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deco23 · 2011-02-28 21:18:41

Feel free to post your projects up here and have them rated by me a ''new scratcher''.

I WILL:

1. LOVE IT (regardless if it is good or bad.)

2. DOWNLOAD IT.

3. PLAY IT.

4. RATE IT.

SlayerEW · 2011-03-01 02:26:32

Nice idea!
I did something like this but it got really popular.
Good luck!
Could you review this?
That would be great if you could!

-SlayerEW

nathandrake · 2011-03-01 11:53:34

By the way mine doesn't work downloaded which is a bit confusing but also if you could turn the volume up for the introduction and the epic music. Thanks big_smile http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/nathandrake/1608734

deco23 · 2011-03-01 12:44:56

Scrtach Project: SlayerEW's Lightsaber Duel

By: SlayerEW

Five word sum-up: Good Idea, But Needs More!

Rating: 5.5/10

My Advice:
Firstly, i like the idea posed in this game, and i think that a few simple tweaks here and there would make a huge difference. If your willing to, i would advise you to try give your game a more proffesional look.
*Maybe by giving it these three add-ons:

1. An small intro, maybe with star wars themed music.

2. A background, something simple for the intro and one for each difficulty.

3. A different light-saber for each difficulty and some music with a ''WELL DONE'' message when the player wins.

THANKS FOR SUBMITTING YOUR PROJECT!
IF YOU NEED ANY HELP WITH ANY ADVICE IV'E GIVEN JUST ASK smile

Andres-Vander · 2011-03-01 12:46:25

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Andres-Vander/1301602

By the way, it isn't done yet since no one will help me

deco23 · 2011-03-01 13:30:32

Scrtach Project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/nathandrake/1608734

By: nathandrake

Five word sum-up: Good stuff! fun but difficult.

Rating: 6.8/10

My Advice:
First off, i like your intro and absolutely love the music, they are both very effective in your game.
All in all this game has good elements to it, also this game would have recieved a score in the sevens but unfortunetly i could easily cheat and at times the x, y, velocity was a bit too much! My opinion would be:

1. to upgrade your graphics in the game, instead of colour and lines, have pictures and sprites.

2. Put an ''if on edge, bounce'' on the red ''blob'' sprite, this will stop peolpe from cheating in your game.

3. Maybe change your x and y (up,down,left,right) velocity's to -0.5 and 0.5
And change the x and y * velocity to 0.85.

4. If you agree, i think it would be cool to let people customise thier blob at the start (spotted or striped, green blue ect.)

THANKS FOR SUBMITTING YOUR PROJECT!
IF YOU NEED ANY HELP WITH ANY ADVICE IV'E GIVEN JUST ASK smile

nathandrake · 2011-03-01 13:33:34

Thanks for the review! Great suggestions particularlythe idea of customising your character. I might look into that for the 2nd one( i think i will make a second because the first one has done quite well) big_smile

deco23 · 2011-03-01 13:48:30

Andres-Vander wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Andres-Vander/1301602

By the way, it isn't done yet since no one will help me

Ok, well i had a look and what i see looks excellent!

But what excatly would you like to happen in this game because i cant see what your trying to do.

when i move the arrow keys is the player supoosed to move.. ect.

Just tell me a little about what happens in this game (well whats supposed to happen) just try to sum up the game in a paragraph or so...

AND I'LL TRY MY BEST TO HELP smile

deco23 · 2011-03-01 13:56:24

nathandrake wrote:
Thanks for the review! Great suggestions particularlythe idea of customising your character. I might look into that for the 2nd one( i think i will make a second because the first one has done quite well)

Yes the game is doing well and it should! You clearly understand how to programme and i like that you have most of the elements there: an intro, ending, levels, things that effect the player ect..

nicely done.

Earthboundjeff · 2011-03-01 14:09:20

Hey, could you do mine?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Earthboundjeff/1496122

Sunrise-Moon · 2011-03-01 14:16:32

Review the project in my sig? smile

littletonkslover · 2011-03-01 14:31:51

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/littletonkslover/1625764

not very good but review it anyways plz

deco23 · 2011-03-01 14:50:34

Scrtach Project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/higejolly/817528

By: higejolly

Five word sum-up: good job, but needs more!

