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#1 2010-05-11 22:20:23
My try at Shakespeare.
I wrote a little play. This is the "censored" version, that's slightly rewritten, but now that I read it again the censored one again, I think it's better than the first.
This is about the death of Gaius Julius Caesar, who was assassinated on the fifteenth of March in 44 B.C. Toward the end is a slightly graphic description, but it's not really bad.
http://cocoanutv.deviantart.com/art/Cae … -163757343
On dA, though, the formatting is slightly messed up (see notes), but it's better than posting it directly to Scratch.
Shakespeare's Julius Caesar was a tragedy. This, however, is a comedy. 
Enjoy.
Et tu, Brute
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#5 2010-05-12 00:14:57
Re: My try at Shakespeare.
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Lots of mild swearing.
Like? My view of "mild swearing" would be censored on the Scratch forum. "Stupid" and "dolt" and "moron," in my view, would not be considered swearing at all. We're all different in some ways, though.
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#7 2010-05-12 08:33:29
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Chrischb wrote:
Too short for an actual play.
But funny! (In my opinion, of course) 
To cocoanut: I'm guessing that most of the people on the Scratch forums haven't read Julius Caesar, so they probably won't get the jokes...
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#8 2010-05-12 10:46:54
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Chrischb wrote:
Too short for an actual play.
Okay, skit.
scmb1 wrote:
To cocoanut: I'm guessing that most of the people on the Scratch forums haven't read Julius Caesar, so they probably won't get the jokes...
True... but for most of them, you don't need to actually read the play, you just need to have a little knowledge of ancient Rome. Wikipedia gives you plenty of info on Caesar's assassination, too: http://wikipedia.org/wiki/Assassination … ius_Caesar
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you are becoming the essence of shakespeare
I wish
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#9 2010-05-12 10:53:01
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Re: My try at Shakespeare.
I don't like Shakespeare. 3x
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#11 2010-05-12 10:54:28
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Re: My try at Shakespeare.
MyRedNeptune wrote:
I don't like Shakespeare. 3x
Not even Midsummer Night's dream? Or that modern day movie version of Romeo and Juliet as rival mafia families?
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#12 2010-05-12 11:34:18
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cocoanut wrote:
MyRedNeptune wrote:
I don't like Shakespeare. 3x
Then this is perfect for you.
Hehe... well it was actually quite good. ^^
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Or that modern day movie version of Romeo and Juliet as rival mafia families?
Ew, no. >.>
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#14 2010-05-12 17:48:31
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cocoanut wrote:
Et tu, Brute
Which one? There were two Brutuses. xD
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#15 2010-05-12 18:01:54
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Caesar isn't that smart in your script. lol
^ Oooh, shiny!
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#17 2010-05-12 18:19:17
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We're studying Ancient Rome is Social Studies
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#18 2010-05-12 18:20:03
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We're studying Ancient Rome is Social Studies
Been there, done that.
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#19 2010-05-12 18:24:56
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Re: My try at Shakespeare.
cocoanut wrote:
TheGenius95 wrote:
Caesar isn't that smart in your script. lol
How so?
She probably means that Caesar still thought they were having a party with their pointy daggers in hand. 
Obviously they were gonna kill him!
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#20 2010-05-12 18:25:11
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waveOSBeta wrote:
We're studying Ancient Rome is Social Studies
OMG, SO AM I!!!!!! (Wouldn't it be freaky If we went t the same school, and had no clue??)
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#21 2010-05-12 18:27:54
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Re: My try at Shakespeare.
peckychicken wrote:
cocoanut wrote:
TheGenius95 wrote:
Caesar isn't that smart in your script. lol
How so?
She probably means that Caesar still thought they were having a party with their pointy daggers in hand.
Peckychicken is right.
^ Oooh, shiny!
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#22 2010-05-12 20:02:17
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Yeah. I'm in Massachusetts.
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#23 2010-05-12 20:08:58
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MY SAAAAAAAAAAAAALLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!
Great work.
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#24 2010-05-12 20:59:18
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No! My dear Brutus, why? Oh no, why you? Please!
MY SAAAAAAAAAAALLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!
LOL!
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