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So what do you think? Do you like it?
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m71134 wrote:
I like it! The whole magic bath-thing is a really creative idea. When does this story take place?
2010.
And thank you very much.
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Anyone else?
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TL;DR.
Quick summary, please?
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kiwi95 wrote:
Not bad. Would make a good kids book.
Thank you very much.
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tl;dr. <---The most useless post ever.
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Awesome! I'm writing a novel too.
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RocksAndFire wrote:
Awesome! I'm writing a novel too.
Great! And thank you!
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antimonyarsenide wrote:
TL;DR.
Quick summary, please?
This.
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steppenwulf wrote:
antimonyarsenide wrote:
TL;DR.
Quick summary, please?This.
It's a chapter. What did you expect. *sigh* Peter sees a flash in the sky so he goes to the bath (which is actually a space ship) and chases it. Is that good enough?
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This is REALLY good... Grr... My common sense and my urge to buy and read anything that comes under my nose are clashing. AGAIN. WAH!

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Thank you very much.
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Anyone else?
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calebxy wrote:
steppenwulf wrote:
antimonyarsenide wrote:
TL;DR.
Quick summary, please?This.
It's a chapter. What did you expect. *sigh* Peter sees a flash in the sky so he goes to the bath (which is actually a space ship) and chases it. Is that good enough?
Fair enough.
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08jackt wrote:
try to keep these all in one thread- i've seen about 6 topics concerning a flying bath.
There are four. And they're about different things. The first one was were I was wondering what people would think if the main character dies. And the second was a poll to see if people wanted to see the first chapter. And here it is. And another one was the prologue.
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Chapter 1 is only available until tomorrow, when I will delete it. Then I will post chapter 2!
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calebxy wrote:
08jackt wrote:
try to keep these all in one thread- i've seen about 6 topics concerning a flying bath.
There are four. And they're about different things. The first one was were I was wondering what people would think if the main character dies. And the second was a poll to see if people wanted to see the first chapter. And here it is. And another one was the prologue.
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Alright, fine. Five.
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I'll delete chapter 1 from the topic post, and post a new topic with chapter 2!
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Close this please.
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