Chapter I: Master of Disguise (Narrator: Star)
Hunter tried shooting me. Luckily, I'm many things, including crazy, always bored, etc., but if I'm anything, I'm a master of disguise. Yes, that's right. I hired someone to do that, while I disguised as Retelin, for he was too sleepy to wake up. I'm alive, and Retelin's mad because Hunter tried killing me. Hunter's screwed now, because when Retelin gets mad, well, he's a little more violent than he usually is. I have nothing to say, except war's coming, and we should all be scared. Love it or not, the world will end someday.
"John, you back on our mission?" I asked John Miller, the best air pilot the Marints have ever seen.
"Yes, and I have the plane ready. Are you ready to go to the Spotter's area?" he asked me.
"Are you ready?" I asked Retelin. He nodded.
"Yes, Lt. Miller, we are ready.""Great. Nobody else?" John asked."Yes, I'm awaiting Jeremy Kone." Replied Retelin.
"Oh, he's behind you." John said."What?"
"Yes, I am." Kone came out of nowhere.
"Okay, enough with the jokes, let's go." Retelin said."Okay." Everyone else agreed. We started our journey. Little did we know we wouldn't see our area for a long time.
Chapter II: Forgive me, my dear Artemis. (Narrator: Hunter)
"Just please, please give me another chance!"
"Ugh, fine. But if I see you with another Marint..."
"It won't happen again. He was my brother. I would've killed him, but my mom was there. I killed her, so there's nothing to worry about."
"You killed your mother!?"
"Um... Kinda..."
"Good, I didn't like her. Let's see in the place we first met, the corner."
"Awesome! I'll be there at 7:30. See you there!” I said. I hanged up the phone. I was so happy, I just got Artemis back. Yes, I was speaking with Artemis on the phone.
"Hey Hunter!" Artemis signaled to me.
"Hey Artemis! I thought you weren't coming for a second...”
"I'm sorry I'm so late. So, how's life been?""Good, good. No, it was horrible. I thought I lost you.”
"I'll always come back, no matter what.”
"Thanks. That means a lot to me. I'm supposing you won't marry me after what happened... Right?”
"Eventually, maybe, but for now I think it's better if we're... You know, not married. Maybe it's a little too soon.”
"Maybe."
Chapter III: Death and Beyond, Life and Below (Narrator: Retelin)
"We'll get that idiot... He didn't know who he was messing with when he shot you." I was talking to Star.
"Calm down..." Star replied.
"What? No! He tried killing you! You're the only good family I have left!"
"Hunter's your brother."
"I said good family."
"Oh."
"We're there. C'mon, lets go." Miller told us.
"Okay-"
"Wha-" *Shot*
"Miller!" Screamed my sister and I.
"I guess we weren't careful enough..." I told Star.
"Go! Go Go Go Go!" I heard a voice that sounded familiar.
"Father?"
Chapter IV: The Turnaround (Narrator: Retelin)
"Retelin?" My father boomed.
"You're alive! But how?" I asked.
"When you shot me... I acted dead. You took my ideas, always having a ketchup bottle in your pocket. I used that."
"Why'd you act dead?"
"Because I wanted to protect you."
"From what?"
"Retelin, I'm a little psychic. I can tell the future. Only 10 people in the world can do this. I'm one of the lucky 10. If you thought I was alive, you would eventually turn to the bad side, against me and Hunter."
"Hunter's in the bad side."
"But it's better than you being there."
"Wait. You mean-"
"Yes. You're a much better soldier."
"Wait-WHAT? You're alive? How do you know Retelin's a good soldier?" Star boomed.
"Because I'm psychic. Ever since he was born, I knew he would be the one."
"The what?" I asked.
"The best soldier to live. My Achilles. A super-soldier. The difference is you don't have all those super-stuff." He replied.
"Tha-Thank you, father. But why-Why'd you kill Miller?" I asked.
"Thought he was Hunter."
"But Hunter's a Lt., not a flyer."
"He's a Lt.?!"
"Well, yeah."
"But he sucks at war!"
"But he wants to kill the super-soldier. He almost succeeded too many times. Someday, we'll all die. The end of the war approaches, and I have a feeling we won't be alive."
"I know your future, Hunter's future, Star's future, and my future."
"Tell me my future." I ordered.
"I... I can't." he told me. He started crying, and I don't think that was a You'll-survive-and-have-a-happy-ending cry.
"I'm going to die."
"I never said tha-that." he said, and with that, he stormed away.
"Father!" But it was too late. He didn't remember that he was in the Spotter's area.
"Father?" Hunter came running to him. "You're alive?"
"Get out of my way, Hunter."
