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#1 2010-07-01 13:59:53

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Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Hey, everyone! I just finished V2.0 of my 'Dodge the Crosshairs' game!

Gameplay:
You're a stickman trying to escape crosshairs, bombs, guns, etc.!

Controls:
Arrow keys to move and up to jump.

I'm willing to do F4F or Feedback for Feedback- you give me feedback on my game, and then I'll try your game and give you some feedback  smile . Just post and say which game/project you want some feedback on. I'll do 5 F4F's  yikes


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#2 2010-07-01 19:47:10

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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#3 2010-07-02 12:25:44

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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#4 2010-07-04 12:29:22

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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#5 2010-07-05 01:13:40

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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#6 2010-07-05 18:24:50

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Fun game! My high score was somewhere around 55. I got killed by the first bomb.  lol  My only recommendation is that you add at least 1 more rooftop on the right side. I think one would be good; I just think that that side is way to open.

Project I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gettysburg11/667665


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#7 2010-07-05 18:42:28

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

gettysburg11 wrote:

Fun game! My high score was somewhere around 55. I got killed by the first bomb.  lol  My only recommendation is that you add at least 1 more rooftop on the right side. I think one would be good; I just think that that side is way to open.

Project I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gettysburg11/667665

Will do  smile .

Feedback:
It's a funny animation, but:
1. You should make it longer.
2. Improve the graphics at least a bit. Take the lever, for example- you could draw a better lever I'm sure  smile


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#8 2010-07-05 18:48:37

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:

Fun game! My high score was somewhere around 55. I got killed by the first bomb.  lol  My only recommendation is that you add at least 1 more rooftop on the right side. I think one would be good; I just think that that side is way to open.

Project I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gettysburg11/667665

Will do  smile .

Feedback:
It's a funny animation, but:
1. You should make it longer.
2. Improve the graphics at least a bit. Take the lever, for example- you could draw a better lever I'm sure  smile

I should probably tell you this. I slapped that together in about a half hour because it was the deadline day for the Scratch Olympics (this competition that went on last summer) and my team didn't have an animation yet. So I probably could draw a better lever if I had had more time.


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#9 2010-07-05 18:59:03

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:

Fun game! My high score was somewhere around 55. I got killed by the first bomb.  lol  My only recommendation is that you add at least 1 more rooftop on the right side. I think one would be good; I just think that that side is way to open.

Project I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gettysburg11/667665

Will do  smile .

Feedback:
It's a funny animation, but:
1. You should make it longer.
2. Improve the graphics at least a bit. Take the lever, for example- you could draw a better lever I'm sure  smile

I should probably tell you this. I slapped that together in about a half hour because it was the deadline day for the Scratch Olympics (this competition that went on last summer) and my team didn't have an animation yet. So I probably could draw a better lever if I had had more time.

That makes sense. You should work on the graphics  smile


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#10 2010-07-05 19:25:18

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

Will do  smile .

Feedback:
It's a funny animation, but:
1. You should make it longer.
2. Improve the graphics at least a bit. Take the lever, for example- you could draw a better lever I'm sure  smile

I should probably tell you this. I slapped that together in about a half hour because it was the deadline day for the Scratch Olympics (this competition that went on last summer) and my team didn't have an animation yet. So I probably could draw a better lever if I had had more time.

That makes sense. You should work on the graphics  smile

I would, but I don't usually revisit old projects of mine. I have a whole list of ideas I made that I'm looking to pursue.


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#11 2010-07-05 19:30:42

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:


I should probably tell you this. I slapped that together in about a half hour because it was the deadline day for the Scratch Olympics (this competition that went on last summer) and my team didn't have an animation yet. So I probably could draw a better lever if I had had more time.

That makes sense. You should work on the graphics  smile

I would, but I don't usually revisit old projects of mine. I have a whole list of ideas I made that I'm looking to pursue.

But the project could be so much better if you just edited it a bit  yikes


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#12 2010-07-05 19:31:38

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:


That makes sense. You should work on the graphics  smile

I would, but I don't usually revisit old projects of mine. I have a whole list of ideas I made that I'm looking to pursue.

But the project could be so much better if you just edited it a bit  yikes

Maybe I will edit it then. Thank you for telling me that.


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#13 2010-07-05 19:32:50

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:


I would, but I don't usually revisit old projects of mine. I have a whole list of ideas I made that I'm looking to pursue.

But the project could be so much better if you just edited it a bit  yikes

Maybe I will edit it then. Thank you for telling me that.

You're welcome  smile


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#14 2010-07-05 19:49:50

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:


But the project could be so much better if you just edited it a bit  yikes

Maybe I will edit it then. Thank you for telling me that.

You're welcome  smile

So far I made the cat's lab coat look more like a lab coat than a giant sheet and made the rest of the background red.


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#15 2010-07-05 19:51:33

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

gettysburg11 wrote:

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

gettysburg11 wrote:


Maybe I will edit it then. Thank you for telling me that.

You're welcome  smile

So far I made the cat's lab coat look more like a lab coat than a giant sheet and made the rest of the background red.

Great! Can't wait to see the updated version ^_^


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#16 2010-07-05 21:53:15

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Okay. Cool game! Here's your feedback: I like how I can jump on the roofs to dodge, however I feel that you should add a high score. I believe this can be achieved with the following script:

[blocks]<when green flag clicked>
<forever>
<if> <( <{ score }> <>> <{ high score }>  )>
<set{ high score }to( <{ score }>
<end>
<end>[/blocks]

I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Aidan/1004293

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#17 2010-07-05 22:43:07

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Aidan wrote:

Okay. Cool game! Here's your feedback: I like how I can jump on the roofs to dodge, however I feel that you should add a high score. I believe this can be achieved with the following script:

[blocks]<when green flag clicked>
<forever>
<if> <( <{ score }> <>> <{ high score }>  )>
<set{ high score }to( <{ score }>
<end>
<end>[/blocks]

I would like feedback on: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Aidan/1004293

Thank you! I'll try that  smile

I favorited and loved it! It's REALLY addicting! It'd be nice if you could make the ball go up by pressing space rather than having to click bunches. Also, the timer should appear at the very beginning. Why did you make it come in at yellow? Last thing: you may want to ake it so you can reset the game by clicking a button rather than always clicking flag.


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#18 2010-07-05 22:50:11

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Nice game! My main complaints are:
1. Your guy isn't too well animated. (Or rather, he isnt at all.)

2. NEEDS MOAR SOUND. (You can never have enough!)

Other than that, not bad!

Oh, and I wants feedback on these thingys:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/907133
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1156104
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1148594
THANKS!


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#19 2010-07-05 23:11:44

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

PW132 wrote:

Nice game! My main complaints are:
1. Your guy isn't too well animated. (Or rather, he isnt at all.)

2. NEEDS MOAR SOUND. (You can never have enough!)

Other than that, not bad!

Oh, and I wants feedback on these thingys:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/907133
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1156104
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1148594
THANKS!

Only one  yikes


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#20 2010-07-05 23:13:17

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

PW132 wrote:

Nice game! My main complaints are:
1. Your guy isn't too well animated. (Or rather, he isnt at all.)

2. NEEDS MOAR SOUND. (You can never have enough!)

Other than that, not bad!

Oh, and I wants feedback on these thingys:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/907133
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1156104
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PW132/1148594
THANKS!

Only one  yikes

...OOPSIES! (doh!)


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#21 2010-07-06 23:04:21

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

Bumpeth


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#22 2010-07-08 16:58:39

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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#23 2010-07-14 00:22:52

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Re: Dodge the Crosshairs! (Casual)

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