This is a read-only archive of the old Scratch 1.x Forums.
Try searching the current Scratch discussion forums.

#1 2010-08-27 20:45:24

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

A book I am writing.

Chapter One:

'Harry! Harry!' Said the voice.

Harry groaned. He turned over.

'HARRY!' It said again.

Harry grunted and woke up. He rubbed his eyes and put on his glasses.

The voice was Ron Weasely, his best friend.

'You were awfully topsy turvy last night! Did you have another- one of those dreams?'

'Yeah.' Harry said. 'I was back at the Dursley's in the dream.... they locked me under the stairs. I eventually heard them leave the house, so I used Alohamora and walked out. The house was pitch black. I lit the room up with my wand, and walked upstairs to fetch Hedwig. Then I saw Lord Voldemort... and the bodies of my parents...' He trailed off.

'Its okay Harry, it was only a dream.' He said. 'Now, you missed breakfast! We have to hurry to potions, or Snape will have us writing lines!'

So they hurried over to Potions class.

'Late again, Potter.' Snape said, disgusted. 'Five points from Gryffindor.' Ron groaned. They found a seat and sat down.

Snape talked on and on about Amortentia, the love potion. 'Ugh, will this ever end...' Ron whispered to Harry. 'Quiet. I'm listening.' That was Hermione, the smartest girl in Hogwarts.

Suddenly, the doors opened and in waked McGonigal and Dumbledore. 'Emergency Meeting in the Great Hall!' announced Dumbledore. Everyone quickly got up and began to head to the Great Hall. 'Its like an answered prayer!' chuckled Ron.

When they arrived, all four houses were talking with wonder about the meeting until Dumbledore got their attention. 'May I have your attention please.' He began. 'Our defenses have detected non-wizard intruders'

Chatter arose from all the houses.

'But how! Muggles can't see Hogwarts!' Hermione said. 'But' Dumbledore said, grabbing everyone's attention again. 'It is not a muggle either.' More chatter arose. 'Not a muggle!' gasped Hermione.

'I must inform you all that we have raised the defenses with Dementors again.' Dumbledore explained. 'I advise you all remain in your own houses until we identify this intruder.'

When they were dismissed, Harry and Ron were walking back to the Gryffindor house.

'Toffee Eclairs' Harry said to the Fat Lady, interrupting her singing.

She grudgingly opened the passage because Harry got the right password.

They walked in and went into their dorms.

Harry and Ron sat on their beds.

'Not a wizard or a muggle' Ron said, through mouthfuls of chocolate frog. 'I wonder what it could be. I hope they aren't dangerous'

'What if it is Voldemort in some sort of disguise spell' Harry said.

'Don't worry Harry. Voldemort wouldn't be able to get through the Hogwart's defenses anyways. And plus, I don't know any spell that makes you non muggle and non wizard. I don't even think Hermione does either' Ron assured Harry. He finished his chocolate. 'Hey cool- another Dumbledore card!'

But that was not what was on Harry's mind now. He turned out the lights and tried to get to sleep.




Chapter Two:

Harry walked through the halls. He saw the ghosts fly by, but they didn't notice him. He walked over to Dumbledore's office. He heard talking.

'Yes. I know the intruder is coming closer to school grounds.' He heard Dumbledore say. 'He has weapons like not from the Wizard world!'

Harry gasped silently.

'He can fly, and has 'magic' unlike anyone elses!' He continued. 'There is one or two other people with him.'

Harry heard foosteps towards the door. The door swung open. Harry looked up and saw into the face of Lord Voldemort. Voldemort hissed, raised his wand, and then...

Harry woke up.

He woke up with a jolt of fear.

'It was only a dream.' He told himself. He walked over and got his glasses. He shook Ron awake. 'Time for breakfast Ron' He said.

Ron woke up. 'Breakfast? Okay...' He said groggily.


They walked down to the Great Hall. They sat down at the Gryffindor table next in between Hermione and Neville Longbottom. 'I've heard Dumbledor found out who the intruder is!' Neville said.

'Oh Please.' Hermione said. 'If Dumbledor really did find out, he SURELY would have told us by now.'

'I suppose will have to find out quickly' Ron added. 'The intruder will have to break in soon!'

Harry helped himself to some Eggs. 'I do hope we find out soon.' he said. 'I had an awful dream last night.' Ron took large helpings of Bacon and Black Pudding. 'Maybe WE'LL find out ourselves!'

'No. We aren't getting stuck in trouble again.' Hermione said.

'You scared, Potter?' A voice said. Harry spun round. It was Draco Malfoy, the snobby son of Lucios Malfoy.

'You shouldn't be here!' Hermione sternly remarked. 'Get outta here, Malfoy!' Ron called out.

'What do you want, Draco?' Harry said firmly.

'Oh, I KNOW you are scared, Potter. Voldies gonna get you. You know it.'

Crab and Goyle, Malfoy's large chums, laughed.

'I don't think its Voldemort' Hermione remarked. 'Now get out'

'Return to your seat at once, Draco!' Dumbledore called out from the head of the room. Malfoy did as told. 'Don't listen to him, Harry' Hermione said.

'Attention up here, please!' Dumbledore called out. 'We have done some searching. Whatever flying non wizard nor muggle whom has been trying to get in, has gotten in. Please remain calm and seated. We have authorized wizards checking it out.'

With that, Dumbledore left the room.

Herry looked around. He spied Malfoy glaring at him. 'Voldies gonna get you!' He mouthed.

