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Episode 11: A Shadow of my former self.

(Maria's Room)
Shadow (thinking): What is going on? Who is this next to Maria? He looks just like me.

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Episode 11: A Shadow of my former self.

(Maria's Room)
(You can only see Shadow's face, whose eyes are wide open)
Shadow (thinking): What is going on? Who is this next to Maria? He looks just like me.
(Shadow see's Maria playing with someone that looks like Shadow. They both stop playing and look up)
Shadow (original): Who are you?
Other Shadow (runs up to him): Who are you?
Shadow (original): I am Shadow the hedgehog, the Ultimate life form.
Other Shadow: No, I am.
[Theme Song]
Shadow: You can not be, I am.
Other Shadow: No, I am.
Shadow (thinking): Oh, Wait, I went back in time, so this is me from fifty years ago.
Shadow: Wait, I am you, just from fifty years later.
Other Shadow: How can-
Shadow: Never mind. Maria, in a short time GUN soldiers will come here and attack the place. They will try and kill anyone who had anything to do with Project: Shadow. In my time, they killed you. I do not want that to happen again. You have to warn Proffesor Gerald!
Maria: O.k, I will tell him. But how will he believe me?
Shadow: Bring both of us with you.
(Room with Sonic, Glow, and Storm.)
Sonic: Where is he?
Glow: Be patient, he is coming.
(A few minutes later, Nazo and Gary come in]
Nazo: Here I am! Where is Jaaku?
Sonic: Look for your self.
(Nazo looks)
Nazo: I don't see him... Oh wait! There he is!
Storm: What do we do?
Nazo: We will get to the air lock with some jetpacks on. We will go after him, and we will try to defeat him. Let's go!
(They head out)
(Proffessor Gerald's work room, approxamitley 12:00 Noon)
(Maria opens the door)
Maria: Hello, Father?
Gerald (not looking up from his work): Yes, Maria?
Maria: I have to tell you something important.
Gerald (still not looking up from his work): What is it, Sweetie?
(Maria tell's him the Story that Shadow told him)
Gerald: That's cute sweetie.
Maria: Look.
(Proffessor Geralald looks and sees the two Shadows)
Gerald: What? Wait, who is the sHADOW that has been living with her on this timeline?
Other Shadow (this timeline): I am.
(Gerald Talks to Shadow)
Gerald: Is what you are saying true? GUN is going to send troops to kill everyone associated with you?
Shadow: Yes it is. And if we do not do anything about them, they will kill Maria and many other people.
Gerald: Then we must escape. I will inform everyone else.
(Gerald goes to a microphone)
Gerald (into microphone): Everyone, GUN soldiers are on their way right now to kill anyone associated with a project we have been working on. Everyone pack up quickly and go to the Escape ships and prepare to head out. We will be leaving in five hours.
Shadow: I have got to go with someone else now to save the future about 2000 something years from now, but once we do, I will come back. Proffessor Gerald, where are you going?
Gerald: To our other Space station on the other side of the planet.
Shadow: Alright, I will see you there soon, hopefully. (To other Shadow) Be on guard.
(Shadow leaves)
(Room where everyone else was)
(Shadow runs in)
Shadow: Where is everybody?
(Shadow looks out the window and sees them flying out in space.)
Shadow: Oh, there they are. Here I come, Sonic.
(Out in space)
(Sonic and pals are flying towards Jaaku)
Sonic: So, who does Jaaku serve, Nazo?
Nazo: His name is Raion. I have never seen him, so I do not know what he looks like.
Sonic: Raion. Wow.
Gary: We are almost there.
Jaaku: Who are you?
Nazo: I am Koskinizo the hedgehog. We know you are up to no good, so we need to take you down.
Jaaku: Alright Koskinizo, I will take you on!
(Sonic does a Sonic spin, but Jaaku bats him away and hits him on the head. Gary and Glow both use their fire attacks, and they hit him but does not do anything. Storm uses her lightning attack, only to find it does not work in space. Nazo uses his red beam attack and it hits Jaaku, only to do small damage.)
Storm: It's is not doing anything!
Nazo: Sonic! Over here.
(Sonic flys over)
(Nazo gives him the eigth emerald)
Sonic: All right!
(Sonic uses the power of the chaos emerald to charge his sonic spin, Nazo uses both hands to charge his beam attack, Gary dissapears and reappears behind Jaaku and charges up his fire attack and Glow charges up her fire power.)
Nazo: Attack!
(Sonic spins at Jaaku, Nazo lanches his red beam, Gary and Glow launch their fire powers)
(They hit him dead on)
Jaaku: Arghhh!
(Jaaku starts to glow (not Glow the character))
Sonic: What is happening to Jaaku?
Nazo: Fly away!
Glow: Why?
Nazo: NOW!
(They start to fly away)
(You see Jaaku smiling)
(A large field expands rapidly around Jaaku)
Nazo: Hurry!
(The field is getting dangerously close)
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Episode 12: Lions and Jewels

