Scratch

I am going to make a movie on Scratch, but I decided to make a book version of it on Scratch. So can you tell me if you like my style of writing? Lawl, thanks.
(P.S. I haven't thought of a name yet. XD)

Scate Rockman was a penguin (yesh, in Club Penguin) and he was a tour guide. Everyday, except on weekends, he gave tours to people who visited the island. He put on his slightly worn hat and walked up to the door.
His puffle, Bentley, followed him.
"No, boy. You can't come to work with me," said Scate with a slight chuckle. Bentley gave a small squeak to show he understood.
Scate opened the door, and walked towards the Ski Village. When he arrived, he saw his boss.
"Hey, boss," Scate said promptly.
"Ah, call me Bob." beamed his boss.
"Alright. Hey, Bob." Scate corrected himself.
"Nah, you can call me boss." chortled Bob. "Anyway, there are a couple tourists over there. If you do this tour good, you can have a day-off tomorrow."
Scate nodded and walked up to the mumbling tourists.
"Hello," said Scate. A silence started. "I'm Scate. I will be your tour guide for today."
Scate stopped talking, expecting someone to ask something, but nobody said anything.
"Alright, right this way!"
They started at the beach, then they went to the dock, but they ended up in a phoning facility.
"This is the Everyday Phoning Facility." explained Scate. "A couple months ago, it used to be a Sports Shop, but after a strange popcorn accident, the shop became a phoning facility."
"Why are there cameras here?" asked a bald penguin in a turtleneck.
A penguin in a bowler hat coughed in the background.
"I actually don't know." Scate replied.
The bald penguin's tone when he asked the question was suspicious. He didn't blame him, this room was a bit mysterious.
"And so that's the end of our tour!" smiled Scate. "So, please exit to the left. And this tour is free, by the way. You can get some souvenirs at the tour guide counter." recited Scate. He said this after every tour.
The tourists followed Scate out, and then left, except for the penguin in the bowler hat.
"Um, may I help you?" asked Scate.
"I'm Barker...Chris Barker." said the penguin. He took off his hat, and revealed short brown hair. "You seem to know a lot of the island," he smiled.
"Yeah." answered Scate simply. He couldn't think of anything else to say.
"You would be a perfect recruit for our agency." said the penguin named Chris.
"Cool, um...what kind of agency is it?" mumbled Scate.
"A secret agency." replied Chris.

Lawl, that's the beginning of it. Thanks for reading. XD