Scratch

I never had any thing like a script put down for my series, so here we go. I'm still not revealing all of it yet, but here's an intro like thing with me as the only character with a name. Anyway, imagine Eddsworld mixed with Ghostbusters and Tron. That would be this.

Characters (in this tiny bit of script.)
Peter- Me. Durr hurr hurr.
Guywithnonameyet- Placeholder name, I have one of my friends in mind for this part. Not anyone active on Scratch, he's one I have IRL.

Camera fades in to a door. It's a glass door, like one found in an office building. Outside is a normal city block, average newspaper stands, average guy shaking the stand, average guy choking the guy shaking the stand and throwing him into a dumpster.

Guywithnonameyet walks in casually. he has [insert hair color here] hair, average height, wearing a black T-shirt with a patch with a Impossible Triangle and another with the initials [letter] [letter]. He walks over to the front desk, where Peter has sunk his head onto the desk. He has the same uniform.

GUYWITHNONAMEYET: Hello, Peter, how's it going?

Peter slowly brings his head up. He has rings under his eyes.

PETER: I want... to tie someone... to a stake... and burn it... and watch as he... slowly... painfully... dies.

Camera cuts to Guywithnonameyet's face. His expression is blank. He then smiles.

GUYWITHNONAMEYET: Okay, tell me how that goes, bye!

He then walks away to another door.

Anyway, that's all I have so far, give me feedback, and this is probably the wrong place for this, if it is, move the thing, END Of posT.