Rage flushed through Harry. He silently got up and ran outside.

'Harry, no!' Hermione called out, rushing after him.

Ron looked up and saw Hermione run off. He quickly grabbed some bacon and then followed Hermione and Harry.


They went out the backside of Hogwarts. They quietly peered around a corner. They saw an object, with wispy fumes coming out of it, surrounded by various professors, and Dumbledore himself.

'What IS it?' Proffesor sprout asked the others.

'I'll kill them!' Filch shouted.

'No. Not yet.' Dumbledore said, raising a hand.

Dumbledore walked around it, inspecting it.

'Some sort of box?' Piped up Madame Pomfrey.

'Yes. Indeed.' Snape said, leaning towards the box, and like Dumbledore, inspecting it.

Dumbledore wiped away some ash off the top if it. It revealed bright blue wood and some writing.

'Police box?' Snape read, confused.

Suddenly, the doors started to open. The  professors stepped back.

Snape raised his wand towards the box, pointing at the doors, ready to cast a spell.

A hand reached out. An ash covered one. Then an arm. And another arm. Then a man stepped out. He had a long, brown coat, and brown hair. He wore suspenders over a white shirt, and a bowtie.

Other proffessors hands shot out, pointing more wands at the man.

Harry watched as the man stepped out of the box. The man seemed suprised at the wands pointing at his face.

'Hello. Sorry for crashing' the man said 'If you don't mind, can you stop pointing your little sticks at me?'

Some lowered their wands. All except snape.

'Sorry 'bout that. I suppose I don't look too well either' He said inspecting his ash covered body. 'I think I broke something' I said, feeling at his bones.

'We need the doctor' Dumbledore said.

'A doctor? Why heal him? He needs to be interogated!' Snape said.

'Put down your wand, Severus.' Dumbledore said to Snape.

'The Doctor? You need the Doctor? I'm right here.' Said the man.

'Your a doctor?' Dumbledore asked. 'Not A doctor, THE Doctor.' The man said.

'We need the doctor!' Dumbledore repeated.

Madame Pomfrey walked over.

'Hello.' She said, suprised, to the man. 'I guess I'm your doctor.'

'She's the doctor? I'm the Doctor!' The man said.

'I'm the doctor!' Pomfrey corrected.

'No, last time I checked, I was The Doctor.' The man said. 'Proof is here!'

Harry watched as he took out a black wallet. He opened it, and inside was some paper. Harry strained to read it from the distance. It read:

Call me the Doctor!




Chapter Three:

After scurrying back to their dorms before seen, Harry, Ron and Hermione marveled what they saw.

'A flying blue box!' Ron said in awe.

'It could have Wingardium Leviosa working on it' Hermione suggested. 'But this 'Doctor' guy is not a wizard, remember?' Harry reminded Hermione. 'Oh.' Hermione responded.

Later, when they were called back down to the Great Hall, Dumbledore called everyones attention once more.

'The intruder has been found! He is being asked questions in the hospital wing, currently. He goes by 'Doctor', and claims he is from outer space.' This rose murmurs from the crowd. 'A girl has also been found at the site of the crash. She goes by Amy Pond.'

'Should we go down to the hospital wing?' Hermione asked.

'Yeah.' Ron agreed. They slipped away from Dumbledore's speech, and headed to the hospital wing.

In the wing, they saw a man- the one from the site of the crash- lying on a bed eating a chocolate frog.

'Hello!' He said cheerfully.

'Hello' Harry replied, hesitantly. 'Are you really a doctor?' The man sighed. 'Not A doctor. THE Doctor. Must I correct you all the time...'

'Er- are you actually from outer space?' Hermione asked.

'Oh, yes. From Gallifrey, a long lost planet.' The Doctor replied.

'So doesn't that make you an alien?' Ron asked.

'Yes. Yes it does.' The man replied. 'Now don't mind me doing this...' He muttered, taking something out of his coat pocket. He took out a long, metalic stick and pointed it at them.

The stepped back and raised their wands.

'Stop with the sticks, please!' The Doctor said. He pressed a button on his stick and a green light lit up on the end.

'How can you do the Lumos spell without saying the words?' Hermione asked. 'Lumos Spell? Words?' The Doctor asked in reply while slowly moving his stick up and down their bodies, the device making a buzzing noise and glowing.

'That IS your wand, isn't it?' Harry asked.

'Wand? I'm not a magician. Well, I am, metaphorically...' The Doctor said, still scanning them with his glowing device.

'Whats in the core of your wand?'

'In the core?' The Doctor said, stopping the light and lowering his device.

'You know, Phonix Feather, Unicorn Hair...' Harry said.

'Metebelis Crystals, I guess.' The Doctor replied. 'Metebelis Crystal?' Ron repeated, confused. 'You know. The blue crystal from the sixth moon of Metebelis Three, from the Acteon Galaxy' The doctor explained. 'You do know your talking gibberish' Ron replied.

'I suppose I always am.' The doctor replied.

Then, another person was wheeled in on a strecher.

'Amy!' The Doctor exclaimed. 'Is she alright?' He asked Madame Pomfrey.

'Yes.' She replied. 'Harry! Ron! Hermione! What are you doing here? Get back to your class!'

'Ah, they're friends. Let them stay.' The Doctor said.

Madame Pomfrey wheeled the girl over and walked away.

The Doctor took out his stick again and started making it glow onto the girl.

'Why do you keep doing the Lumos spell on people?' Hermione asked.