"I-I want to show you my girlfriend, Artemis."
"I don't think the Greek myths are true, son."
"That's her name, she's no god, but she's my god."
"Get away from me!" He boomed, and went in his Helicopter, and flew away. But Spotter's started shooting the vehicle, and blew it up before Hunter screamed "No!"
I ran to Hunter.
"See I didn't kill dad? You blamed me, but now YOU killed him!"
"But-"
"I hate you! You killed dad!"
"Back off, brother, or I'll order my army to blow your head off."
"You think you can? You? Dad told me he could see the future. He told me I was the best soldier in the world, and he told me you didn't deserve to even be a soldier!"
"What?"
"It's true!"
"Calm down, and stop saying lies." Hunter told me.
"Lies? You're living a lie!"
"Spotters, get ready for shooting." I took that as my cue for my famous Run-Away-Or-Die runaway scene.
"Run, Star, get in the Helicopter!"
"Al-Already am."
"Good. Now buckle up, I'm flying."
Chapter V: My Brother Blows Up A Perfectly Good Helicopter (Narrator: Star)
"Don't fly, you've never had a lesson!" I ordered my brother, Retelin.
"Either that or Hunter comes in and blows our heads off."
"Flying it is." My brother started flying. He was surprisingly good. Except for the fact we almost crashed into mountains every couple of seconds, and who could forget getting shot, soon to blow up?
"We're going to need to get out." My brother said.
"How?" I asked
"Parachute. But the helicopter will fall and crash, and the Spotters will check it out when it falls. I have an idea; Let's put my lucky mines on it, then jump off, so when the Spotters check it out, they have a little 'explosion', while they think we're dead and we're running away."
"Um... Sounds like a plan..?"
"Yes."
"Then give me a parachute."
"There's only one. You'll have to get on with me."
"Eh, fine."
"I have it attached. Grab on to me, and don't let go until we reach ground."
"Fine." I saw my brother setting up the mine.
"Grab on." I followed, then he jumped off.
"Ugh... I'm gonna throw up..." I thought out loud.
"If you throw up, don't throw up on me."
"I'm bored."
"You just jumped off an exploding helicopter, saw your father die, and you're bored?!"
"Yeah."
"Eh."
Chapter VI: The End (Narrator: Retelin)
My sister and I are on the ground. Just landed. We would've been happy to be alive, if we weren't about to lose our life. I had a feeling we would when I heard a familiar voice screaming something I didn't like.
"I WILL GET YOU, KILL YOU, AND HAVE YOU DEAD!" It was Hunter's voice. "ONLY ONE OF ALL OF MY SPOTTERS IN MY GROUP DIED WITH THAT HELICOPTER'S MINE! AND ARTEMIS WAS WITH ME! YOU KILLED MY FIANSE!"
"Eh, run." My sister suggested. I didn't need her to say that again to follow the suggestion. 15 people wanting to kill us. Suddenly, in front of us a figure appeared. My father.
"You're alive." I said.
"No time to talk. No time to run. Only time to face."
"What?"
"Let's kill those Spotters."
"Fine." I turned, and turned Star around. Father gave us Class-A guns. My father, my sister, and I ran towards the Spotters. We started shooting. Star killed 1, 2, then 3 Spotters. My father killed 2. He wasn't the best shooter. He was a general, he planned ideas to triumph. I was feeling like we were going to win, until a Spotter shot my sister in the stomach.
"Sister!" I shot the Spotter that shot her, killing him, then told my father to hold them off.
"Sister..."
"I'm-I'm dying... Go... Kill... Spotters... For me..."
"Star-"
"Don't talk, just attack."
I turned around, crying, just to find my father on the floor, dead, but for real this time, and no Spotters except for my brother. I went to him, and pointed my gun at him, and he did at me. I had one last mine. There was only one way to end this madness.
"I have diarrhea!" I screamed. My brother, surprised, was distracted. While that happened, I put the mine on the floor, and said my last words.
"Goodbye, brother." I said, and I stepped on the mine.
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Well, at least most of us died sane.
At leasr Etelin, and his Dad did.
Star's crazy, but random crazy. Huntr's crazy crazy.
"You just parachuted from a mined helicopter, watched our dad die, and you're bored?!"
"Yes."
"Eh."

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I'm not following this series very well. One whole part is dedicated entirely to speech, but I have no idea who's talking when, who's talking at all, and what they are talking about. There are a few 'Ruthelin said's but that's not enough to get an idea of what's going on
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What Blade said.
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DaGamez wrote:
Eugh. SImply, Eugh.
Coughing? Some kind of disease?
Get away from me, infected!
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