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Chapter I: The first fight.

I've been with Star (Thanks to Star_The_Fox) and Hunter (Thanks to svinnk) all day. Star's my little sister, and Hunter's my little brother. By a day. Hunter and I hated each other for years, but I forgave him. In T-Force (A War school) he once shot me. He said it was an accident. But, he hated me, how could I know?
"Hunter, Star, there's some targets over there. Shoot them!" I said. My name's Retelin. I'm a private, but I'm hoping to someday be a sergeant. I know I will be. Then I felt something in my foot. "Ow..." I mumbled, falling to the ground, as I saw the bullet.
"That's what you get, brother." Hunter rasped to me.
"W-Why did you do this to me?"
"Oh, so young. Can't you remember anything about our childhood?"
"Yes. Everything."
"What happened to dad?"
"Erm... I don't remember that."
"YOU killed him. I don't care if it was an accident. Now it's your time to pay!"
"NO!" Star yelled. she jumped, and then shot Hunter. Missed. Hunter started running away.
"I'll get you, traitor!" he screamed.
"Traitor?" I asked. "He betrayed us. How are we the traitors?"
"What happened to dad?" Star asked.
"What?"
"What happened to dad?"
"I... I don't remember."
"Tell me. I can tell when you lie."
"Fine. You were only one... I was five. It was my birthday, and dad gave me my first gun. He wanted me to be a soldier. He told me to shoot a target. I thought he meant he was the target. I was stupid back then, I didn't know it would do anything to him if I shot him..."
"You killed dad?!?"
"It was an accident. I loved dad!"
"Hmph... you're saying the truth..."
"Of course I am!"
"Okay, let's go."
"Where?"
"To the spotters."
"The enemies? We'll get killed!"
"Hunter must be there. Still have your camo suits from last year?"
"From when you were 12, I was 16, and we were fighting Kenny with our creatures Yeah." I went across to my trailer-home, and returned a minute later with my camo suits.
"Cool."
"I'm not going." I mumbled, as I felt more shots. I looked around me. There were at least 10 Spotters.
"Ah!" Star yelled. She grabbed me, then got me in the house in time. We put on our camo suits, and we left without anyone noticing. I looked back at my trailer-home. So beautiful... but it was being destroyed. I got my sniper-machine gun, and shot each one of the enemies. Star looked puzzled.
"What? I can't bring the gun dad gave me?" It spilled out. I didn't even remember that. So many memories coming back to me...

Chapter II: The memories.

'I remembered my old house. White, and as big as a mansion! We had a nice swimming pool, with a big blue slide. That's where Jacob, Star's twin, died.
We had an awesome dog! Giant schnauzer. I loved it so much... Before it ran away, at the age of ten, when I was six. My first school, T-Force. What a good school...' I thought. But I was awaken by Star's frantic screams.
"Just five more minutes, mommy." I said. Then I remembered another thing: I was 17 in war. Mom's in Italy. What was I saying?
"Hunter... He's here!" I was awaken by the word, Hunter.
"Where?" Then I saw him. I went for my sniper-machine gun. Gone. I saw hunter, and saw my gun.
"YOU ROBBED MY GUN?!?!" I asked/screamed, because that gun was so very important to me.
"I'll kill you!" I went for him. Pretty stupid. I had a pistol, and he had a super-powerful gun. He shot me repeatedly. My next image was the hospital.
"Wha-Where am I?" I screamed. "What happened?"
"You're awake!" Star screamed, gleaming with joy. "I thought I lost you..."
"Where's Hunter?" I got up.
"Wait wait wait wait... You're not in condition to go to battle in any shape, form or size!"
"But I must goæo..."
"See? You even talk weird."
"Thæt'd a Jie (That's a lie)! Oh...MÆ...Gæd!" I screamed.
"Hunter's dead."
"What?"
"Hunter wasn't the man he appeared to be. He was here. He traitored us. Then he accidentally jumped off a cliff. The man that shot you and robbed your gun was-"
"SOMÆONÆ ROBBÆD MÆ GUN?"
"Yes. A spotter. I killed him with your pistol. I stay in camoflauge without jumping at enemies." That sentence made me feel stupid. I felt my throat getting better.
"Where's my gun?"
"Here." She gave me my gun.

Chapter III: I explode a perfectly good schoolbus (Lol, Percy Jackson).

I just left the hospital. Someone pushed me. Star was still inside, paying the doctor.
"Hunte-"
"Shut up. You killed dad, you pushed me off a cliff, now you die!"
"I didn't push you off a cliff!"
"Sure." He said, as he put his gun next to my head, and reloaded it.

TO BE CONTINUED



Immediately.


"Hunter, you're my brother!"
"Maybe. But I hate you!"
"Forgive me, brother, as I forgave you for the... accident at T-Force."
"Accident? I did that on purpose!"
"You're evil."
"You killed father!" He said, as he started shooting, with his eyes closed. He then saw tons of what looked like blood on the floor, and left. It was not blood. Luckily I always have an extra can of ketchup! I then went with Star to the bus, to get back to my new home, in the Marint (Our war side) area. The bus suddenly stopped. The driver came to us.
"Hello. Tea and cake or death?"
"Um... Tea and cake, please?"
"Glad you know it's opposite day!" I then realized it was Monday. Darn.
"Hunter?"
"Yes." He said, as he took out his gun. I ran out, with Star. Everyone except Hunter pretty much got out. I got my lucky sniper-machine gun, and shot the bus so many times it exploded. Having made sure he was dead, Star and I walked back to out home.

Chapter IV: The promotion.

I get back home, and everyone's looking at me, as if I were an alien or something.
"Congratulations, Retelin, you are now Sergeant!" Someone said.
"Wha-Why?"
"You killed the leader of the Spotters, Hunter!"
"Oh, that? Yeah, I did, but I couldn't have done it without my little sister, Star. She saved me."
"Then both of you are promoted!" someone says. Me and my sister, Sergeants.
"Wait, does that mean I have to be in a different group than her?" I ask.
"Fortunately, Unfortunately, no. You can't be." A man says.
"Then I don't want to be sergeant." Star says.
"Seriously?" I ask.
"Yes. I want to be in his group." She replies.
"Great." I say, as we go to our house. "Great."

COMING SOON: WAR II: Alive?