'I don't know what Lumos is.' The Dcotor replied simply.

'You point your wand at us, and use Lumos. Why? What kind of a wand is that anyway? It doesn't look like wood.' Hermione said. 'Its not wood. Its metal, and some copper. And this isn't a wand. This is a Sonic Screwdriver.'

'A sonic screwdriver?' Ron said. 'Don't muggles use screwdrivers? I heard my dad say something about them...'

'Muggle. I don't know what a muggle is.' The Doctor said. 'I don't know what your talking about much, which is funny, because I know a lot of things. They say you lot are wizards, yes?'

'Yes.' Ron replied. 'And witches!' Hermione asked. 'Aren't witches those green skinned hags who fly on broomsticks and cackle?' The Doctor asked.

'How rude!' Hermione remarked. 'We use magic. And we aren't hags.'

'Magic isn't real! Everything is explained by science!' The Doctor exclaimed.

'Science is for Muggles' Ron remarked.

'Muggles? Your talking nonsense.' The Doctor said. 'I don't know what Lumos is. Or Muggles.' The Doctor remarked. 'Well I don't know what Metebelis Crystals are, or the Acteon whatever. So I think we both have some explaining to do.' Hermione said.




Chapter Four:

'An ALIEN?' Said Hagrid, Hogwarts Keeper of Keys. 'Nonsense! That man must be crazy!'
'That's what he said' Hermione replied.

'If he is crazy, maybe he isn't safe to have at Hogwarts.' Harry said. 'Maybe he will hurt us'
'I hope not' Ron said.

'And his wand is made of metal?' Hagrid continued.

'And Metebelis crystals, apparently' Hermione added.

'He MUST be crazy!' Hagrid said.

Meanwhile, far away from Hagrid's shack, The Doctor was still in the Hospital Wing.

'So... Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry' Said Amy, the girl, whom just woke up. 'Do you believe this all?'

'No.' The Doctor replied, using his Sonic Screwdriver on a 'magic' potion Mrs. Pomfrey just fed him. 'Everything has a scientific explanation.'

'Have same fun, Doctor!' Amy said. 'Why can't you have a little belief of the impossible in your life?'

'I CAN, I just DON'T.' The Doctor replied. 'It's all just science. Their 'wands' and all that nonsense is probably- Sonic Screwdrivers like mine or something. With a Chameleon Circuit making it look like a stick'

'Oh, Doctor. Didn't you ever believe in magic as a kid? When you were in Gallifrey?' Amy asked.

The Doctor looked up. He stared forward momentarily.
'Doctor?'

'Oh. No. I didn't.'

They were interrupted by Mrs. Pomfrey.
'You can leave your bed now. Dumbledore wishes to speak to you.' she said.
'Oh good.' The Doctor said, getting up.

Mrs. Pomfrey led them out the door to go to Dumbledore's office. They walked through a hall with many paintings on the walls.

'The paintings are moving' Said Amy.
'An Isolus. It has to be. It possesses you, giving you the ability to make Drawings come to life. 'The Doctor said. Amy sighed, and continued walking through Hogwarts with the Doctor and the nurse.

The Doctor began to walk up a flight of stairs. To his surprised, they began to move while he was on them. He grinned. 'These people really know their technology' He said.

Eventually they reached where Dumbledore's office supposedly was.

'How do I get in? This is just a Gargoyle.' The Doctor asked. 'Say the magic word.' Mrs. Pomfrey replied. Before the Doctor could question, she walked off.

'Magic word? Really?' The Doctor said.
'Go on Doctor. Say the Magic Word!' Amy said, smirking.

'I don't have time for this' The Doctor said. He took out his Sonic Screwdriver and used it on the gargoyle. The gargoyle jumped over to the side and the wall behind split in two.

'Did that statue just move?' asked Amy.

'It was probably similar to a weeping angel.' The Doctor said, stepping into the passage. The spiraling stairs began to move up like an escalator. The Doctor stepped on and was taken up into the office. He saw a big, oak door with a brass knocker. He tapped twice with the knocker and was welcomed in by Dumbledore.

He and Amy walked into a large room. Portraits of various Men and Woman covered the walls. He saw a fireplace on one side, and a desk on the other. Behind the desk was Dumbledore himself, as well as a rag-like hat on a shelf. Dumbledore began to speak.

'Hello, there, er-'

'Doctor.' The Doctor said. 'And this is Amy Pond.'

'Doctor Who?' Dumbledore asked.

'Just the Doctor.' The Doctor corrected.

'Okay, Doctor and Amy. We must discuss- the incident, with your flying box.' Dumbledore said. 'Oh, how rude of me. I'm Albus Dumbledore. Oh, please help yourself to some butterbeer.' He began to pour a liquid into a goblet.

'Butterbeer? Er, no thanks.' The Doctor said.

'So, why did you come here?' Dumbledore said, sipping his drink.

'I wasn't trying to crash here. I was actually trying to take Amy, here, to Barcelona.' Amy nodded in agreement.

'Barcelona eh?' Dumbledore said, pushing his moon shaped glasses up to the bridge of his nose. 'And then you crashed your box here.'

'Yeah. That 'box' is my TARDIS. And she's not in good shape at the moment.' The
Doctor explained.

'We can fix it.'
'How? You don't have Timelord capabilities.'

'We have magic'
'Told you' Amy whispered to the Doctor.

'You must have magic too!' Dumbledore questioned.
'No. Just- Timelord technology.'

