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#1 2010-12-13 19:32:28

wiimaster
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My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Oh yes. I have been spriting for ages, but...

Every pokemon sprite I made had some part of another pokemon in it.[/shameful]

*Ashamed*


Anyways, I think I did a good job.

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Pics%20for%20Scratch%20Forums/Bunuzzy.gif
Do you?

Meet Bunuzzy, the Snowshoe Pokemon. Its typing is Normal Ice and its abilities are Cute Charm and Thick Fat.

It is fully custom besides one thing: I copied Rattatas outline as a base (But I never actually used the sprite. Just did it by looking) And then changed it to make it different, but still vaguely Rattata like.


I really want feedback. Should I continue this madness? Or did I mess up badly?


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

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#2 2010-12-13 19:33:09

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Good  wink


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#3 2010-12-13 19:35:11

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Thanks! But... does it appear blurry to you? It does on my comp.

EDIT: Nevermind.

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-12-13 19:36:11)


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#4 2010-12-13 19:36:24

kayybee
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Cool! It looks so awesome!

BTW, you should check out the TBGs.

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#5 2010-12-13 19:36:26

kimmy123
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

wiimaster wrote:

Thanks! But... does it appear blurry to you? It does on my comp.

No.


http://i.imgur.com/Mg3TPIE.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/rgyzXV5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/685FKVd.pnghttp://24.media.tumblr.com/8678e33865664f328e1654109679cb92/tumblr_mm1qu3jGD71s8caito3_r1_250.gif

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#6 2010-12-13 19:42:51

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Thanks guys!

Is there any critique though?  hmm


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#7 2010-12-13 19:50:18

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

It is admirable for a first custom drawing

I do a little spriting myself

http://i55.tinypic.com/2bxj12.png
Here is a hula hoop I made in 30 seconds


http://www.mspaintadventures.com/storyfiles/hs2/02915.gif

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#8 2010-12-13 20:04:21

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

GlitchSprite wrote:

It is admirable for a first custom drawing

I do a little spriting myself

http://i55.tinypic.com/2bxj12.png
Here is a hula hoop I made in 30 seconds

LOLHOOPS!

Although this is my first custom PKMN sprite, I have done much more not PKMN spriting, ALL CUSTOM. Examples here and here.


I'll try and get an OI account and post my best sprites there.
Best Sprites:
Flarunt
Bunuzzy
Baball Line
Riceroll Line
Comett
Fribbit
Ninjolt
Kelporse

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-12-13 20:06:23)


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#9 2010-12-13 20:05:16

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

GlitchSprite wrote:

It is admirable for a first custom drawing

I do a little spriting myself

http://i55.tinypic.com/2bxj12.png
Here is a hula hoop I made in 30 seconds

AGH MORE RAINBOWS? Nice sprite wiimaster


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#10 2010-12-13 20:06:40

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Thanks!


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#11 2010-12-13 20:07:57

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

I like it, but the ears are messed up...


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#12 2010-12-13 20:14:14

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

recycle49 wrote:

GlitchSprite wrote:

It is admirable for a first custom drawing

I do a little spriting myself

http://i55.tinypic.com/2bxj12.png
Here is a hula hoop I made in 30 seconds

AGH MORE RAINBOWS? Nice sprite wiimaster

No my rainbow hoop would be like this
http://i53.tinypic.com/2vkc1h5.png


http://www.mspaintadventures.com/storyfiles/hs2/02915.gif

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#13 2010-12-13 20:16:33

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

MasterOfDeception wrote:

I like it, but the ears are messed up...

In what way?


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#14 2010-12-13 20:30:50

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

One of the ears seems all crumpled, just like one of dragonites wings in FR/LG.


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#15 2010-12-13 20:35:01

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

That is, IMO, the best first custom sprite that I have ever seen. My custom fakemon are horrid.

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#16 2010-12-13 20:38:11

blazerv82
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Much better than what I could ever do...I really like it. However, like MasterOfDeception said, the ears look a tad crumpled.


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#17 2010-12-13 21:31:49

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

urhungry wrote:

That is, IMO, the best first custom sprite that I have ever seen. My custom fakemon are horrid.

Thank you so much! That means alot!

Thank you all. I will try to fix the ears. Also: I am working on another custom 8D


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#18 2010-12-13 21:45:53

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

NEW CUSTOM ALERT:

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Airim.gif
Airim
Flying Ghost
The Windchime Pokemon

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Glidrift.gif
Glidrift
Flying Ghost
The Windchime Pokemon

I'm getting better quick, I'd say.


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#19 2010-12-13 22:09:10

silverninja
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

Erm..um..
Well the ears look a little corrupted

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#20 2010-12-13 22:09:43

kimmy123
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

silverninja wrote:

Erm..um..
Well the ears look a little corrupted

Yeah.


http://i.imgur.com/Mg3TPIE.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/rgyzXV5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/685FKVd.pnghttp://24.media.tumblr.com/8678e33865664f328e1654109679cb92/tumblr_mm1qu3jGD71s8caito3_r1_250.gif

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#21 2010-12-14 15:49:40

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

I am working on that already. So stop pointing it out now lol

Does anyone like the new one?


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#22 2010-12-14 15:51:36

kimmy123
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

wiimaster wrote:

I am working on that already. So stop pointing it out now lol

Does anyone like the new one?

I do  smile


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#23 2010-12-14 15:57:17

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

The colors seem to bright, and the outline needs to be non black.


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#24 2010-12-14 16:14:00

wiimaster
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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

juststickman wrote:

The colors seem to bright, and the outline needs to be non black.

Its not all black.

Thanks Kimmy


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#25 2010-12-14 16:20:50

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Re: My First Custom PKMN Sprite

You got me beat, Technic was my first custom. My first "real" custom was Charizard. Which took forever (7 straight hours).


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