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Woo. Cheddargirl's advice worked.



Here's something I drew a week ago. Not exactly the best quality, but then again I didn't use any of the filters on the camera. I'll fix it up later in PhotoShop.

Last edited by floatingmagictree (2010-02-27 20:55:22)

Wow, that is really good! I like the pose it is in. Sort of like a leapin' cheetah. It reminds me of a kangaroo. Lol.

floatingmagictree wrote:

Dazachi wrote:

Wow, that is really good! I like the pose it is in. Sort of like a leapin' cheetah. It reminds me of a kangaroo. Lol.

It IS a leaping cheetah.

Obviously. Lol.

soupoftomato wrote:

Dazachi wrote:

floatingmagictree wrote:

It IS a leaping cheetah.

Obviously. Lol.

I . . . ummm . . . knew that . . .

Well so did I. But wanted to make sure that it wasn't a Cheetah/Kangaroo mix. Lol.
Half-true.

soupoftomato wrote:

I meant to put, "It supposed to go like this," on that post you replied to.

Wait what?
By the way I am almost done with my version of Dragon Trainer.

soupoftomato wrote:

Finally . . . 

Then it will be my turn! Did you fix the petting glitch, or just get rid of petting?

Sorry for th confusion, but that cheetah was awesome.

Lets just talk about it in the Unveiled Inc. forum post.

Update with FINISHED EZIO

Click for higher quality.
Done in black pen.

cheddargirl wrote:

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:

Update with FINISHED EZIO
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/ … Kariya.png
Click for higher quality.
Done in black pen.

Hey, that's pretty good. It looks like you drew this with a regular black pen - have you thought about drawing using a nib and India Ink? It's a good skill to learn. 

Chrischb wrote:

Feedback on mine? 

EDIT: It's a new page, and I don't think people usually bother looking back... so I'll post my image again:
http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/1192 … nature.png
There... 

What part of the image do you want critiqued?

Oh yeah Cheddar your advice worked. My drawing is on the top of the page. As you can see I didn't use any filters or white balances on my digital camera but that's OK for now.

littletonkslover wrote:

floatingmagictree wrote:

Woo. Cheddargirl's advice worked.

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4882 … 002271.jpg

Here's something I drew a week ago. Not exactly the best quality, but then again I didn't use any of the filters on the camera. I'll fix it up later in PhotoShop.

That picture made me ROFL. How long did it take?

The entire art period. 40 minutes or less.

And why/how exactly did you ROFL? Is it bad? Or are you ROFLing at the irony?

littletonkslover wrote:

floatingmagictree wrote:

littletonkslover wrote:

That picture made me ROFL. How long did it take?

The entire art period. 40 minutes or less.

And why/how exactly did you ROFL? Is it bad? Or are you ROFLing at the irony?

Both. Just saying, I didn't think it would take that long to draw. I draw stuff like that in 15 min.

I draw mostly in math.

Well I'm not exactly sure myself, seeing how I usually chat away with my friends during Art instead of actually working. I said the entire period as a place holder because I didn't know the exact time.

'Mazing work from Grypwolf. I know I'm not her, but I HAD to share this. So here it is,Art in One Hour.

Half-Wolf-Leader wrote:

Update with FINISHED EZIO
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/ … Kariya.png
Click for higher quality.
Done in black pen.

I really like this drawing. Its awsome! 

Chrischb wrote:

Chrischb wrote:

Feedback on mine? 

EDIT: It's a new page, and I don't think people usually bother looking back... so I'll post my image again:
http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/1192 … nature.png
There... 

cheddargirl wrote:

What part of the image do you want critiqued?

All of it, actually... I just want to get better at drawing on the computer. 

Okay, everything it is then. 

The first thing I notice when looking at this is that you seem to be overusing the smudge tool too much or you're stroking the blur tool too many times over a certain area - it's sometimes hard to tell where the greenery ends and the snow begins. I have a feeling that you were trying to make the image not too pixelated and stiff, but you overdid it. Just stick with the blur tool - stroke a couple of times with the greenery and perhaps only once with the edges of the tree trunk.

Second thing I notice is minimal shading. Looking at your image, it seems that the light source is directly above - there should be some shading on the snow, especially underneath the tree and a small part underneath the bushes.

Third thing is that the cloud looks... strange. Clouds do have shading, so that's one thing you need to fix. The shape of the clouds also bother me - I guess it's because the shape seems so... uniform. Try different shapes and seeing the result.

It's hard to go beyond this point because I have no idea what art program you're using to make this. If your image program has different brushes, try playing around with them for different effects and shapes.