'What are these 'Timelords' you speak of?' Dumbledore asked the Doctor.

'A long lost race of time travelers.' The Doctor began.

'You travel through time?' Dumbledore asked. The Doctor and Amy nodded yes.

'Where's your Time Turner? You can't Time Travel without one.'

'I have a TARDIS. That's all I need' The Doctor said, grinning.

'How did the Timelords die?' Dumbledore asked.

'A war. A time war.' The Doctor said sadly.

'I'm sorry to hear that.' Said Dumbledore. 'So- your 'TARDIS'. Take us to it and we will fix it.'

Dumbledore fetched some other professors and followed the Doctor and Amy to the TARDIS.

'Here she is' The Doctor said, after leading the professors  to a smoky, tattered, broken TARDIS.

'I see' Dumbledore said, taking out his wand. He pointed it at the TARDIS.

'Reparo!' He said. The Doctor watched as ash cleared from the TARDIS. 'We need more magic' Dumbledore said. All the other professors took out their wands and did the same thing as Dumbledore.

The TARDIS began to fix itself! The Doctor watched in amazement.

'Brilliant!' The Doctor exclaimed. He happily ran over to his TARDIS. He took out the keys, unlocked the TARDIS and walked in, shutting the door behind him.

'Bit of a madman, eh' Filch said.

The doors opened. The Doctors head poked out. 'Dumbledore!' He said.
Dumbledore walked inside.

'An Undetectable Extension Spell!' He exclaimed.

'That's new.' The Doctor said. 'I like it when they are confused...'

'Amazing! A blue box on the outside... and- this on the inside!'

'Yeah. I travel through time with this.'

'Through time? Without a time turner?'

'I don't know what that is, but, yes.'


Meanwhile, Harry and Ron were back at their dorms.

'Where's Dumbledore been?' Ron asked. 'He wasn't at dinner!'
'I don't know... maybe off with that 'Doctor' guy' Harry suggested.

'Let's go get Hermione and  go find them!' Ron exclaimed, getting up to go.

'Ron. Wait.' Harry said, rummaging through his bags. He took at a silvery, clear, piece of cloth.

'Your invisibility cloak!' Ron exclaimed. He and Harry brought it to Hermione's dorm.
'We shouldn't be doing this' She said.

'Relax, Hermione' Ron said. 'They won't see us'

So they pulled the cloak over their heads.

They snuck outside to the Hogwarts grounds. They heard voices, so they followed to sound. It led them to the blue box again. Nor The Doctor or Dumbledore was in sight, just a bunch of professors.
The doors swung open and the Doctor and Dumbledore walked out.

They and the professors talked a bit, and then walked away. The blue box remained where it was.

'Let's go in' Whispered Harry. 'I'm not sure' Replied Hermione. 'Come on' Ron insisted.
'Alright' Hermione gave in.
They walked inside the box.

'Whoa. Its bigger on the inside!' Harry said. 'It's like my dad's Ford Anglia!' Ron added.

'It MUST be a Undetectable Extension!' Hermione said, looking around.
'So many buttons...' Ron said in awe.

Suddenly, a loud whirring noise started to come from the center of the TARDIS. Dials were spinning and the center column was pulsing and glowing.
'What's happening?' Ron said nervously.

Before anyone could answer,  the entire room began to rumble and shake vigorously.

Hermione shrieked as she was tossed to the other side of the room, the cloak slipping off of her.
Finally, the rumbling stopped.

Harry gasped for breath. Hi got up and brushed himself off. 'That was insane' He said. 'Yeah.' Ron agreed.

'Let's get out of here.' Hermione said, running to the door. Harry and Ron followed.
They pushed open the door and were about to walk out and then Hermione shrieked.

They were flying over the Hogwarts express, that was on its way to Hogwarts.
They slammed the door shut.

'How is that possible?' Hermione exclaimed. 'Why is the Hogwarts express going to Hogwarts now? It's the middle of the school year!'

'Maybe we did go back in time' Harry suggested. 'He said he was a Time Traveler'

Suddenly, the entire room shook again and made a banging noise. The doors swung open revealing they had fallen lower towards the Hogwarts Express, banging into the roof.

'How do you control this?' Ron yelled as the entire box flipped around and around.

'PRESS RANDOM BUTTONS!' Harry yelled, turning dials and pressing buttons.
In the end, they ended up at Hogsmead.

The doors swung opened, tipping them out. The box itself fell onto its side. Many passersby stared in surprise.

'Nothing to see' Ron said, and pulled the invisibility cloak back over them.

If anyone has seen the previous title, please keep quiet about it. It was a mistake, and was supposed to be a secret.

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-08-31 17:26:51)


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#2 2010-08-27 20:47:11

Sunrise-Moon
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-06-27
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

xS I think HP's a copyrighted character.


http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u427/HulKDzN/RebornBlade.png

Offline

 

#3 2010-08-27 20:47:12

Staraptor
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-07-29
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

How did you delete those posts?


"Life is a video game. No matter how good you get, you always end up getting zapped." -Shiregu Miamoto

Offline

 

#4 2010-08-27 20:49:05

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

xS I think HP's a copyrighted character.

I know. This is simply Fan Fiction.

And @Staraptor:
I deleted the entire topic and made a new one. Its annoying to do that, so DON'T say anything PLEASE.


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#5 2010-08-27 20:50:10

Staraptor
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-07-29
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Sorry...  sad


"Life is a video game. No matter how good you get, you always end up getting zapped." -Shiregu Miamoto

Offline

 

#6 2010-08-27 20:52:52

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Staraptor wrote:

Sorry...  sad

S'okay. You didn't know.

