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#1 2010-11-15 17:38:14

shugocharafan88
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New fanfic

Even though i was exhausted, I kept running. I glanced at Russia, he looked straight ahead and took my hand. I stopped for about 2 seconds and asked him,
"Is she still chasing us?"
"I don't think so."
He saw the scared expression on my face and placed his gloved hand on my cheek.
"Are you okay?"
I looked into his deep purple eyes for a minute or two and burst into tears. I threw my arms around him and he went,
"Yuuiki-chan, what's wrong?"
"I just wish Belarus would leave us alone!!! I wish we didn't have to run away!!!" I cried.
"Shhh, baby, she'll hear us. Let's find somewhere to sleep tonight."
We walked about 2 feet and then he quickly swept me off my feet and carried me to this barn, where we slept. It was so freezing cold, and we just cuddled there for an hour. Then I saw a black figure at the door.
"Married, married, married, Russia, let's get married." the figure hoarsley whispered.
I threw my arms around Russia and whispered, "She's here..."
The figure walked in the door and said, "I found you."
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What do you think?
*EDIT*
And NO I AM NOT ASKING FOR FLAME SO STOP SAYING THAT

Last edited by shugocharafan88 (2010-11-15 17:45:00)

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#2 2010-11-15 17:42:55

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Re: New fanfic

Er...
Do you want us to revise it or give suggestions or something

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#3 2010-11-15 17:44:00

shugocharafan88
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Re: New fanfic

rufflebee wrote:

Er...
Do you want us to revise it or give suggestions or something

Sure. Give suggestions. What do you think?

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#4 2010-11-15 17:44:29

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Re: New fanfic

I like it http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e203/lamaurt/blushing.gif

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#5 2010-11-15 17:45:25

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Re: New fanfic

kimmy123 wrote:

I like it http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e203/ … ushing.gif

Thankies! http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e203/ … ushing.gif

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#6 2010-11-15 18:04:03

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Re: New fanfic

steppenwulf wrote:

You're just asking for flame  hmm

True.
Anyway, it's a pretty good story.

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#7 2010-11-15 18:35:13

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Re: New fanfic

lol

But now you like Russia? Make up your mind.  tongue

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#8 2010-11-15 18:37:43

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Re: New fanfic

Watch out for the Tonks Smash
Anyway, it's short and I can't really say anything about it because it hardly goes into depth

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#9 2010-11-15 18:54:32

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Re: New fanfic

Belarus is creepy. Very creepy.

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#10 2010-11-15 19:29:17

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Re: New fanfic

kimmy123 wrote:

I like it http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e203/ … ushing.gif

+1 :D

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#11 2010-11-15 21:43:06

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Re: New fanfic

Some of the people posting here have been inching on breaking the TOU and the Miscellaneous guidelines.

Remember, the Terms of Use call for us to be respectful and keep the site friendly, and there are additional Guidelines to the Miscellaneous forums.

To quote Lightnin: It's up to everyone who posts in Miscellaneous to help keep things friendly and respectful. Please recall the above rules and let's keep the forums friendly and respectful as the way they're supposed to be.

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#12 2010-11-16 07:24:16

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Re: New fanfic

PW132 wrote:

...I didn't really mean too....In fact, I was saying we didn't act well the first time. (Those posts were deleted) After I was shortly banned I was trying to get it to stop...

The best way, you (and everybody in the forums) can help, is to keep things on-topic and friendly.  Now, please, no more spam.  If you have something to add about the story, go right ahead.  Other than that, please don't post here.

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#13 2010-11-16 07:26:28

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Re: New fanfic

Sorry.....

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#14 2010-11-16 07:40:49

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Re: New fanfic

...uhh This seems a lot like Harry Potter  big_smile  Any way you should add more to it, why are they running  hmm

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#15 2010-11-16 13:14:45

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Re: New fanfic

How does it seem like Harry Potter in the slightest?

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#16 2010-11-16 16:56:16

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Re: New fanfic

maail wrote:

...uhh This seems a lot like Harry Potter  big_smile  Any way you should add more to it, why are they running  hmm

Because Belarus is chasing them and she wants to become 1 with Russia.

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#17 2010-11-16 17:03:07

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Re: New fanfic

http://oi37.tinypic.com/6qcxhu.jpg


Let's get married...married...married...married...married.......

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#18 2010-11-16 17:12:25

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Re: New fanfic

littletonkslover wrote:

http://oi37.tinypic.com/6qcxhu.jpg


Let's get married...married...married...married...married.......

AAAHHHHH! *JUMPS INTO RUSSIA'S ARMS*

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#19 2010-11-16 17:14:49

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Re: New fanfic

littletonkslover wrote:

http://oi37.tinypic.com/6qcxhu.jpg


Let's get married...married...married...married...married.......

lol

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#20 2010-11-16 17:15:35

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Re: New fanfic

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

http://oi37.tinypic.com/6qcxhu.jpg


Let's get married...married...married...married...married.......

AAAHHHHH! *JUMPS INTO RUSSIA'S ARMS*

Yeah because I didn't expect that reply.


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#21 2010-11-16 17:21:43

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Re: New fanfic

littletonkslover wrote:

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

http://oi37.tinypic.com/6qcxhu.jpg


Let's get married...married...married...married...married.......

AAAHHHHH! *JUMPS INTO RUSSIA'S ARMS*

Yeah because I didn't expect that reply.


Imagine Germany when he finds out you're cheating on him.

*cries and runs back and forth*

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#22 2010-11-16 17:24:24

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Re: New fanfic

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

shugocharafan88 wrote:

AAAHHHHH! *JUMPS INTO RUSSIA'S ARMS*

Yeah because I didn't expect that reply.


Imagine Germany when he finds out you're cheating on him.

*cries and runs back and forth*

Well you should do something pronto.

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#23 2010-11-16 17:25:43

shugocharafan88
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Re: New fanfic

littletonkslover wrote:

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

Yeah because I didn't expect that reply.


Imagine Germany when he finds out you're cheating on him.

*cries and runs back and forth*

Well you should do something pronto.

AWW U MAD AT ME?

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#24 2010-11-16 18:00:50

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Re: New fanfic

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

shugocharafan88 wrote:

*cries and runs back and forth*

Well you should do something pronto.

AWW U MAD AT ME?

I'm not mad, but
http://www.gymidiots.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/son-i-am-disappoint.gif
(Sorry, I couldn't resist.  lol )

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#25 2010-11-16 18:01:40

shugocharafan88
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Re: New fanfic

Aidan wrote:

shugocharafan88 wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:


Well you should do something pronto.

AWW U MAD AT ME?

I'm not mad, but
http://www.gymidiots.com/wp-content/upl … ppoint.gif
(Sorry, I couldn't resist.  lol )

*giggles cutely*

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