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#1 2010-11-11 16:44:50
I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
My high school does a senoir graduation project, which was based on an essay that we wrote last year. My topic was nuclear power, and how they are competitive in the energy market and that we should start to make more of them, and that kind of thing. Anyways, for my project I have made a website (still in progress), and I would appreciate it if you guys could give it a once over and see if I should add anything, major spelling issues, that sort of thing. This would help me out a lot.
Now, that wasn't what you expected, was it? 
Linky: NukePower
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#3 2010-11-11 16:51:04
Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
I was thinking it had t do with blowwing the Earth up, and i am right MAHAH, ill read the linky thing
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#4 2010-11-11 17:10:39
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Thats some tence stuff, i found it interesting we cant penitrate the core of wow... what about with this baby... 
They only built 2, one crashed and iv seen the other one, it so big its the size of the warhouse it was stored in
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#5 2010-11-11 17:12:59
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Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
Change the home page.
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#6 2010-11-12 12:39:53
Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
recycle49 wrote:
...its the size of the warhouse it was...
warehouse. sorry I couldn't help it! XD
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#8 2010-11-12 13:05:51
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the page http://nukepower.webs.com/otherdesigns.htm has a bit of repetition in the 2nd last paragraph
The way it refuels means that it only has to shut down once every six years for routine maintenance, assuming that nothing causes it to shut down early. This is very good, as it will produce energy continuously during those six years. A traditional reactor is stopped once a month (already mentioned before) refueled and then the reaction must be started again, something that can take quite a while. All of this downtime is something that the PBMR does not have, which means that it is much more cost effective (said before too), something that the nuclear reactors need.
otherwise, it's very good 
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#9 2010-11-12 14:16:37
Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
That's a good start. 
I'm making a website right now, and it's SO boring.
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#10 2010-11-12 16:23:28
Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
LS97 wrote:
the page http://nukepower.webs.com/otherdesigns.htm has a bit of repetition in the 2nd last paragraph
The way it refuels means that it only has to shut down once every six years for routine maintenance, assuming that nothing causes it to shut down early. This is very good, as it will produce energy continuously during those six years. A traditional reactor is stopped once a month (already mentioned before) refueled and then the reaction must be started again, something that can take quite a while. All of this downtime is something that the PBMR does not have, which means that it is much more cost effective (said before too), something that the nuclear reactors need.
otherwise, it's very good
Thanks, i will fix that.
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#11 2010-11-12 16:56:00
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Nicely done! I very much like the brief intros to the articles. They help the reader get a sense of what will be discussed so they can choose where to dive in.
There's a small typo in the title of the first one - it says "Terrorism? Is is a threat."
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#12 2010-11-12 18:04:05
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Lightnin wrote:
Nicely done! I very much like the brief intros to the articles. They help the reader get a sense of what will be discussed so they can choose where to dive in.
There's a small typo in the title of the first one - it says "Terrorism? Is is a threat."
Why thanks Lightnin. I never would have noticed that, as I didn't check the titles for spell check.
Thanks!!
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#13 2010-11-12 18:13:40
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Re: I need help. (No, its not what your thinking.)
svinnik wrote:
I was thinking that you had something to do with nuclear power.
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#15 2010-11-13 14:39:40
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Okay everyone! I just put in comment systems on all of the articles pages, so I need all of you to go make comments and give ratings. I would prefer comments that discuss the articles and the information. While not mandatory for my project I bleieve that this will help alot. Thanks!
Link here
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#16 2010-11-14 14:29:02
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#17 2010-11-14 14:52:55
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Nuke Power! Terribly underrated, very dangerous (aren't all factory's?), Incredibly efficient.
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