Working on chap. two.


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#7 2010-08-27 21:21:03

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Chapter Two:

Harry walked through the halls. He saw the ghosts fly by, but they didn't notice him. He walked over to Dumbledore's office. He heard talking.

'Yes. I know the intruder is coming closer to school grounds.' He heard Dumbledore say. 'He has weapons like not from the Wizard world!'

Harry gasped silently.

'He can fly, and has 'magic' unlike anyone elses!' He continued. 'There is one or two other people with him.'

Harry heard foosteps towards the door. The door swung open. Harry looked up and saw into the face of Lord Voldemort. Voldemort hissed, raised his wand, and then...

Harry woke up.

He woke up with a jolt of fear.

'It was only a dream.' He told himself. He walked over and got his glasses. He shook Ron awake. 'Time for breakfast Ron' He said.

Ron woke up. 'Breakfast? Okay...' He said groggily.


They walked down to the Great Hall. They sat down at the Gryffindor table next in between Hermione and Neville Longbottom. 'I've heard Dumbledor found out who the intruder is!' Neville said.

'Oh Please.' Hermione said. 'If Dumbledor really did find out, he SURELY would have told us by now.'

'I suppose will have to find out quickly' Ron added. 'The intruder will have to break in soon!'

Harry helped himself to some Eggs. 'I do hope we find out soon.' he said. 'I had an awful dream last night.' Ron took large helpings of Bacon and Black Pudding. 'Maybe WE'LL find out ourselves!'

'No. We aren't getting stuck in trouble again.' Hermione said.

'You scared, Potter?' A voice said. Harry spun round. It was Draco Malfoy, the snobby son of Lucios Malfoy.

'You shouldn't be here!' Hermione sternly remarked. 'Get outta here, Malfoy!' Ron called out.

'What do you want, Draco?' Harry said firmly.

'Oh, I KNOW you are scared, Potter. Voldies gonna get you. You know it.'

Crab and Goyle, Malfoy's large chums, laughed.

'I don't think its Voldemort' Hermione remarked. 'Now get out'

'Return to your seat at once, Draco!' Dumbledore called out from the head of the room. Malfoy did as told. 'Don't listen to him, Harry' Hermione said.

'Attention up here, please!' Dumbledore called out. 'We have done some searching. Whatever flying non wizard nor muggle whom has been trying to get in, has gotten in. Please remain calm and seated. We have authorized wizards checking it out.'

With that, Dumbledore left the room.

Herry looked around. He spied Malfoy glaring at him. 'Voldies gonna get you!' He mouthed.

Rage flushed through Harry. He silently got up and ran outside.

'Harry, no!' Hermione called out, rushing after him.

Ron looked up and saw Hermione run off. He quickly grabbed some bacon and then followed Hermione and Harry.


They went out the backside of Hogwarts. They quietly peered around a corner. They saw an object, with wispy fumes coming out of it, surrounded by various professors, and Dumbledore himself.

'What IS it?' Proffesor sprout asked the others.

'I'll kill them!' Filch shouted.

'No. Not yet.' Dumbledore said, raising a hand.

Dumbledore walked around it, inspecting it.

'Some sort of box?' Piped up Madame Pomfrey.

'Yes. Indeed.' Snape said, leaning towards the box, and like Dumbledore, inspecting it.

Dumbledore wiped away some ash off the top if it. It revealed bright blue wood and some writing.

'Police box?' Snape read, confused.

Suddenly, the doors started to open. The  professors stepped back.

Snape raised his wand towards the box, pointing at the doors, ready to cast a spell.

A hand reached out. An ash covered one. Then an arm. And another arm. Then a man stepped out. He had a long, brown coat, and brown hair. He wore suspenders over a white shirt, and a bowtie.

Other proffessors hands shot out, pointing more wands at the man.

Harry watched as the man stepped out of the box. The man seemed suprised at the wands pointing at his face.

'Hello. Sorry for crashing' the man said 'If you don't mind, can you stop pointing your little sticks at me?'

Some lowered their wands. All except snape.

'Sorry 'bout that. I suppose I don't look too well either' He said inspecting his ash covered body. 'I think I broke something' I said, feeling at his bones.

'We need the doctor' Dumbledore said.

'A doctor? Why heal him? He needs to be interogated!' Snape said.

'Put down your wand, Severus.' Dumbledore said to Snape.

'The Doctor? You need the Doctor? I'm right here.' Said the man.

'Your a doctor?' Dumbledore asked. 'Not A doctor, THE Doctor.' The man said.

'We need the doctor!' Dumbledore repeated.

Madame Pomfrey walked over.

'Hello.' She said, suprised, to the man. 'I guess I'm your doctor.'

'She's the doctor? I'm the Doctor!' The man said.

'I'm the doctor!' Pomfrey corrected.

'No, last time I checked, I was The Doctor.' The man said. 'Proof is here!'

Harry watched as he took out a black wallet. He opened it, and inside was some paper. Harry strained to read it from the distance. It read:

Call me the Doctor!


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#8 2010-08-27 21:47:52

steppenwulf
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-07-23
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

tl;dr


I'm graduating HS this April and going to college in the Fall.

Offline

 

#9 2010-08-27 22:02:18

militarydudes
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-12
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

"When Worlds Collide" is a movie from the 50's. But it's about the earth crashing into another planet.