Narrator: Last time on Sonic X ...
(Start's with the field starting out)
Nazo: Fly away!
Glow: Why?
Nazo: NOW!
(They start to fly away)
(You see Jaaku smiling)
(A large field expands rapidly around Jaaku)
Nazo: Hurry!
(The field is getting dangerously close)
Narrator: Find out what happens next on Sonic X!
[Theme Song]
(The field is almost on them)
(The field freezes)
Sonic: Huh?
Nazo: Keep flying!
(They see Shadow coming)
Nazo: Shadow! Take the emerald and warp us out of here!
(The field starts moving again)
(Shadow takes the emerald)
Shadow: Chaos Controll!
(They all warp just as the field is about to hit them)
(Somewhere on space colony ark.)
(Sonic & pals warp in)
Sonic: We made it!
(They look out the window. The field is dying down.)
Shadow: Now it won't hit space colony ARK.
(When the field disapears, Jaaku is not there.)
Sonic: Where is Jaaku?
Nazo:He self- destructed.
Gary: What?
Nazo: Just blew up.
Sonic: How could he do that?
Nazo: Raion must of taught him that.
Shadow: Wow.
Nazo: Now we have to get Raion.
Sonic: Where is he this time period?
Nazo: I do not know. I do know where he is in the time period we came from when Jaaku captured us.
Sonic: Let's go there.
Nazo: O.k.
(They go to where they hid the time machine)
Nazo: Get in.
(Everyone got in)
Nazo: Setting it to the time we came from. Warping in three.
Nazo: 2
Nazo: 1
Nazo: Warping.
(You see the time machine warp)
(You see the time machine fade into where the time machine was in the 5009 world)
Nazo: We are here.
(They get out of the time machine.)
Nazo: Follow me.
(They travel a few miles.)
(They stop at a door)
Nazo: O.k, we are almost there. You have to be warned, this will be very tough. Shadow, you hold the emerald, and if I say so, or more than half of us are knocked out, then teleport us out of here.
Shadow: O.k
Nazo: Ready?
Everyone: Yeah!
Nazo: Let's go.
(They enter.)
(You see a 50 foot high lion)
Raion: Jaaku? Is that you?
Nazo: N...N...No Raion. It's not. It is Nazo.
Raion: Nazo. Nazo! You are wanted! I thought Jaaku executed you!
Nazo: Well, he did pretty bad at it.
Raion: ROOOOAAAAARRRR! Fine! If Jaaku can't kill you, I will!
Nazo: Get ready, Guys!
Sonic: Let's get this party started!
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Episode 13: Raion.

Raion: ROOOOOAAAAAARRRRR!
(Raion jumps up high and slams down on the ground, making a shock wave.)
(The shock wave knocks some of Sonic and his pals over.)
Storm, Glow, and Sonic: Whoa!
(Storm, Glow, and Sonic fall over.)
(They get back up)
Nazo: Shadow! Give Sonic the emerald for a second!
(Shadow throws the emerald to Sonic.)
Nazo: Guy's! Just like with Jaaku! Shadow! Charge up an attack and get ready to launch it at Raion.
(Gary goes to the other side of Raion and they all charge up thier powers.)
(They launch thier powers)
(The powers and Sonic hit him dead on.)
Raion: Arghhhh!
(Sonic hands Shadow the emerald)
Raion: You will pay for that!
(Raion starts to get red)
Glow: What is happening?
(A wall of fire comes out of Raion)
Everone: Aaaaah!
(You see the wall of fire from Raion's point of veiw)
(The fire wall dispenses)
(No one is there)
Raion: Hah! That got rid of them!
(Behind Raion)
Nazo (Whispering): Good quick thinking, Shadow!

