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I was bored, felt like writing(er, typing) a story. And I was thinking about Atmosphir, so why not make a story that takes place in Cirrus? So here's my story. Oh, and just so you don't get confused, Max is the name of the main character/narrator.


Cirrus

Prologue
     I woke up in my bed just as the sun was rising over the horizon and it was time to go train. I sat up and picked up my wooden sword and walked out the door of his house.  My friend, Sam, greeted me at the door. Sam was a nice guy, but he tended to be a little over excited...
     "Hey, Max, guess what!" He exclaimed, but continued before I could respond, "Today we get to learn how to use some cool techniques! I heard Lia say we were gonna learn about stunning opponents!"
     "Ok... But why would we need to know that? The only threat are crabs, and those are easy to beat, just jump on them." I mumbled. The training seems pointless... Or does Master know something we don't? I thought.

     I swung my sword at Lia and she blocked. She swung at me and I did the same as she did before. We continued trading blows for a minute.
     "Why do you think we have to train?" I blurted out as and held my sword up to block her attack.
     Lia shrugged, "I dunno. It doesn't seem to make sense. The only thing dangerous here are crabs..." Lia swung again, this time catching me off guard. I stepped back and held my side.
     "Nice swung," I muttered. The blow had hurt, but I didn't think Lia meant it. The pain wore off quickly, but it left a bruise.
     "Heh, sorry." Lia said, giggling. I glared at her and Master announced that training was over. He had a very worried look and glanced towards the gate that lead outside of our small town.
     "Master?" I asked, walking up to him, "What's wrong?"
     "Nothing..." he replied and turned away from me. I had the feeling that he was lying, but I left anyways to go play some AtmoBall with Samuel and some other kids.

     That night I was lying in my bed, unable to sleep. Something's up... I have to find out...




If you can edit for me, feel free to. Right now it might not seem so Atmosphirish, but you'll just have to wait. Any comments? Also, see what Atmosphir is here. Some of the jokes later in the story won't make sense unless you know a bit about atmosphir.

Last edited by keikij (2010-07-05 06:12:38)