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#1 2011-01-30 11:55:09

J0j2
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The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

Basically I know that a bunch of people on scratch are ARTISTS in some way/shape/form. So here you can post pictures of your art, and people critique them.

Here's how it's going to work.

In order to post your art, you need to either come back to the post and critique another person's art, or include a critique in your post. You must submit one critique for someone else's art.

A critique is a review that can consist of
-What you like about the picture and why
-What caught your eye and why
-Suggestions on how you could enhance it
-Comments and thoughts

SO...who's ready to try it? Please post pictures, not links, but if you can't, links are fine. Preferably only 1-4 pictures per poster so not to lagg the system too much. Be considerate of the person you're critiquing.

Lets go!

Last edited by J0j2 (2011-01-30 11:57:39)


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#2 2011-01-30 12:00:30

J0j2
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/022/a/3/saturday_evening_by_j0j2-d37sd82.jpg

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/022/e/a/contemplation_by_j0j2-d37s92w.jpg

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/007/7/6/fall_months_by_j0j2-d36n8oi.jpg

Waiting for someone else to post.


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#3 2011-01-30 12:39:18

johndo77
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

This would be really cool as a TBG!


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#4 2011-01-30 12:41:05

bananaman114
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

J0j2 wrote:

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/ … 37sd82.jpg


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#5 2011-01-30 13:42:29

J0j2
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

bananaman114 wrote:

J0j2 wrote:

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/ … 37sd82.jpg


Waiting for someone else to post.

BLOOD BLOOD BLOOD!!!!!! Oh noes!  lol

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#6 2011-01-30 13:43:54

Composer
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

I'm a Artist.
   Artist of Deception.


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#7 2011-01-30 18:35:57

Blade-Edge
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

I doubt that, C
Anyway, I'll critique your first drawing, Jo
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/022/a/3/saturday_evening_by_j0j2-d37sd82.jpg
The characters are really cool and original, I like the traditional colouring, the background is nice too. The hands on the guy on the right are kind of off, like the way he's holding that knife is just weird. The clothes could use more details like a few buttons or something, and one of the legs is a bit thinner than the other. And the stabby guy seems a bit stiff. Since he's like a psychopath (I'm guessing) he should be like curving and twisted. His right arm is also a bit longer than his left.
8.5/10 It's a great drawing


http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5145/scratchycat.gif CLASSY

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#8 2011-01-30 18:49:50

FlyingHatTrick
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Registered: 2010-12-08
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Re: The Unofficial Thread of ART CRITIQUE!

I might like this~

Can someone critique me on general anatomy of this sprite before I move on to coloring it?

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/7384/skelepine.png


http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/6352/fatedstars.png

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