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#51 2010-06-28 08:07:35
- MaxtheWeirdo
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Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
When will chapter 6 come? Just wondering.
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#53 2010-06-29 15:58:56
- MaxtheWeirdo
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Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
Soon, huh?
Bump.
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#55 2010-07-02 00:31:31
- Blade-Edge
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Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
half_life_2 wrote:
Remove troll, add better enemies, including rebel leaders, riots, and other things to make this book better.
No. This is the internet, and there will be trolls
I'm talking about the story, by the way
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#56 2010-07-02 08:12:37
Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
Chapter 6:
I ran off. Out of that alley. I knew that the hackers would come and make us prey. I ran. I thought. I stopped.
Duskclaw!
I ran back, and she was still there, stunned in fear at what she saw. She saw, a tall, metallic, robot humanoid with a human brain in its head.
'Move out of the way, Duskclaw! Its a hacker!' I yell.
Before she could move out of the hacker's path, the hacker shot her with what I estimated to be a Hax0r Hypno Ray. A Hax0r Hypno Ray can hack PEOPLE, not just programs. I knew, soon, Duskclaw would turn on me to the hacker's side.
The long, thin, shiny blue strands of the beam that was coming out of the ray were wrapping around her head. 2 went into her ears. Then, it released her and she fell down. I waited, staring at her, same with the hacker. Then, she got up and said '1 am 1337. U 0b3y m3. 1337N335 charging... charge complete. Awesomeness charging... charge complete. N0w, 1, du3 2 my b05535 0rd3rz, 1 mu5t pwn u!'
I gasped. She spoke in 1337 speak. Well, everyone knows real hackers don't speak like that, so she was just a mere minion. She wasn't gone for good. I could get her back!
Suddenly, the hacker pointed the ray towards me.
There was a shot.
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#59 2010-07-02 12:22:37
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Awesome epicness! Once its done you should gather up all the chapters into one post or project. Can't wait for chapter 7!
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#62 2010-07-02 13:59:28
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I'd like to see this in print.
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#64 2010-07-02 14:46:33
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I'm typing my short story into Scratch.
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#66 2010-07-02 15:10:20
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I have finished making a rough draft of the book version.
Download it now!
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#67 2010-07-02 15:16:09
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Um, the Epilogue comes after.
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#68 2010-07-02 15:21:20
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Aidan wrote:
Um, the Epilogue comes after.
It's a prologue, if you look at the first post of the thread. 
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
~ Eleanor Roosevelt
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#69 2010-07-02 15:28:17
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Greatdane wrote:
Aidan wrote:
Um, the Epilogue comes after.
It's a prologue, if you look at the first post of the thread.
But it says epilogue.
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#70 2010-07-02 15:33:33
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Sorry to spam, but I uploaded my short story.
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#71 2010-07-02 15:34:09
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Greatdane wrote:
http://imgur.com/bYcN1.jpg
I'm thinking of this as a simple cover.
I'll get someone else to do it later, it's a sketch.
try making the smile a sad face like this 
or 
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#72 2010-07-02 16:10:12
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Aidan wrote:
Greatdane wrote:
Aidan wrote:
Um, the Epilogue comes after.
It's a prologue, if you look at the first post of the thread.
But it says epilogue.
Really?
Ok, I updated it. Changing the link...
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
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#73 2010-07-02 17:43:21
- poppypaynterscratch
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Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
nice.. maybe check for spelling errors?
w00t 69th post 
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#74 2010-07-02 17:46:52
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poppypaynterscratch wrote:
nice.. maybe check for spelling errors?
w00t 69th post
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#75 2010-07-02 17:59:23
- poppypaynterscratch
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Re: Scratch City: A Book about Online Chaos
Aidan wrote:
poppypaynterscratch wrote:
nice.. maybe check for spelling errors?
w00t 69th post
laso, could you possibly convert it all into PDF? .doc only has a [removed] compatability mode on mac... PDF works everywhere
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