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Here is a story I made up! I hope you like it....

Chapter One

The boy hid in fear of the evil man. If the man found him, he was doomed. But the boy wouldn't let that cruel man get to him. He couldn't. Every last bit of his families freedom was hanging on his success.
He heard the unkindly sound of the man coming up the long stairwell which the boy had just ran.
"Come here you horrible brat! The toilets need washing! And the rooms need sweeping!" The man yelled with his German accent.

But lets just stop right here. None of this was really happening. Or at least not all of it.
You see, I am that boy. And my name is Austin Fann. I am a slave here at the home of the cruel man, Mr. Locket. I am not really dependent on my family, because I have none! All I have is my brother, Noah.
As I walked gloomily down the long stairway, I wished I could be with my mom again. I remember her vaguely. She had blond hair, just like me. Her I eyes were bright blue.
But that was all. She had died when he was only a two year old, or at least that's what Mr. Locket had said.
I as so wrapped up in the fond memories of my mother, that I didn't notice Mr. Lockets evil and harsh curses.
I was never going to escape this place. Never...

Thats just a teaser! What do you think?

Last edited by ProgrammingFreak (2010-11-02 10:53:28)