__m. .m__ KILROY WAS HERE
        U

Offline

 

#10 2010-08-27 22:03:42

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

steppenwulf wrote:

tl;dr

roll  Don't post on a topic you don't read, jeez.

@Militarydudes: I never knew that.

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-08-27 22:05:48)


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#11 2010-08-27 22:05:14

militarydudes
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-12
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

xS I think HP's a copyrighted character.

I don't think you can't get fined for something that small


__m. .m__ KILROY WAS HERE
        U

Offline

 

#12 2010-08-27 22:05:24

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Chapter Three:

After scurrying back to their dorms before seen, Harry, Ron and Hermione marveled what they saw.

'A flying blue box!' Ron said in awe.

'It could have Wingardium Leviosa working on it' Hermione suggested. 'But this 'Doctor' guy is not a wizard, remember?' Harry reminded Hermione. 'Oh.' Hermione responded.

Later, when they were called back down to the Great Hall, Dumbledore called everyones attention once more.

'The intruder has been found! He is being asked questions in the hospital wing, currently. He goes by 'Doctor', and claims he is from outer space.' This rose murmurs from the crowd. 'A girl has also been found at the site of the crash. She goes by Amy Pond.'

'Should we go down to the hospital wing?' Hermione asked.

'Yeah.' Ron agreed. They slipped away from Dumbledore's speech, and headed to the hospital wing.

In the wing, they saw a man- the one from the site of the crash- lying on a bed eating a chocolate frog.

'Hello!' He said cheerfully.

'Hello' Harry replied, hesitantly. 'Are you really a doctor?' The man sighed. 'Not A doctor. THE Doctor. Must I correct you all the time...'

'Er- are you actually from outer space?' Hermione asked.

'Oh, yes. From Gallifrey, a long lost planet.' The Doctor replied.

'So doesn't that make you an alien?' Ron asked.

'Yes. Yes it does.' The man replied. 'Now don't mind me doing this...' He muttered, taking something out of his coat pocket. He took out a long, metalic stick and pointed it at them.

The stepped back and raised their wands.

'Stop with the sticks, please!' The Doctor said. He pressed a button on his stick and a green light lit up on the end.

'How can you do the Lumos spell without saying the words?' Hermione asked. 'Lumos Spell? Words?' The Doctor asked in reply while slowly moving his stick up and down their bodies, the device making a buzzing noise and glowing.

'That IS your wand, isn't it?' Harry asked.

'Wand? I'm not a magician. Well, I am, metaphorically...' The Doctor said, still scanning them with his glowing device.

'Whats in the core of your wand?'

'In the core?' The Doctor said, stopping the light and lowering his device.

'You know, Phonix Feather, Unicorn Hair...' Harry said.

'Metebelis Crystals, I guess.' The Doctor replied. 'Metebelis Crystal?' Ron repeated, confused. 'You know. The blue crystal from the sixth moon of Metebelis Three, from the Acteon Galaxy' The doctor explained. 'You do know your talking gibberish' Ron replied.

'I suppose I always am.' The doctor replied.

Then, another person was wheeled in on a strecher.

'Amy!' The Doctor exclaimed. 'Is she alright?' He asked Madame Pomfrey.

'Yes.' She replied. 'Harry! Ron! Hermione! What are you doing here? Get back to your class!'

'Ah, they're friends. Let them stay.' The Doctor said.

Madame Pomfrey wheeled the girl over and walked away.

The Doctor took out his stick again and started making it glow onto the girl.

'Why do you keep doing the Lumos spell on people?' Hermione asked.

'I don't know what Lumos is.' The Dcotor replied simply.

'You point your wand at us, and use Lumos. Why? What kind of a wand is that anyway? It doesn't look like wood.' Hermione said. 'Its not wood. Its metal, and some copper. And this isn't a wand. This is a Sonic Screwdriver.'

'A sonic screwdriver?' Ron said. 'Don't muggles use screwdrivers? I heard my dad say something about them...'

'Muggle. I don't know what a muggle is.' The Doctor said. 'I don't know what your talking about much, which is funny, because I know a lot of things. They say you lot are wizards, yes?'

'Yes.' Ron replied. 'And witches!' Hermione asked. 'Aren't witches those green skinned hags who fly on broomsticks and cackle?' The Doctor asked.

'How rude!' Hermione remarked. 'We use magic. And we aren't hags.'

'Magic isn't real! Everything is explained by science!' The Doctor exclaimed.

'Science is for Muggles' Ron remarked.

'Muggles? Your talking nonsense.' The Doctor said. 'I don't know what Lumos is. Or Muggles.'

'Well I don't know what Metebelis Crystals are, or the Acteon- thingy. So I think we both have some explaining to do.' Hermione said.

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-08-28 10:02:13)


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#13 2010-08-27 22:06:31

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

militarydudes wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

xS I think HP's a copyrighted character.

I don't think you can't get fined for something that small

Yeah. Fan-Fiction is perfectly legal.


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#14 2010-08-28 10:03:07

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Bump


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#15 2010-08-28 16:21:59

Staraptor
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-07-29
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

This is cool.


"Life is a video game. No matter how good you get, you always end up getting zapped." -Shiregu Miamoto

Offline

 

#16 2010-08-28 16:29:19

calebxy
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-12-31
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Well I'm writing a book called, The Magic Bath 2!


I'm making my own Doctor Who series!  big_smile  See the first episode here.
And please join Story Zone!  big_smile

Offline

 

#17 2010-08-28 16:31:37

MaxtheWeirdo
Scratcher
Registered: 2010-03-18
Posts: 500+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Very nice. I like the idea of a HP?DW crossover.


