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#51 2010-10-29 15:43:04
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#52 2010-10-29 15:46:42
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
werdna123 wrote:
Wow! That was amazing, you have a real talent!
Thanks! ^.^
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#53 2010-12-04 11:22:56
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
I recently finished a book written in the second person. You by Charles Benoit. (Not Scratch appropriate, contains profanity and mature content)
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#54 2010-12-04 11:39:51
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Somebody give me motivation to keep writing this.
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#55 2010-12-04 11:40:55
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Blade-Edge wrote:
helltank wrote:
Aidan wrote:
You have an IQ of 120
I have an IQ of 135. Pwnd.
Is there some online test we could take, or can you provide documentation or something?
And the chapters are too short
Maybe if you double-space it, it looks big I guess
i agree. the chapters are too short. i dont think double spacing would help.
maybe triple or quadruple spacing with bold, size 24 letters.
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#56 2010-12-04 11:48:01
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
PoDo wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
helltank wrote:
I have an IQ of 135. Pwnd.Is there some online test we could take, or can you provide documentation or something?
And the chapters are too short
Maybe if you double-space it, it looks big I guessi agree. the chapters are too short. i dont think double spacing would help.
maybe triple or quadruple spacing with bold, size 24 letters.
Actually, I've read some books where chapters are 2, 3, or even half a page. And they're a lot bigger when it's in a Word document.
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#57 2010-12-04 15:26:57
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Aidan wrote:
Somebody give me motivation to keep writing this.
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#58 2010-12-04 15:30:20
- Star_the_fox
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
I'll smack you with this frying pan otherwise. >:U
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#59 2010-12-04 15:31:15
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Star_the_fox wrote:
I'll smack you with this frying pan otherwise. >:U
*starts writing* No jk 
I meant seriously, I'm out of ideas.
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#60 2010-12-08 18:33:24
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Aidan wrote:
Aidan wrote:
Somebody give me motivation to keep writing this.
More bump
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#61 2010-12-08 18:39:21
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
If you want motivation, here's what you need: plot twist.
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#62 2010-12-08 18:43:41
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Kileymeister wrote:
If you want motivation, here's what you need: plot twist.
Pretty much the whole thing is a plot twist.
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#63 2010-12-08 19:57:07
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Aidan wrote:
Kileymeister wrote:
If you want motivation, here's what you need: plot twist.
Pretty much the whole thing is a plot twist.
Well, then:
Big Plot Twist: The whole thing wasn't a plot twist!
Eh, I got nothing.
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#64 2010-12-08 23:24:21
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Keep writing. You DON'T, want to disapoint me. I will make you lose the game... WHOOPS, too late 
"My Language Arts teacher beat Chuck Norris up." -12three
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#65 2010-12-12 11:25:45
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Stay tuned. I'm writing another chapter.
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#66 2010-12-12 11:51:06
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Chapter 4 added.
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#67 2010-12-12 14:03:25
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Chapter 5 added. I'm really getting into writing this story, but I think I'm done for the day. Enjoy.
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#68 2010-12-13 20:01:26
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Buump.
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#69 2010-12-13 20:09:12
- MasterOfDeception
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Keep writing. You DON'T, want to disapoint me. I will make you lose the game... WHOOPS, too late
^Repost^
"My Language Arts teacher beat Chuck Norris up." -12three
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#70 2010-12-14 17:13:27
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
MasterOfDeception wrote:
Keep writing. You DON'T, want to disapoint me. I will make you lose the game... WHOOPS, too late
^Repost^
I will, I will. Just not now.
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#71 2010-12-15 17:52:40
- MasterOfDeception
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Bump beacuse I love this story.
"My Language Arts teacher beat Chuck Norris up." -12three
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#72 2010-12-31 11:44:47
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Chapter 6 added 
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#73 2010-12-31 11:56:25
- MasterOfDeception
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Re: When Paranoia Sets In
Please add more.
"My Language Arts teacher beat Chuck Norris up." -12three
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#74 2010-12-31 11:58:14
Re: When Paranoia Sets In
MasterOfDeception wrote:
Please add more.
I will when I feel like it -.-'
But I'm glad you like it.
I just don't feel like working on it now. I usually formulate the chapter in my mind, then put it down later. Right now I'll spend some time thinking.
Sorry bro.
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#75 2010-12-31 12:05:49
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Aidan wrote:
MasterOfDeception wrote:
Please add more.
I will when I feel like it -.-'
But I'm glad you like it.
I just don't feel like working on it now. I usually formulate the chapter in my mind, then put it down later. Right now I'll spend some time thinking.
Sorry bro.
Same with me. I was going to post mz storz but actuallz i cant find it
go figure Ä
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