Last edited by Winner (2009-12-02 18:19:27)

Winner wrote:

((Gary goes to the other side of Raion and they all charge up thier powers.)
(They launch thier powers)
(The powers and Sonic hit him dead on.)
Raion: Arghhhh!
(Sonic hands Shadow the emerald)
Raion: You will pay for that!
(Raion starts to get red)
Glow: What is happening?
(A wall of fire comes out of Raion)
Everone: Aaaaah!
(You see the wall of fire from Raion's point of veiw)
(The fire wall dispenses)
(No one is there)
Raion: Hah! That got rid of them!
(Behind Raion)
Nazo (Whispering): Good quick thinking, Shadow!

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Episode 13: Raion.

Raion: ROOOOOAAAAAARRRRR!
(Raion jumps up high and slams down on the ground, making a shock wave.)
(The shock wave knocks some of Sonic and his pals over.)
Storm, Glow, and Sonic: Whoa!
(Storm, Glow, and Sonic fall over.)
[Theme Song]
(They get back up)
Nazo: Shadow! Give Sonic the emerald for a second!
(Shadow throws the emerald to Sonic.)
Nazo: Guy's! Just like with Jaaku! Shadow! Charge up an attack and get ready to launch it at Raion.
(Gary goes to the other side of Raion and they all charge up thier powers.)
(They launch thier powers)
(The powers and Sonic hit him dead on.)
Raion: Arghhhh!
(Sonic hands Shadow the emerald)
Raion: You will pay for that!
(Raion starts to get red)
Glow: What is happening?
(A wall of fire comes out of Raion)
Everone: Aaaaah!
(You see the wall of fire from Raion's point of veiw)
(The fire wall dispenses)
(No one is there)
Raion: Hah! That got rid of them!
(Behind Raion)
Nazo (Whispering): Good quick thinking, Shadow! Gary, when I tell you, go to the front of Raion and starting charging your powers, while avoiding his attacks. When your powers are at full charge, yell "now" and launch your attack. Everyone else, we will wait here and charge up our powers. When Gary yells "Now" attack Raion. Shadow, give the chaos emerald back to Sonic.
(Shadow hands Sonic the chaos emerald)
Nazo (whispering): Guy's charge up your powers. Gary, get ready... Three... Two... One... Go.
(Gary dissapears)
Nazo: Now we wait.
Raion: You! I thought I killed you!
Gary: You killed everyone else. You did not get me.
Raion: Hah! You are just one hedgehog! Get ready to die!
(They hear explosions)
Nazo (whispering): What is taking Gary so long?
(A few seconds later)
Gary (yelling at the top of his lungs): NOW!
(They all launch their attacks at the same time)
(Direct hit)
Raion: ARRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Nazo: Yes!
Raion: RRRRROOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!
(Little balls come out of Raion)
Nazo: Watch out! Do not let those balls hit you!
(You see a ball hit the wall and burns a hole right through it.)
Storm: Yikes!
(Sonic has no trouble dodging them, so he picks up Glow. Shadow also has no trouble dodging them, so he picks up Storm. Gary and Nazo both have no trouble dodging the either.)
(Then bigger balls start coming off Raion. You start to see him fade away.)
Nazo: Watch out!
(Sonic, Shadow, and Nazo, have no trouble, but Gary is having a little bit of trouble. Nazo runs over and picks him up.)
Gary: What are you doing?
Nazo: I am faster than you, so I will carry you.
Gary: Fine.
(Soon even bigger chunks start to come off Raion. By now the walls have a bunch of holes in them.)
Sonic: How big can these balls get?
(Sonic and Shadow are having a little trouble, but Nazo is still fine.)
Shadow: I am getting a little tired.
Sonic: Come on Shadow, fight it! You are the Ultimate life form!
Shadow: I do not know...
Sonic (yelling): THINK OF MARIA!
Shadow (thinking): Maria...
(You see a flash back of Shadow spending time with Maria before she died, you see Shadow helping Maria run away from GUN soldiers, you see her shot, you see her say her final words to Shadow before sending him to Earth, you see him meeting Maria and himself after fifty years, you see Maria talking to Proffessor Gerald, You see Shadow promising to Maria that he will come back.
Shadow: Maria! You are right, Sonic! I have a plan! Hold on, to the chaos emerald!
(Sonic grabs it, but Shadow does not let go.)
Sonic: Uhhh, Shadow? Are you going to let go?
Shadow: No! Sonic, do your spin! I will do mine, and we will launch at Raion!
Sonic: O.k!
(They start their spin)
Shadow (while spining): Let's do it!
Sonic (while spining): Let's blow this Taco stand!
(They launch)
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Episode 14: Juusan the hedgheog