My website. Hall Crawler My Awesome OS
It's just marketing, guys! Nothing sinister!

Offline

 

#18 2010-08-28 17:19:04

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

calebxy wrote:

Well I'm writing a book called, The Magic Bath 2!

Awesome! Do you like this one? With DW an everything?


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#19 2010-08-28 17:31:47

soupoftomato
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-07-18
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

I've never seen nor know what Doctor Who is. The most information on the show I can gives is that it's a show.


I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos

Offline

 

#20 2010-08-31 17:24:06

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Chapter Four is out!  big_smile

Chapter Four:

'An ALIEN?' Said Hagrid, Hogwarts Keeper of Keys. 'Nonsense! That man must be crazy!'
'That's what he said' Hermione replied.

'If he is crazy, maybe he isn't safe to have at Hogwarts.' Harry said. 'Maybe he will hurt us'
'I hope not' Ron said.

'And his wand is made of metal?' Hagrid continued.

'And Metebelis crystals, apparently' Hermione added.

'He MUST be crazy!' Hagrid said.

Meanwhile, far away from Hagrid's shack, The Doctor was still in the Hospital Wing.

'So... Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry' Said Amy, the girl, whom just woke up. 'Do you believe this all?'

'No.' The Doctor replied, using his Sonic Screwdriver on a 'magic' potion Mrs. Pomfrey just fed him. 'Everything has a scientific explanation.'

'Have same fun, Doctor!' Amy said. 'Why can't you have a little belief of the impossible in your life?'

'I CAN, I just DON'T.' The Doctor replied. 'It's all just science. Their 'wands' and all that nonsense is probably- Sonic Screwdrivers like mine or something. With a Chameleon Circuit making it look like a stick'

'Oh, Doctor. Didn't you ever believe in magic as a kid? When you were in Gallifrey?' Amy asked.

The Doctor looked up. He stared forward momentarily.
'Doctor?'

'Oh. No. I didn't.'

They were interrupted by Mrs. Pomfrey.
'You can leave your bed now. Dumbledore wishes to speak to you.' she said.
'Oh good.' The Doctor said, getting up.

Mrs. Pomfrey led them out the door to go to Dumbledore's office. They walked through a hall with many paintings on the walls.

'The paintings are moving' Said Amy.
'An Isolus. It has to be. It possesses you, giving you the ability to make Drawings come to life. 'The Doctor said. Amy sighed, and continued walking through Hogwarts with the Doctor and the nurse.

The Doctor began to walk up a flight of stairs. To his surprised, they began to move while he was on them. He grinned. 'These people really know their technology' He said.

Eventually they reached where Dumbledore's office supposedly was.

'How do I get in? This is just a Gargoyle.' The Doctor asked. 'Say the magic word.' Mrs. Pomfrey replied. Before the Doctor could question, she walked off.

'Magic word? Really?' The Doctor said.
'Go on Doctor. Say the Magic Word!' Amy said, smirking.

'I don't have time for this' The Doctor said. He took out his Sonic Screwdriver and used it on the gargoyle. The gargoyle jumped over to the side and the wall behind split in two.

'Did that statue just move?' asked Amy.

'It was probably similar to a weeping angel.' The Doctor said, stepping into the passage. The spiraling stairs began to move up like an escalator. The Doctor stepped on and was taken up into the office. He saw a big, oak door with a brass knocker. He tapped twice with the knocker and was welcomed in by Dumbledore.

He and Amy walked into a large room. Portraits of various Men and Woman covered the walls. He saw a fireplace on one side, and a desk on the other. Behind the desk was Dumbledore himself, as well as a rag-like hat on a shelf. Dumbledore began to speak.

'Hello, there, er-'

'Doctor.' The Doctor said. 'And this is Amy Pond.'

'Doctor Who?' Dumbledore asked.

'Just the Doctor.' The Doctor corrected.

'Okay, Doctor and Amy. We must discuss- the incident, with your flying box.' Dumbledore said. 'Oh, how rude of me. I'm Albus Dumbledore. Oh, please help yourself to some butterbeer.' He began to pour a liquid into a goblet.

'Butterbeer? Er, no thanks.' The Doctor said.

'So, why did you come here?' Dumbledore said, sipping his drink.

'I wasn't trying to crash here. I was actually trying to take Amy, here, to Barcelona.' Amy nodded in agreement.

'Barcelona eh?' Dumbledore said, pushing his moon shaped glasses up to the bridge of his nose. 'And then you crashed your box here.'

'Yeah. That 'box' is my TARDIS. And she's not in good shape at the moment.' The
Doctor explained.

'We can fix it.'
'How? You don't have Timelord capabilities.'

'We have magic'
'Told you' Amy whispered to the Doctor.

'You must have magic too!' Dumbledore questioned.
'No. Just- Timelord technology.'

'What are these 'Timelords' you speak of?' Dumbledore asked the Doctor.

'A long lost race of time travelers.' The Doctor began.

'You travel through time?' Dumbledore asked. The Doctor and Amy nodded yes.

'Where's your Time Turner? You can't Time Travel without one.'

'I have a TARDIS. That's all I need' The Doctor said, grinning.

'How did the Timelords die?' Dumbledore asked.

'A war. A time war.' The Doctor said sadly.

'I'm sorry to hear that.' Said Dumbledore. 'So- your 'TARDIS'. Take us to it and we will fix it.'

