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#1 2011-03-06 12:58:45

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The Rake...

God this story freaked me out.
Reader, prepare to have your mind blown....

The Rake~

"Three years ago, I had just returned from a trip from Niagara Falls with my family for the 4th of July. We were all very exhausted after a long day of driving, so my husband and I put the kids right to bed and called it a night.

At about 4am, I woke up thinking my husband had gotten up to use the restroom. I used the moment to steal back the sheets, only to wake him in the process. I appologized and told him I though he got out of bed. When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.

After adjusting to the dark for a half second, I was able to see what caused the strange reaction. At the foot of the bed, sitting and facing away from us, there was what appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of some sort. It’s body position was disturbing and unnatural, as if it had been hit by a car or something. For some reason, I was not instantly frightened by it, but more concerned as to its condition. At this point I was somewhat under the assumption that we were supposed to help him.

My husband was peering over his arm and knee, tucked into the fetal position, occasionally glancing at me before returning to the creature.

In a flurry of motion, the creature scrambled around the side of the bed, and then crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband’s face. The creature was completely silent for about 30 seconds (or probably closer to 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids’ rooms.

I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch on the wall and saw my daughter Clara.

The creature ran down the stairs while my husband and I rushed to help our daughter. She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said “he is the Rake”.

My husband drove his car into a lake that night, while rushing our daughter to the hospital. He did not survive.

Being a small town, news got around pretty quickly. The police were helpful at first, and the local newspaper took a lot of interest as well. However, the story was never published and the local television news never followed up either.

For several months, my son Justin and I stayed in a hotel near my parent’s house. After we decided to return home, I began looking for answers myself. I eventually located a man in the next town over who had a similar story. We got in contact and began talking about our experiences. He knew of two other people in New York who had seen the creature we now referred to as the Rake.

It took the four of us about two solid years of hunting on the internet and writing letters to come up with a small collection of what we believe to be accounts of the Rake. None of them gave any details, history or follow up. One journal had an entry involving the creature in its first 3 pages, and never mentioned it again. A ship’s log explained nothing of the encounter, saying only that they were told to leave by the Rake. That was the last entry in the log.

There were, however, many instances where the creature’s visit was one of a series of visits with the same person. Multiple people also mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter.

I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, every night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed. (This still took almost an hour every day)

On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can’t listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven’t let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I’ve heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don’t remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.

The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter’s head make me very upset.

I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I’ll wake up to see him staring at me."

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#2 2011-03-06 13:05:08

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Re: The Rake...

What, no climax?  Just one sighting of "the Rake," then nothing but research afterwards? Bleh.


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#3 2011-03-06 13:05:19

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Re: The Rake...

Total mind****


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#4 2011-03-06 13:27:26

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Re: The Rake...

I was so sure that the daughter was evil and the rake was something else and then you just HAD to bring it back, didn't you.

UNCOOL BRO


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#5 2011-03-06 13:39:21

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Re: The Rake...

Kileymeister wrote:

What, no climax?  Just one sighting of "the Rake," then nothing but research afterwards? Bleh.


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#6 2011-03-06 17:16:24

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Re: The Rake...

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

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#7 2011-03-06 17:45:11

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Re: The Rake...

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

Lolwut?


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#8 2011-03-06 17:46:16

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Re: The Rake...

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

Dude this is a children's site.

Waaay too scary.


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#9 2011-03-06 17:56:00

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Re: The Rake...

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

not cool, bro

my little brother saw that D:


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#10 2011-03-06 18:00:20

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Re: The Rake...

agscratcher wrote:

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

Lolwut?

It's to ease the senses.


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#11 2011-03-06 18:11:19

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Re: The Rake...

GirWaffles64 wrote:

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

not cool, bro

my little brother saw that D:

he must be scarred for life


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#12 2011-03-06 18:12:57

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Re: The Rake...

rufflebee wrote:

GirWaffles64 wrote:

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

not cool, bro

my little brother saw that D:

he must be scarred for life

he [removed by Moderator] himself bro

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#13 2011-03-06 18:17:06

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Re: The Rake...

What the heck was the rake supposed to be anyway?

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#14 2011-03-06 18:21:51

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Re: The Rake...

Necromaster wrote:

What the heck was the rake supposed to be anyway?

The Rake is the Rake.  You cannot liken it to anything else but the Rake.


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#15 2011-03-07 07:31:03

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Re: The Rake...

GirWaffles64 wrote:

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

not cool, bro

my little brother saw that D:

Oh, he must've thought it was about a actual rake..


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#16 2011-03-07 07:32:14

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Re: The Rake...

Kileymeister wrote:

Necromaster wrote:

What the heck was the rake supposed to be anyway?

The Rake is the Rake.  You cannot liken it to anything else but the Rake.

True dat


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#17 2011-03-07 07:33:54

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Re: The Rake...

Kileymeister wrote:

johndo77 wrote:

http://www.google.com/search?client=saf … p;oe=UTF-8

For after you read Alternatives's story.

Dude this is a children's site.

Waaay too scary.

I've permanently scarred kids who thought this story was about a actual rake  hmm


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#18 2011-03-07 07:35:00

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Re: The Rake...

agscratcher wrote:

Total mind****

Bleh


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#19 2011-03-07 08:25:59

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http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSSoWAqRTbgdFWSTBjhfJwasXywBgoRCdpVi3N3Qs3hcDA_i0Y0

Look at that and tell me how it relates to the story.


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#20 2011-03-07 10:42:46

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creepy


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#21 2011-03-07 11:07:23

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Re: The Rake...

The rake reminds me of the dog human hybrid.


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#22 2011-03-07 11:39:23

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It wasn't really that scary


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#23 2011-03-07 13:21:51

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Re: The Rake...

Andres-Vander wrote:

It wasn't really that scary

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#24 2011-03-07 17:10:34

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Re: The Rake...

kimmy123 wrote:

The rake reminds me of the dog human hybrid.

I can never un-see that.


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#25 2011-03-08 10:01:46

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Re: The Rake...

Okay, people. Just to clear this out, this story is NOT about a garden rake -_-

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