Recently, I was watching the Fred movie on Nick. They totally butchered a great online show! When I was watching, I thought "*scoffs*! I could do WAY better!
So, I'm writing an MHM movie!
The plot:
The movie opens with a rock version of both MHM themes.
It starts showing Mr Happy Man at his birth center. Back then he actually was happy, and was a bright, outgoing child. When he got older, he met the narrator, and the two became best friends.
When MHM was 18, him and the narrator signed a contract with TheExplodingCheez, and they were to become a Scratch sensation!
MHM was VERY excited. But one day, he was walking along, and he fell into a rabbit hole. Then some evil scientists messed with his brain, and made it so he was REALLY angry (Ride The Lightning by Metallica is playing while this is happening).
MHM comes out of the rabbit hole, with a horrible attitude. He then realizes, that he signed the TV show contract, so he's going to have to do the show with his new anger.
Then a MHM clip show starts. (In the middle of it will be the day The Valentine's Special got flagged, and after that the clip show will continue) The clip show will capture some fan favorite scenes from MHM.
After, the clip show is done MHM angrily stomps up to his room, and goes into bed, and falls asleep. While he is asleep, the narrator gets executives at NASA to send MHM to the moon. MHM wakes up in a spaceship, on his way to space.
MHM is REALLY REALLY ticked off. He does multiple suicide attempts, by jumping out of the spaceship, but they don't work because the narrator keeps using MHM's time travel abilities. When MHM realizes that it's not going to work, he sits down with a bag of potato chips (those float in the air, which means MHM is going to absolutely hate the ride in space).
A few minutes later, Liam pops out out of nowhere. MHM is confused, because Liam was kicked out of the show. Than Liam explains everything, and Liam tries to make conversation with MHM about his pony obsession, annoying MHM in the process. Later, Liam realizes that there is a computer and wi-fi in the spaceship. So he shows MHM, the time when he got cost a ticket off the show.
Liam keeps on pestering MHM, until, two months later, they finally reach the moon. MHM and Liam come out the spaceship, while fitting music is playing. They get lost in space multiple times, and MHM has to listen to Liam, while the float in space. Liam even throws a golf ball on the moon (left by Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin), and it knocks MHM out.
About a year later, MHM and Liam come back, with MHM vowing to kill the narrator. This experience makes him start having a more positive attitude about the show, thinking "This really stinks, but at least I'm not on the moon with Liam".
Three days after MHM and Liam's return, the next episode appears, with no reference to the trip. Like it never happened.
Than the credits play with some of TheExplodingCheez's "TEC Music" in the background. In the middle it stops with MHM in a spaceship, about to be sent to Mars. MHM screams "Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!". Than the credits continue,
If you got this far thank you for reading all that. That is the plot for the MHM movie. Please give me feedback and suggestions on improving it! Oh, and TheExplodingCheez hasn't approved of this YET, but when he gets my comment, he might. So, tell me what you thought and give me suggestions!
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kimmy123 wrote:
Nice plot, this would make a great movie
Thank you!
Oh, and TheExplodingCheez says he's got many ideas for an MHM movie, but he might use mine if he liked them. So I gave him the link to this topic.
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After he signed the contract and is mad and remembers he signed it for the first time:
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]
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soupoftomato wrote:
After he signed the contract and is mad and remembers he signed it for the first time:
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]
When he signed the contract, he was actually happy! Otherwise, he wouldn't have signed it.
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soupoftomato wrote:
After he signed the contract and is mad and remembers he signed it for the first time:
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]
Although, it would be a good idea otherwise.
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sanddude wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
After he signed the contract and is mad and remembers he signed it for the first time:
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]When he signed the contract, he was actually happy! Otherwise, he wouldn't have signed it.
No, after he fell down the whole, he come back up and remembers he signed it.
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soupoftomato wrote:
sanddude wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
After he signed the contract and is mad and remembers he signed it for the first time:
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]When he signed the contract, he was actually happy! Otherwise, he wouldn't have signed it.
No, after he fell down the whole, he come back up and remembers he signed it.
Ahhhhh... sorry.
But when he came back out of the hole, it was way before the heart-head, the pony people, etc.
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sanddude wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
sanddude wrote:
When he signed the contract, he was actually happy! Otherwise, he wouldn't have signed it.No, after he fell down the whole, he come back up and remembers he signed it.
Ahhhhh... sorry.
But when he came back out of the hole, it was way before the heart-head, the pony people, etc.
"No one ever said this show made sense"
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Here is version that fixed the before everything.
Mr. HappyMan: How does this even make any logical sense!?! I mean seriously, I was created by you and now I signed a contract with you?
Narrator: No one ever said this show made sense. Remember when you had a heart-head, or popped out of an Easter egg, or sang about hating me, or we gave you a new car, or Liam became king of the pony people, or-
Mr. HappyMan: WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN?!?!?
Narrator: Moving on . . .
Mr. HappyMan: WHATEVER! Let's just get the pilot overwith.
Narrator: Here's your script.
[picture of a really long script]
[cut to camera crew applauding for finishing]
Narrator: I can't believe you remembered your lines.
[cut to first episode]
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Hmmmm..... Sounds coo. Might want to talk about a collab with cheez.
-12three--
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Last edited by 12three (2010-09-27 19:40:37)
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Hey, sanddude? If TEC accepts this, could I help with the script?
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BaVB wrote:
In my opinion, it's funny because he's always mad and we don't know why. So I think we should leave it that way.
Good point. I guess we'll see how it turns out.
-12three-
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fire219 wrote:
If this gets made, it would be awesome!
Totally.
-12three-
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banana500 wrote:
I'd make "Mr. HappyMan: The Musical".
It would totally be Broadway-worthy.
That's a good idea.
Maybe every song a parody?
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soupoftomato wrote:
banana500 wrote:
I'd make "Mr. HappyMan: The Musical".
It would totally be Broadway-worthy.That's a good idea.
Maybe every song a parody?
Maybe MHM expressing his secret plan to kill the narrator through song. That would give it five stars right there.
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It was quite interesting, though with a few random parts, even for MHM, like those alien things messing with his brains in a rabbit hole, lol.
The other part, is that he should be ACCIDENTALLY sent to space, like he was tricked to going to the NASA place by somebody (Liam, perhaps, because he wanted to talk to him, "alone" lol), and so was sent off into the spaceship. The other way, is the Narrator actually FAILS at his god abilities; He accidentally sends MHM inside a spaceship (where the original astronauts get kicked/escape out), and can't get him back for some reason. There should be an overall good deep theme throughout the story to make it worth-while.
That's my two-cents
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It took two months to get to the moon?
http://www.universetoday.com/13562/how- … -the-moon/
NASA did it in 8 hours, 35 minutes.
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what-the wrote:
It took two months to get to the moon?
http://www.universetoday.com/13562/how- … -the-moon/
NASA did it in 8 hours, 35 minutes.
Oh yeah, that's one thing I forgot. The 2 months and 1 year is pretty long XD. But you COULD have it to where this particular spaceship was going to be the first going to Mars or something .
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