Dumbledore fetched some other professors and followed the Doctor and Amy to the TARDIS.

'Here she is' The Doctor said, after leading the professors  to a smoky, tattered, broken TARDIS.

'I see' Dumbledore said, taking out his wand. He pointed it at the TARDIS.

'Reparo!' He said. The Doctor watched as ash cleared from the TARDIS. 'We need more magic' Dumbledore said. All the other professors took out their wands and did the same thing as Dumbledore.

The TARDIS began to fix itself! The Doctor watched in amazement.

'Brilliant!' The Doctor exclaimed. He happily ran over to his TARDIS. He took out the keys, unlocked the TARDIS and walked in, shutting the door behind him.

'Bit of a madman, eh' Filch said.

The doors opened. The Doctors head poked out. 'Dumbledore!' He said.
Dumbledore walked inside.

'An Undetectable Extension Spell!' He exclaimed.

'That's new.' The Doctor said. 'I like it when they are confused...'

'Amazing! A blue box on the outside... and- this on the inside!'

'Yeah. I travel through time with this.'

'Through time? Without a time turner?'

'I don't know what that is, but, yes.'


Meanwhile, Harry and Ron were back at their dorms.

'Where's Dumbledore been?' Ron asked. 'He wasn't at dinner!'
'I don't know... maybe off with that 'Doctor' guy' Harry suggested.

'Let's go get Hermione and  go find them!' Ron exclaimed, getting up to go.

'Ron. Wait.' Harry said, rummaging through his bags. He took at a silvery, clear, piece of cloth.

'Your invisibility cloak!' Ron exclaimed. He and Harry brought it to Hermione's dorm.
'We shouldn't be doing this' She said.

'Relax, Hermione' Ron said. 'They won't see us'

So they pulled the cloak over their heads.

They snuck outside to the Hogwarts grounds. They heard voices, so they followed to sound. It led them to the blue box again. Nor The Doctor or Dumbledore was in sight, just a bunch of professors.
The doors swung open and the Doctor and Dumbledore walked out.

They and the professors talked a bit, and then walked away. The blue box remained where it was.

'Let's go in' Whispered Harry. 'I'm not sure' Replied Hermione. 'Come on' Ron insisted.
'Alright' Hermione gave in.
They walked inside the box.

'Whoa. Its bigger on the inside!' Harry said. 'It's like my dad's Ford Anglia!' Ron added.

'It MUST be a Undetectable Extension!' Hermione said, looking around.
'So many buttons...' Ron said in awe.

Suddenly, a loud whirring noise started to come from the center of the TARDIS. Dials were spinning and the center column was pulsing and glowing.
'What's happening?' Ron said nervously.

Before anyone could answer,  the entire room began to rumble and shake vigorously.

Hermione shrieked as she was tossed to the other side of the room, the cloak slipping off of her.
Finally, the rumbling stopped.

Harry gasped for breath. Hi got up and brushed himself off. 'That was insane' He said. 'Yeah.' Ron agreed.

'Let's get out of here.' Hermione said, running to the door. Harry and ron followed.
They pushed open the door and were about to walk out and then Hermione shrieked.

They were flying over the Hogwarts express, that was on its way to Hogwarts.
They slammed the door shut.

'How is that possible?' Hermione exclaimed. 'Why is the Hogwarts express going to Hogwarts now? It's the middle of the school year!'

'Maybe we did go back in time' Harry suggested. 'He said he was a Time Traveler'

Suddenly, the entire room shook again and made a banging noise. The doors swung open revealing they had fallen lower towards the Hogwarts Express, banging into the roof.

'How do you control this?' Ron yelled as the entire box flipped around and around.

'PRESS RANDOM BUTTONS!' Harry yelled, turning dials and pressing buttons.
In the end, they ended up at Hogsmead.

The doors swung opened, tipping them out. The box itself fell onto its side. Many passersby stared in suprise.

'Nothing to see' Ron said, and pulled the invisibility cloak back over them.


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#21 2010-08-31 17:40:09

RocksAndFire
Scratcher
Registered: 2010-04-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

Ive never seen a fan fiction before!

Offline

 

#22 2010-08-31 17:51:37

Sunrise-Moon
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-06-27
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

RocksAndFire wrote:

Ive never seen a fan fiction before!

fanfiction.net


http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u427/HulKDzN/RebornBlade.png

Offline

 

#23 2010-08-31 20:42:57

poppypaynterscratch
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-09-20
Posts: 100+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

wait, whats DW? its harry poter and what?


http://i33.tinypic.com/2dw6hxv.gif

Offline

 

#24 2010-08-31 20:43:25

wiimaster
Scratcher
Registered: 2008-09-17
Posts: 1000+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

poppypaynterscratch wrote:

wait, whats DW? its harry poter and what?

Doctor Who. A British Sci Fi programme. Its awesome!


http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss286/wiimaster1/Wiimaster_zps107dca4c.gif

Offline

 

#25 2010-08-31 20:44:31

poppypaynterscratch
Scratcher
Registered: 2009-09-20
Posts: 100+

Re: Worlds Collide (An AWESOME story I'm writng!)

wiimaster wrote:

poppypaynterscratch wrote:

wait, whats DW? its harry poter and what?

Doctor Who. A British Sci Fi programme. Its awesome!

oh. yeah ive heard of that. carry on.


http://i33.tinypic.com/2dw6hxv.gif

Offline

 

Board footer