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samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:17:21

I'm writing songs for a present for one of my friends, but I am a complete weirdo when it comes to songs. They used to be so cheesy when I was little. Let's just say... depressing rap sung by a little girl does NOT work.

If I can get a couple words then that would be awesome. I can't really say in the CD "Credit to many people I met off the internet" so it can't be more then inspiration xD

When I was little I wrote a song about graffiti, and it's actually pretty good. So here's the album so far:

1. Graffiti

Thanks!

PS: I can't listen to my iPod right now for inspiration. My little sister is listening *cough* ow my ears *cough* and singing along.

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samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:31:13

Bumping since this got buried so quickly.

rufflebee · 2010-09-12 14:32:28

I rap. I'm a very skilled rapper, actually. Not to brag tongue
Er, I dunno. I can't really suggest things for other people to rap/sing/write/anything about, because they're all supposed to be ways for the writer to express themselves tongue

This DID get buried very quickly. Like, insanely quickly o_O

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ThePCKid · 2010-09-12 14:33:03

*squeak*
Yes people, that's *squeak*, not bump.

djm111 · 2010-09-12 14:39:06

What sort of theme do you want the lyrics based around? (Unless you want us to just give random lyrics)

militarydudes · 2010-09-12 14:40:48

Whatever you do, don't sing about eggmen or a walrus. then it should be fine smile

samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:41:31

djm111 wrote:
What sort of theme do you want the lyrics based around? (Unless you want us to just give random lyrics)

I either want it to be about being happy, just basically lighthearted. Graffiti is the only weird-ish song.

rufflebee · 2010-09-12 14:43:21

militarydudes wrote:
Whatever you do, don't sing about eggmen or a walrus. then it should be fine

I am the eggman; They are the eggman.
I am the walrus!
GOO GOO G'JOOB.

Uh, so, yeah, samurai, we need ideas to give you ideas. Any particular theme for your album? tongue

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samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:46:39

rufflebee wrote:
militarydudes wrote:
Whatever you do, don't sing about eggmen or a walrus. then it should be fine
I am the eggman; They are the eggman.
I am the walrus!
GOO GOO G'JOOB.

Uh, so, yeah, samurai, we need ideas to give you ideas. Any particular theme for your album?
LIEK OMG MAKE IT LIKE PINK FLOYD'S "THE WALL"

Um, you know the song "Do you Believe in Magic?" and "Bottle of Sunshine"? I want the songs to sorta be like that.

Silentstar · 2010-09-12 14:50:47

gosh I wish they didnt take all the good songs! Anyway here you are!

Trying my best to play along
This is why I'm singing this happy song
I am usually pesstimisic
now I am optimistic

That Bites right!XD
Here is the real thing:
You have been there forever
Trying your best through every endeavor
I know without you I wouldn't be anything today
Because your the reason I wanted to stay
__________ I've been trying my best to keep moving on
Person's Name
But your grip is tighter than iron
Your the reason I've wanted to stay
Just on another day

Inspiration Blam!!!!

Silentstar · 2010-09-12 14:52:16

It Bites all of it probably..When I was little I made up a song and I sung it in front of the whole class. it bit when I looked back at it.
Mama mama please dont leave me
Mama mama please dont leave me
Something like that is what I can procurr

samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:52:24

This will probably make me sound like a big DIsney-Nerd, but yesterday Selena Gomez's "A Year Without Rain" inspired me to make this for my friends.

Silentstar · 2010-09-12 14:53:59

Im more of the fan for sad and pesstimistic songs:
How To Save A Life
Temporary Home

Happiness doesn't come to my brain easily

samurai768 · 2010-09-12 14:58:31

I also like songs that to most people, make no sense at all xD Like "I'm Blue" or "Boom Boom Pow"

samurai768 · 2010-09-12 15:06:38

*squeak*

lol

rufflebee · 2010-09-12 15:12:50

I, personally, get my inspiration from staring at a blank, white, wall in silence.
I doubt that would work for anyone else, though tongue

militarydudes · 2010-09-12 15:17:06

samurai768 wrote:
*squeak*

Did you step on a mouse?

iamrpk · 2010-09-12 15:21:05

Here's some inspiration lol

I'm rhymin'
At the wrong timin'
I'm a poet
And I sure know it

I'm walkin' down the street
Starein' at mah feet
I try to make a rap
But it's a real piece of c**p

I wish
I could be a fish
And eat a big dish
I can't rhyme this line

Wait!
I just did!
This song is kinda stupid
I like the number eight

Oh well
This song sure was swell
I guess this is my farewell!
Bye

Sunrise-Moon · 2010-09-12 15:23:28

I know! A song about a spaceman that travels through all sorts of galaxies, looking for his home!

sanddude · 2010-09-12 16:03:05

Use the La-Di-Da iPod touch/iPhone app.

samurai768 · 2010-09-12 16:36:11

rufflebee wrote:
I, personally, get my inspiration from staring at a blank, white, wall in silence.
I doubt that would work for anyone else, though

It works for me.

sanddude wrote:
Use the La-Di-Da iPod touch/iPhone app.

I ain't got no I-Phone [/parrygrip]

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