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Penguinsrock · 2010-05-17 20:29:13

OK. I didn't get the attention of my fellow RPers, so I came here to ask for critique...Not too harsh though, but not too...softly, I guess? Quick stuff:
Things to remember...
1. This is a Vocaloid. Go Google It(Heh, name of a song from a Vocaloid)
2. This is a fanmade OC
3. Click the image to blow it up(make it full size)
4. Scanning kills quality overall
5. I is only 10. I AM against age discrimination, but when you are older - You've had more time to gain experience.
6. Be constructive
7. I can be sensitive when it comes to art
8. Please give a rating out of 5 or 10, along with a long or short reason
9. Read the description
10. Be honest
THANK YOU! Here it is: http://purple-rage.deviantart.com/art/Fanloid-Satsune-Sakehime-164417033
You can comment on the art, or as a reply to this.

Last edited by Penguinsrock (2010-05-17 20:39:19)

Aidan · 2010-05-17 20:48:09

The paper looks all wrinkly.

Penguinsrock · 2010-05-17 21:00:01

Aidan wrote:
The paper looks all wrinkly.

Read the description. -.-
Sorry, but it makes me annoyed easily. I'm being harsh, but I can't control it - I don't care.
1. Not a critique 2. How does that have to do with the art 3. You read the description, and you'll notice why it's wrinkly...
P.S: Sorry, I can get annoyed with this kind of stuff. If it's not contructive, or if it's not a good critique - I'll be annoyed.

Last edited by Penguinsrock (2010-05-17 21:00:11)

PlayWithFire · 2010-05-17 21:23:34

very nice

littletonkslover · 2010-05-17 21:26:06

dA is crashing my old internet.

Blade-Edge · 2010-05-17 21:47:24

It's too blurry to critique
I'll do it later when I'm on dA

Penguinsrock · 2010-05-18 19:38:23

Blade-Edge wrote:
It's too blurry to critique
I'll do it later when I'm on dA

Is it? That's odd, it's the quality that bad..? Dumb scanner sad

Penguinsrock · 2010-05-18 19:40:00

PlayWithFire wrote:
very nice

Thank you very much. What would you rate this? A bit on why it's good, and what I could improve on would be much appreciated.

PlayWithFire · 2010-05-18 19:42:47

Penguinsrock wrote:
PlayWithFire wrote:
very nice
Thank you very much. What would you rate this? A bit on why it's good, and what I could improve on would be much appreciated.

i don't know much about art myself but i thought it looked nice. 9/10
for improvement the paper was a little messy looking, maybe you could try to fix that for next time tongue

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Critique please(art)?

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