Scratch

I awoke with a start. I wondered where I was. I had no recollection of how I got here, lying in the forest. This forest I was in, the birds, grasshoppers, deer, and many more animals surrounded me now. A chill swept through me, amplified tenfold by the slight breeze. I stood up, looking around me, trying to see in the darkness. It was nigh immpossible without any moonlight. So I waited for my eyes to adjust. They did after a short while, allowing me to see what looked to be a path. It was better than staying where I was, waiting for something.
  I walked down the path, and started to hear something that sounded like water. A few more paces and that's what it turned out to be. A small line of water, not quite a river, but not a stream either, was to my right, and I realiszed I was in dire need of something to drink. I walked over, bent down to get some, and that's when it happened. The cloud cover broke, letting the moon show off its light. I could clearly see my reflection in the water.

This is just the start of a 3 part series I have started to write, ironicly, on my iPod. The first part's name is still being decided, but the overall story is called Orb. I realize that some things are mis-spelt, blame the iPod keyboard. Anyway, some feed back as to what you like/dislike about it is wanted. It's almost my first story. Man, wall of text. Sorry.

(i'm much farther than this, btw, Dang Ipod keyboard...)

Last edited by blazerv82 (2010-11-13 23:22:50)