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#1 2010-07-10 10:33:19

DaGamez
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War III: Master of Disguise {SNEAK PEAK}

Chapter I: Master of Disguise (Narrator: Star)

Hunter tried shooting me. Luckily, I'm many things, including crazy, always bored, etc., but if I'm anything, I'm a master of disguise. Yes, that's right. I hired someone to do that, while I disguised as Retelin, for he was too sleepy to wake up. I'm alive, and Retelin's mad because Hunter tried killing me. Hunter's screwed now, because when Retelin gets mad, well, he's a little more violent than he usually is. I have nothing to say, except war's coming, and we should all be scared. Love it or not, the world will end someday.
"John, you back on our mission?" I asked John Miller, the best air pilot the Marints have ever seen.
"Yes, and I have the plane ready. Are you ready to go to the Spotter's area?" he asked me.
"Are you ready?" I asked Retelin. He nodded.
"Yes, Lt. Miller, we are ready.""Great. Nobody else?" John asked."Yes, I'm awaiting Jeremy Kone." Replied Retelin.
"Oh, he's behind you." John said."What?"
"Yes, I am." Kone came out of nowhere.
"Okay, enough with the jokes, let's go." Retelin said."Okay." Everyone else agreed. We started our journey. Little did we know we wouldn't see our area for a long time.


Chapter II: Forgive me, my dear Artemis. (Narrator: Hunter)
"Just please, please give me another chance!"
"Ugh, fine. But if I see you with another Marint..."
"It won't happen again. He was my brother. I would've killed him, but my mom was there. I killed her, so there's nothing to worry about."
"You killed your mother!?"
"Um... Kinda..."
"Good, I didn't like her. Let's see in the place we first met, the corner."
"Awesome! I'll be there at 7:30. See you there!” I said. I hanged up the phone. I was so happy, I just got Artemis back. Yes, I was speaking with Artemis on the phone.

"Hey Hunter!" Artemis signaled to me.
"Hey Artemis! I thought you weren't coming for a second...”
"I'm sorry I'm so late. So, how's life been?""Good, good. No, it was horrible. I thought I lost you.”
"I'll always come back, no matter what.”
"Thanks. That means a lot to me. I'm supposing you won't marry me after what happened... Right?”
"Eventually, maybe, but for now I think it's better if we're... You know, not married. Maybe it's a little too soon.”
"Maybe."

Chapter III: Life and Beyond, Death and Below (Narrator: Retelin)

"We'll get that idiot... He didn't know who he was messing with when he shot you." I was talking to Star.
"Calm down..." Star replied.
"What? No! He tried killing you! You're the only good family I have left!"
"Hunter's your brother."
"Good family."
"Oh."
"We're there. C'mon, lets go." Miller told us.
"Okay-"
"Wha-" *Shot*
"Miller!" Screamed my sister and I.
"I guess we weren't careful enough..." I told Star.
"Go! Go Go Go Go!" I heard a voice that sounded familiar.
"Father?"


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#2 2010-07-10 10:50:01

Star_the_fox
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Re: War III: Master of Disguise {SNEAK PEAK}

Didn't really see the father part coming. Good job!


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#3 2010-07-10 10:54:41

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Re: War III: Master of Disguise {SNEAK PEAK}

Thanks! Yeah, but that's how Sneak Peaks work, you have to have it end catchy, so when the full version comes out, everyone wants to see what happened with the father.


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