have your heart broken
Left out in the cold
To have your heart broken
I never thought
That having your heart broken
Would be so hard

Slamming the door
In the shadows I creep
I can't do this anymore
Its deserted me
I'm thinking to myself
Why you were with me anyway
Seems like we were made for each other
But that's not the case

I can't get you outta my head
Though you were so heartless

CHORUS x3
REPEAT 1st verse quietly

Please DO NOT COPY THIS. I worked hard on it and I really don't want people to sing it except me (I know, I sound selfish, but my band's music is NOT copyrighted yet, so anyone could just sing it and take credit for it.) We've also written many more songs...
Anyway, any feedback?

Last edited by Musicstar888 (2011-03-22 18:15:04)

littletonkslover · 2011-03-22 18:18:02

needs more violence

technoguyx · 2011-03-22 20:56:31

littletonkslover wrote:
needs more violence

Wait 'till my thrash band actually bothers to write a song then. tongue

BlahBlahRatSheep · 2011-03-22 21:05:28

needs more bunnies

lol xD jk but that would be nice

I think they're great! big_smile

Last edited by BlahBlahRatSheep (2011-03-22 21:12:00)

Nexstudent · 2011-03-22 21:10:12

I wish i could sing. If I could, I would want to start a band.

I play clarinet for this reason.

The songs look very good.

veggieman001 · 2011-03-22 22:48:27

Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ahhhh...

Your date was all wrong
Your prophets are frauds
Computers didn't fail in 2000

But what about that
does make you believe
that there is no other time?

Y2K is a myth
but just if
2012 wasn't the end of the world

You would just see
how right I would be
in the year 2048

The power of two
which computers use
would be the doom of them all

Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ahhhh... Ah.

That's my song "Y2K". It'll be on my album that will be released in the next couple months.

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