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#27 2010-04-12 03:01:51
Re: My Poems:
Use it 
feel free to say as urs in fronta ur gf (XD)
Ever wondered what is true love;
It is malleable as steel and Soft as dove;
its sweeter then sugar and;
Its an ever deepening curve;
You cant fell it untill you got a feel;
Of someone in your heart;
Deep inside as a seal;
Its one of the most wonderful emotion;
It can be felt only by Total Submission;
Cant be achived ever by;
Flirt or fakation;
cuz its one of the purest relation;
I am able to write this ;
As i am inlove with someone;
Her presence makes me feel;
******* fun; // instead of ***** i will find a word soon
Her eyes just masmerise me;
Cant express how beautiful is she;
She is for me is like ;
a leaf to tree;
water to sea ;
Her Cute name is ******<Put name here>
She lives in my heart;
she is my soul;
Even her name's sound;
Changes my sadness to lol;'
Today is a very special day;
Its ma sweet - sweet honeys;
sweet <your gfs age+1> th birthday;
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#28 2010-04-12 21:11:18
Re: My Poems:
Cool. Can I share one of Mine? I'm going to anyway 
It's more of a song, But OH WELL.
I started the year
Pitying myself
I Thought I'd Be alone again
But Then for once I made a friend
I just wanted to tell you
That I couldn't have asked for more
I still think that you're a wimp
Even though you're taller than me
You can't take those jokes seriously
{Sometimes things happen and I can't even
breathe
Because I've let you down
The friend I threw down on the ground
Even though I won't Admit it
You're the reason I haven't Quit it
I didn't think that anyone could show me how
You're the most inspiring person in my
life right now}
Who knew
You could feel like you were dying
You would fall over crying
You would end up lying on the earth
But before I fell you picked me up first
I want to thank you
For all the things you showed me
Even though I haven't showed it
I couldn't Live if you went away
No one understands me
No one cares about me
Is what i used to say
Sometimes I still say it now
But that was yesterday
Then I found somebody
Who Helped me up again
For the first time, For the first time
I have found A friend
{Sometimes things happen and I can't even
breathe
Because I've let you down
The friend I threw down on the ground
Even though I won't Admit it
You're the reason I haven't Quit it
I didn't think that anyone could show me how
You're the most inspiring person in my
life right now}
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#29 2010-04-12 21:15:04
- littletonkslover
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Re: My Poems:
fanofcena wrote:
Here I am going to share some of my poems :
I am closed for requests.
Currently Working on :Nothing
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why part 2 : (http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=331459#p33145)
Val day : (http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=326530#p326530)
Val day apology:(http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=324528#p324528)
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Why??????????☻
Note : I dont think most viewers on the scratch site can understand this
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Why is it so
When there is nowhere to go
No direction to row
When you are full of sorrow
There is no one to say that
Calm Down Bad times come & go
Why is it so
When you are full of tension
You are out off attention
And you lose all your perfection
There is no one
To give you motivation
Why is it so
When you are all alone
Lost in a void zone
Feeling exhausted and hopes gone
There is no one to say
Everything will be fine comon
If you find someone in the conditions above u are lucky
The pal with you that time is your best buddy
In all your friends he is the one u could say goody
Alas you realise him when you are left to nobody.
Written on : 31 January 2010
Reason : Deep Depression
Ah, I like that poem. I get depressed really easily, and that explains me. So does "Leave Out All the Rest." That song is a poem of feeling.
Anyways, 7/10.
That's the dark nature of capitalism. ~ Wonder Showzen
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#32 2010-04-13 09:10:35
Re: My Poems:
littletonkslover wrote:
fanofcena wrote:
Here I am going to share some of my poems :
I am closed for requests.
Currently Working on :Nothing
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INDEX
why part 2 : (http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=331459#p33145)
Val day : (http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=326530#p326530)
Val day apology:(http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=324528#p324528)
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Finished Stuff
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Why??????????☻
Note : I dont think most viewers on the scratch site can understand this
---
Why is it so
When there is nowhere to go
No direction to row
When you are full of sorrow
There is no one to say that
Calm Down Bad times come & go
Why is it so
When you are full of tension
You are out off attention
And you lose all your perfection
There is no one
To give you motivation
Why is it so
When you are all alone
Lost in a void zone
Feeling exhausted and hopes gone
There is no one to say
Everything will be fine comon
If you find someone in the conditions above u are lucky
The pal with you that time is your best buddy
In all your friends he is the one u could say goody
Alas you realise him when you are left to nobody.
Written on : 31 January 2010
Reason : Deep DepressionAh, I like that poem. I get depressed really easily, and that explains me. So does "Leave Out All the Rest." That song is a poem of feeling.
Anyways, 7/10.
TY ^^
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#33 2010-12-15 08:17:58
- Paddle2See
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- Posts: 1000+
Re: My Poems:
Reopened by request
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#35 2010-12-15 10:54:44
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