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#1 2010-04-21 19:17:58

Telemachus
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Registered: 2010-04-21
Posts: 500+

First Project!

Hey Scratch community, I just made my first project! It's a diving simulation game, where you attempt to attain a gold, silver, or bronze medal. Points are awarded for a range of different factors. Right now I'm trying to improve it and make it more fun, and perhaps add additional levels. I would really appreciate some opinions and constructive criticism!  smile  Thank you!
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Telemachus/1000471

Last edited by Telemachus (2010-04-25 14:07:13)


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#2 2010-04-21 19:46:32

jakethegunner
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Registered: 2010-04-21
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Re: First Project!

Hey ,

i didnt really know what buttons to press at 1st , i found out in the end , nice game!

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#3 2010-04-21 20:03:51

Telemachus
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Re: First Project!

jakethegunner wrote:

Hey ,

i didnt really know what buttons to press at 1st , i found out in the end , nice game!

Thanks so much I will make sure to fix that  smile


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#4 2010-04-22 17:03:15

Telemachus
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Re: First Project!

Hello all, thanks to good support I have been able to get a second project online! Please check it out and give some criticism, it's an arcade-type scroller with multiple levels. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Telemachus/1000755

Also, apologies for not giving the link to my first project! As you can see, I'm still getting used to scratch. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Telemachus/1000471


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#5 2010-04-22 17:10:57

AnonymousTom
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Registered: 2010-03-19
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Re: First Project!

Telemachus wrote:

Hello all, thanks to good support I have been able to get a second project online! Please check it out and give some criticism, it's an arcade-type scroller with multiple levels. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Telemachus/1000755

Also, apologies for not giving the link to my first project! As you can see, I'm still getting used to scratch. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Telemachus/1000471

Great work, on your second project. It's nice how you started off with a kind of project that can possibly be hard to make and it still came out great. The only suggestion I have is too make the moving a little smoother and not so stiff. But, overall you did a great job!

And, don't worry we are not any more superior than you, so don't feel like you are still not good at scratch. We are all at that stage at a certain time.

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#6 2010-04-22 17:28:31

Telemachus
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Posts: 500+

Re: First Project!

Thanks a lot. I don't really know how to make the movement better... perhaps add velocity? I am a bit confused on how to do this with a scroller.

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#7 2010-04-22 17:36:12

DaGamez
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Registered: 2010-04-18
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Re: First Project!

I can teach you Telemachus.


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#8 2010-04-22 17:38:25

Telemachus
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Re: First Project!

Thanks, it would be appreciated  smile


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#9 2010-04-22 17:42:47

DaGamez
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Registered: 2010-04-18
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Re: First Project!

Telemachus wrote:

Thanks, it would be appreciated  smile

Soon I'll upload a scrolling tutorial project.
Meanwhile, ask me some questions about scratch that you don't understand. I'd be happy to help a fellow scratcher!


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#10 2010-04-22 18:27:50

Telemachus
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Re: First Project!

*Edited some minor bugs. Projects should be less bug ridden now  smile


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#11 2010-04-22 22:38:19

tab95
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Registered: 2008-08-04
Posts: 12

Re: First Project!

Nice projects! Good programming on both, but they could use some graphical assistance  smile

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#12 2010-04-23 07:10:06

idkdude
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Registered: 2009-07-23
Posts: 100+

Re: First Project!

Good job on these! I want to see what you will make in the future  smile


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#13 2010-04-23 21:37:15

Telemachus
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Registered: 2010-04-21
Posts: 500+

Re: First Project!

Thank you all for your support! I have now uploaded my third project and am hopefully on the path to becoming a veteran scratcher!


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#14 2010-04-23 21:45:44

DaGamez
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Registered: 2010-04-18
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Re: First Project!

I'm sure by you're tenth project you'll be a veteran scratcher!
I mean, your first project is awesome for a first project!


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#15 2010-04-25 13:41:25

tab95
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Registered: 2008-08-04
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Re: First Project!

Wow, your projects are getting better and better! Keep at it Telemachus!

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#16 2010-05-25 16:18:16

Telemachus
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Registered: 2010-04-21
Posts: 500+

Re: First Project!

w00t! Curated! I'm amazed! Thank you Survivorduck, and anyone who took a look at this project.


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