Rating: 6.4/10

My Advice:
I enjoyed the pikachu sprite and the music suited the game well, you have elements that effect pikachu suchas those three colours, but i think you need more to keep people entertained along this scroller. You have insisted that pikachu is supposed to fly but if you agree i think this game youv'e built would be alot harder and better if he couldn't fly? I am no expert at scrolling and your project isn't bad ATALL! but you could try these opinions:

1. Incorporate more enemy sprites (that could even move) instead of the colour light blue. Don't get me wrong the touching colour idea is simple and effective but can get to be slightly boring

2. Maybe give pikachu some abilities when he gets those orbs, such-as jumping higher and maybe when he gets a later orb he could then fly?

nathandrake · 2011-03-01 15:07:06

2. Put an ''if on edge, bounce'' on the red ''blob'' sprite, this will stop peolpe from cheating in your game.

3. Maybe change your x and y (up,down,left,right) velocity's to -0.5 and 0.5
And change the x and y * velocity to 0.85.

I have just updated the project with these problems sorted! big_smile

deco23 · 2011-03-01 15:16:07

Scrtach Project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Earthboundjeff/1496122

By: Earthboundjeff

Five word sum-up: Nicely done! and no glitches

Rating: 7.2/10

My Advice:
This game shows how a simple project can shine, even if it is only for a short time. I would like to offer some advice but really don't know if you should upset the game too much..
As it stands the game is easy enough, slightly addictive, short-lived but yet i think its these factors which gives the game its like-ability factor. The only advise i would offer is:

1. Maybe provide some moving enemy sprites along the Poke-tests?

2. Definitly make another!

3, And keep the witty statements at the top of the game coming!

deco23 · 2011-03-01 15:52:04

Scrtach Project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Sunrise-Moon/1578486

By: Sunrise-Moon

Five word sum-up: Literally ''Loved-it'' and excellent concept

Rating: 8.9/10

My Advice:
*Firstly, I want to state that i had played this project before you had even entered it.
*Secondly, I want to apoligise to everyone if i have under-rated it, but its just my opinion.

I feel that its these simple enough, glitch-less, clean graphiced projects with twisty concepts that do it for me in scratch.
This is the part where i offer advise but i really dont think it needs any improvements?... And i really don't think you need any..

WELL DONE smile

deco23 · 2011-03-01 16:22:20

Scrtach Project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/littlet … er/1625764

By: Littletonkslover

Five word sum-up: well made, should be continued!

Rating: 7.0/10

My Advice:
I enjoyed the music to this project it fits the clips well. Also your artwork is really good, i think your episodes will be very popular if you can keep the high standards up!
My advice would be:

1. Maybe add a wolf sound like houling to one of the scenes?

2. try make it longer if possible. (but i understand, projects like this must take some amount of time)

GOODLUCK smile

deco23 · 2011-03-01 18:30:31

Feel free to post your projects up here and have them rated by me a ''new scratcher''.

I WILL:

1. LOVE IT (regardless if it is good or bad.)

2. DOWNLOAD IT.

3. PLAY IT.

4. RATE IT.

BoltBait · 2011-03-01 19:05:28

I played your Luigi Quest, nicely done! Can't wait for more!

OK, sum this up in 5 words: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/BoltBait/1610128

Or, click any of the games in my signature...

Last edited by BoltBait (2011-03-01 19:36:24)

frank1281 · 2011-03-01 19:17:00

Hello, Can You Rate The Story Trailer For My Upcoming Game? I Know It's a Trailer and Not A Game, But Could You Anyways? Just Click The Image Below For The Link!

g8rghr · 2011-03-01 19:26:21

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/g8rghr/1618753

Max4344 · 2011-03-02 00:00:37

About to make a new version i am making but sadly no one i asked has given me Feedback
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Max4344/1565698

kayybee · 2011-03-02 00:08:37

You should rate the different parts, not just overall rating.

Necromaster · 2011-03-02 17:01:05

I have three I would like you to rate:

Zombie Apocalypse
Terminal 52
Darked

Thanks!

deco23 · 2011-03-02 18:03:43

Scrtach Project: Multiple projects

By: BoltBait

Five word sum-up: Sets the bar for scratchers!

Rating: 9.3/10

My Advice:
After looking through your ''excellent'' projects, I came to realise.... YOU are a perfect role model for other scratchers. I can see that you take time and put plenty of thought into consideration when making your projects, i admire this and feel that this should be admired by others too. I think others (including myself) should take a chapter out of your book and go all the way with projects, finish them only when they are to the brink of perfection!
A simple example of your ''aim for perfection'' would be your intro to star trek: the game, you didn't cut it short you went all the way and made it ''perfect''.

EVERYONE GO AND LOOK AT HIM, AND STUDY HIS PROJECTS smile

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