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#26 2010-10-25 16:07:24
- littletonkslover
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- Registered: 2008-12-12
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Re: Critique my Poem?
08jackt wrote:
I was expecting emo from you monks.
nice job.
I actually like writing a great variety of things. Romance(kinda, I still think it's kinda gross and corny XD), action, adventure, haiku, inspirational, dramatic....
But my greatest achievement is in speeches. And no, not just my Scratch ones. I've improved a lot since then.
That's the dark nature of capitalism. ~ Wonder Showzen
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#27 2010-10-25 16:17:57
- Kileymeister
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- Registered: 2008-04-17
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Re: Critique my Poem?
samurai768 wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
There are some words I don't understand
Amaritesu, for oneAmaterasu is a character from a game.
I thought she was the Shinto Sun Goddess...
Boy, my History teacher sure got that wrong.
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#28 2010-10-25 16:25:10
- littletonkslover
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- Registered: 2008-12-12
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Critique my Poem?
Kileymeister wrote:
samurai768 wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
There are some words I don't understand
Amaritesu, for oneAmaterasu is a character from a game.
I thought she was the Shinto Sun Goddess...
Boy, my History teacher sure got that wrong.
Well, she is.
Amaterasu IS the sun goddess in Okami.
That's the dark nature of capitalism. ~ Wonder Showzen
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