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#1 2010-11-06 20:38:51

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A song me and my friends wrote.

It was a normal day.
Then my friend told me I could be in her band.
And I wrote this song...

When I woke up the sun was shining.
Nothing much to do.
I'd rather be with you, for now,
But I don't know how.
You drive me crazy, I can't believe your so lazy even though your the one for me.
So I wanna see your face again
I can't lose you again
So don't leave me
Don't leave me.

That's only part of one of my songs.

Here's another:

Just a small town girl, cute as a pearl.
Just a city boy raised in south Detroit
Took a train going anywhere at twelve o' clock midnight
Let's run away
and go far away
There's nowhere to stay
But we'll see faces
and go to new places
so let's see the sights
on cool winter nights
and warm city lights together.
And I need you
you need me
I need you
you need me
I don't know another boy (don't know another girl)
who's the one for me
(the one for me)
So don't leave me
because
I need you
you need me
I need you
you need me
I need you
you need meeeeeee.

That was only the first (and maybe second) verse, and the chorus.

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#2 2010-11-06 20:40:33

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Bump.

Anybody want to hear my other songs?

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#3 2010-11-06 20:42:27

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Just a small town girl
Just a city boy raised in south Detroit
Took a train going anywhere

D:

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#4 2010-11-06 20:44:45

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

You got the first part of the second song from Don't stop Beliving by Journey, didn't you?  tongue

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#5 2010-11-06 20:45:09

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

JeanTheFox wrote:

You got the first part of the second song from Don't stop Beliving by Journey, didn't you?  tongue

My friend wrote that part.

EDIT:
That's... Erm...
Strange...

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#6 2010-11-06 20:45:49

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

JeanTheFox wrote:

You got the first part of the second song from Don't stop Beliving by Journey, didn't you?  tongue

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//check out what i'm listening to// | //listen to my friend's radicool music//

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#7 2010-11-06 20:53:54

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

I actually had an old friend in an enemy band, then they broke up.

But here's another one of my songs.


When the towers of life come falling down
The world seems
To go round and round
You touch the ground
And hear the sound
Of the world
Going round
and
round.

The air
Turns to stone
I can't bear
To be alone
Soon I'll be
Here with you.

I'll search
Everywhere
To find
You.
There's nowhere
To go.
Nowhere
to stop.
No one to stop me
so I'll be with you soon.


That's only a few verses and the chorus.

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#8 2010-11-06 20:54:10

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

South Detroit FTW!!

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#9 2010-11-06 20:55:25

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

recycle49 wrote:

South Detroit FTW!![/offtopic]

About my songs...

Would anyone care to give me advice or say what they like about my songs?
Or even make the music for it?

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#10 2010-11-06 21:00:06

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

recycle49 wrote:

South Detroit FTW!![/offtopic]

About my songs...

Would anyone care to give me advice or say what they like about my songs?
Or even make the music for it?

The lyrics are good, but it is hard to give an opinion without the music part.  lol

I might try to make the music, but not right now.

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#11 2010-11-06 21:02:59

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

fire219 wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

recycle49 wrote:

South Detroit FTW!![/offtopic]

About my songs...

Would anyone care to give me advice or say what they like about my songs?
Or even make the music for it?

The lyrics are good, but it is hard to give an opinion without the music part.  lol

I might try to make the music, but not right now.

Thanks.

Me and my friend's band (which has over 13 people in it) wrote it and made lyrics.

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#12 2010-11-07 04:41:19

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Awesome lyrics!

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#13 2010-11-07 08:21:59

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

Would anyone care to give me advice or say what they like about my songs?
Or even make the music for it?

As for the first song, the lyrics seem a bit generic, like any ordinary love song. Love songs are usually inspired by true love, and it doesn't seem like you were inspired by any when you wrote it. You don't need to worry about love right now anyway  tongue

The second song is stolen and rushed xD

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#14 2010-11-07 19:38:47

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Cool lyrics!

and so then sydney came out of the cobwebs

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#15 2010-11-07 21:41:50

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

I don't think you can call yourself a band until you guys are all playing instruments
No, wait, you can be a boyband lol

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#16 2010-11-07 21:45:35

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

>.<  <- This is my face.

Yawn, another boring text signature. I should really make something better.

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#17 2010-11-08 02:57:04

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Your band sounds awesome. If you're ever performing in Singapore, let me know  wink

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#18 2010-11-08 04:27:36

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

JeanTheFox wrote:

You got the first part of the second song from Don't stop Beliving by Journey, didn't you?  tongue

My friend wrote that part.

EDIT:
That's... Erm...
Strange...

LOLFAIL

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#19 2010-11-08 07:01:22

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Blade-Edge wrote:

I don't think you can call yourself a band until you guys are all playing instruments
No, wait, you can be a boyband lol

:facepalm:
I'm one of the few boys in the band.
And we have a guitarist and keyboard player.

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#20 2010-11-08 08:18:30

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Re: A song me and my friends wrote.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

Blade-Edge wrote:

I don't think you can call yourself a band until you guys are all playing instruments
No, wait, you can be a boyband lol

:facepalm:
I'm one of the few boys in the band.
And we have a guitarist and keyboard player.

I don't think you got teh "it's funneh 'cause it's true" lulz xD

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