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My poem. It was for school.


A cloud obscures the midnight moon
And now is passed these days of June
Fulfill in dusk silence.
Twilight shares the jackal's howl
With white wolf's frigid tundra
Where now, the light of day away--
Beneath Polaris shining.
Equinox of autumn past,
Their summer high the mountain has
Snowy forest in its pass
To solstice summer, then at last
Perpetuate the sun.

Lol. thanks.

I'm rhymin'
At the wrong timin'
And I'm a poet
And I didn't even know it
And here I intend to show it

Or, a classic:

Hakius are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

iamrpk wrote:

I'm rhymin'
At the wrong timin'
And I'm a poet
And I didn't even know it
And here I intend to show it

Or, a classic:

Hakius are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Congratulations

DaGamez wrote:

RobotKitty wrote:

My poem. It was for school.


With white wolf's frigid tundra
Where now, the light of day away--
Beneath Polaris shining.
Equinox of autumn past,

Eh... That does not rhyme 
But awesome! Love it.

Ok... seems you've never been told "Poems don't need to rhyme"

DaGamez wrote:

iamrpk wrote:

I'm rhymin'
At the wrong timin'
And I'm a poet
And I didn't even know it
And here I intend to show it

Or, a classic:

Hakius are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
WaveOS is so cool.

DaGamez wrote:

The beginning rhymed, so...

...why don't you go
And edit it
Don't throw a fit!

It's absolutely fine
Wait, how am I supposed to rhyme
This line?
Wait!

I just did!
That was kinda stupid.
Oh well.
I feel real swell!

I don't like it when people die.
I wish I could fly.
Why? Why?!?! WHY?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!
Oh well, I guess this is my goodbye.

More of my creepier poem for school (Everyone was like... what the-... when I read it XD)
Within life’s blizzard,
I try to find shelter among the deadly flurries.
They surround me, pain me.
I fade, lost in the masses of white.
Invisible.
Eventually the storm clears, the sun’s rays peek through the dissipating clouds.
I find the others— So similar, yet so different.
I fight to be noticed, loved.
Too aware that the ice is slowly melting—
An ominous reminder that I am trapped.
Helpless.
Alone.

DaGamez wrote:

RobotKitty wrote:

More of my creepier poem for school (Everyone was like... what the-... when I read it XD)
Within life’s blizzard,
I try to find shelter among the deadly flurries.
They surround me, pain me.
I fade, lost in the masses of white.
Invisible.
Eventually the storm clears, the sun’s rays peek through the dissipating clouds.
I find the others— So similar, yet so different.
I fight to be noticed, loved.
Too aware that the ice is slowly melting—
An ominous reminder that I am trapped.
Helpless.
Alone.

Eh... I think it's because it sounds emo 

That was mean, dude.

I didn't say it as something mean. I mean the end.
Helpless.
Alone.

I actually really like the poem. It's deep. I like that.

RobotKitty wrote:

DaGamez wrote:

I didn't say it as something mean. I mean the end.
Helpless.
Alone.

I actually really like the poem. It's deep. I like that.

Yeah... but the Emo thing took it far... you could have just said it's "Dark"

What does emo mean to you?

DaGamez wrote:

Emo means Emotional. By that I meant the last 2 lines;
Hopeless.
Alone.
BY emo I meant dark/deep, sorry. I like emo stuff, while it freaks out most people 

It doesn't mean emotional
It's just an insult to people who listen to emotive rock. I don't see why that poem has anything to do with that, or why robot would find it insulting, because that's the only real definition for it