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Scrtach Project: Hunt or Be Hunted Story Trailer (CENSORED)

By: Frank1281

Five word sum-up: Creative and Action Packed Trailer

Rating: 8.1/10 (for trailer)

My Advice:
I must say that you have an excellent choice of music in your trailer, gloomy and mysterious to start and heavy action packed rockin to end it..
Youv'e done your future game well by making a trailer like this, there is a story behind your game that has boosted my understanding of what i will be playing, and i feel this will effect me as i play it (maybe suck me into the game more). I would like to suggest that:

1. Maybe show bits of story in your game inbetween chapters as the player advances, maybe some video simuler to the story at the start of your trailer.

2. You seem good at creating ''story'' so i would keep pushing the idea of a story-line through your game, with betrayal, death scenes ect...?

THANKS FOR ENTERING YOU PROJECT 

Scrtach Project: zombies

By: g8rghr

Five word sum-up: fun game! needs more twists.

Rating: 6.3/10

My Advice:
I dont see this game as fully complete, it seems bare in some ways. You have the right idea and your scriping is perfectly good, but its too repetitive.
The idea of letting people tweak the turning level hence letting your player turning quicker and the pressing ''c'' to turn round 180 degrees are innovative ideas that make the game more interactive with the person playing it, and its little ideas like them that you should work on as it keeps the player envolved and awake.
There is alot of advice i could offer but i would like to stick to three main points;

1. Add an intro with some music, and maybe a sound with a ''level up'' message when you have advanced to the next level?

2. Add new guns; shotgun, burst fire rifle or a bazooka to it. these guns could pop up round the map and the player could grab them and use them for a certain amount of time?

3. add gloomy, scary music to the levels, try to get the player deeper into the game?

THANKS FOR ENTERING YOUR PROJECT IN FOR A REVIEW 

Thanks for rating my trailer! Right Now I cant add too much "Story" To the game (Basic storrytelling and stuff), but I wont be able to add like a lot of characters and deep stories, but If SOME day I do a sequel (Hunt or Be Hunted 2: Infection,    Just thought that would fit if I do a sequel  ), mabye I can add more intense background stories

frank1281 wrote:

Thanks for rating my trailer! Right Now I cant add too much "Story" To the game (Basic storrytelling and stuff), but I wont be able to add like a lot of characters and deep stories, but If SOME day I do a sequel (Hunt or Be Hunted 2: Infection,    Just thought that would fit if I do a sequel  ), mabye I can add more intense background stories

I agree! As i said your are good at creating story so definitly add those intense background stories 

Can you review this: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/kimmy123/1625628 ?

Scrtach Project: .Max4344OS X 1.0 Alpha 3

By: Max4344

Five word sum-up: Good effort! But lacking ''fun''

Rating: 5.5/10

My Advice:
I hate having to give out such a low rating on such a good effort! But your project is still incomplete and it has a couple of minor glitches. If you are content with this project idea, then i suggest you take some time, introduce more elements, finish this project and have patience making it.
I would offer these 3 simple suggestions though:

1. Add sounds, simple computer sounds to your project.

2. Have some games on the project, even just some easy mini-games.

3. Make a puzzle or password for people to solve, maybe give clues out in the games or programs OR have it so they must try ''hack'' into the system to solve it. (This will get people envolved with your project and get them thinking).

Necromaster wrote:

When are you going to rate mine?

zombie apocalypse has been rated, well done 

Are you gunna review moon defense?

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Check out my new Zombies game. It's epic. It'll be in the signature.

Please rate the game in my sig, I would really appreciate it, as would the other people who helped me make it for the collab challenge.

PLEASE check out my new zombies game in the sig. It is EPICLY Fun.
And also download it to play.
I'm having trouble getting lotsa view, just so you know.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/-iNetMaster-/1636037
I just made it, and I need your personal opinion.