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Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 21:46:46

Hey, everyone! I just thought I could get feedback for my series, Shift Beast. It's about a wolf-shape-shifting tribe named the God Tribe fighting against Humans for reasons long forgotten. I take an unusual boy named Zane Zake as the main character, and focus on how he sees the world.

His parents and older sister were taken by the war. Zane feels that the world is slowly taking his breath. Plus, he was prophesized to have a demon watching over him, so his own people give him nasty looks and generaly fear him. So, what do you guys think?

Heres the Opening: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Half-Wolf-Leader/168979

Here's Zane and his wolf demi form:

Tell me what you think!

Last edited by Half-Wolf-Leader (2008-06-08 11:04:32)

funkymonkey · 2008-06-07 22:05:46

you drew that? nice!

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:06:29

funkymonkey wrote:
you drew that? nice!

Thanks! What do you think about the series?

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:07:51

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
funkymonkey wrote:
you drew that? nice!
Thanks! What do you think about the series?

I think it sounds awesome, how do you come up with something that good.

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:09:44

geckofreak wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
funkymonkey wrote:
you drew that? nice!
Thanks! What do you think about the series?
I think it sounds awesome, how do you come up with something that good.

I'm not sure. I think it had to do with my overactive imagination or something. Or twilight princess. I luv Wolf Link

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:12:44

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
geckofreak wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:

Thanks! What do you think about the series?
I think it sounds awesome, how do you come up with something that good.
I'm not sure. I think it had to do with my overactive imagination or something. Or twilight princess. I luv Wolf Link

Wolf link should be in brawl. WOlf link did get a little annoying after a while, but he was very fun to play with the first few times. TP was a great game but too easy. The only hard part was the ball and chain knight

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:15:11

Ya he should... we're getting off topic

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:18:47

Do you have brawl?

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:19:52

geckofreak wrote:
Do you have brawl?

Yeah.... seriously, we're getting off topic

Bluestribute · 2008-06-07 22:22:20

What about chickens? Do you have those?

lol, anyways the drawing looks cool

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:23:31

Bluestribute wrote:
What about chickens? Do you have those?

What do you mean?

Bluestribute · 2008-06-07 22:25:33

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
Bluestribute wrote:
What about chickens? Do you have those?
What do you mean?

The animals. Chickens. My friend does

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:26:36

Bluestribute wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
Bluestribute wrote:
What about chickens? Do you have those?
What do you mean?
The animals. Chickens. My friend does

Lol, no. guys, we are far off topic

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:26:41

Bluestribute wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
Bluestribute wrote:
What about chickens? Do you have those?
What do you mean?
The animals. Chickens. My friend does

You aren't right in the head

Bluestribute · 2008-06-07 22:26:54

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
Bluestribute wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:

What do you mean?
The animals. Chickens. My friend does
Lol, no. guys, we are far off topic

I said nice drawing!

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:32:58

But what do you think of the plot?

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:33:58

Seriously though, do you have brawl and if so whats your friend code and best character

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-07 22:35:11

geckofreak wrote:
Seriously though, do you have brawl and if so whats your friend code and best character

I don't have wi-fi My best characters are Link and Lucario

geckofreak · 2008-06-07 22:37:15

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
geckofreak wrote:
Seriously though, do you have brawl and if so whats your friend code and best character
I don't have wi-fi My best characters are Link and Lucario

Wow, MY bests are Zelda/Sheik and Lucario, I jsut put my FC back in my signiture. You really should get a wii fi connection, online play is awesome

Bobby500 · 2008-06-08 05:34:49

The plot looks great, good job. I have read som many books so you can't beleive and if you keep the plot like that and nothing so unbeleivable happens that it gets to unreal, then yes, you have a great plot line right there.

Oh and my best characters are snake and sonic.

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-08 10:19:27

Bobby500 wrote:
The plot looks great, good job. I have read som many books so you can't beleive and if you keep the plot like that and nothing so unbeleivable happens that it gets to unreal, then yes, you have a great plot line right there.

Thanks!

funkymonkey · 2008-06-08 10:21:18

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
funkymonkey wrote:
you drew that? nice!
Thanks! What do you think about the series?

its pretty good. when will you start on it?

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-08 10:26:14

funkymonkey wrote:
Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:
funkymonkey wrote:
you drew that? nice!
Thanks! What do you think about the series?
its pretty good. when will you start on it?

I've already started writing it, and I have 3 episodes up. Here are the links to the story: part 1: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Half-Wolf-Leader/173067
part 2: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Half-Wolf-Leader/174505
and you can go to this gallery to watch the episodes: http://scratch.mit.edu/galleries/view/16488

funkymonkey · 2008-06-08 10:40:54

make the episodes way longer... but they're still good.

Half-Wolf-Leader · 2008-06-08 20:14:38

funkymonkey wrote:
make the episodes way longer... but they're still good.

Good advice... but it's a lot of drawing and animating, so I don't know (srry I didnt reply earlier)

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