Narrator: Last time on Sonic X...
Shadow: Sonic! I have a plan! Hold on, to the chaos emerald!
(Sonic grabs it, but Shadow does not let go.)
Sonic: Uhhh, Shadow? Are you going to let go?
Shadow: No! Sonic, do your spin! I will do mine, and we will launch at Raion!
Sonic: O.k!
(They start their spin)
Shadow (while spining): Let's do it!
Sonic (while spining): Let's blow this Taco stand!
(They launch)
Narrator: Find out what happens next on Sonic X!
[Theme song]
Sonic (while spining): Let's blow this Taco stand!
(They launch)
(They hit Raion)
(Cream's house - 2009 A.D)
Cream: Would you like some more tea Amy?
Amy: No thanks Cream. Thanks for lunch.
Cream: Your welcome!
Cheese: Choa!
(There was a knock at the door, Cream went to it. It was Sonic.)
Cream: Hi Sonic!
Sonic: Wait. What happened?
Cream: What are you talking about, Sonic?
Sonic: Cream, you know, the whole Nazo taking Chaos emeralds thing. Did anything unsual happen in the past few days, Cream?
Cream: No, nothing.
Sonic: Hmmmm....I was wondering if you and Amy wanted to go to the field today.There's something going on.
Cream: I'll ask. Amy! Do you want to go to the field? Sonic says something is going on.
Amy: Of course!I'll be out in a second!
Sonic: I'll be waiting.
[Theme song]
(The field)
Amy: Hey Knuckles! What's going on?
Knuckles: I don't know. Some kind of fundraiser.
Sonic: Well, lets go see! (whispers) Again.
(They all walked onto the field.)
Cream: Wow. Mr. Knuckles, could you win me a toy?
Knuckles: Sure Cream.
Sonic: Let me guess, Knux will win a big teddy bear and give it to Cream.
(Knuckles won Cream a big teddy bear.)
Cream: Thank you Mr. Knuckles!
Knuckles: Your Welcome Cream.
(Sonic saw Shadow talking to Storm and Glow .Shadow looked surprised, Sonic walked over to him.)
Sonic: Hey Shadow! Do you remember anything?
Shadow: Sonic! There you are! You are O.k! Yeah, I remember.
Sonic: How about you girls?
Storm and Glow: Yep.
Storm: Let's go into the woods again and talk this out.
(Shadow, Sonic, and the two girls walked out of the field and into the nearest forest.)
(They all stopped walking, Sonic turned around.)
Sonic: O.k, Let's talk it out.
(They all sat down on logs and rocks.)
Storm: Sonic, I think we went back in time, and both Raion and Jaaku are deafeated.
Sonic: Great!
Glow: But, we used a telescope and saw that chaos planet was still out of whack.
Sonic: Uh, oh.
Storm: So we need the Five Emerald masters to fix this whole mess.
Sonic: But how?.
Glow: Well, we use the emeralds power to transform into out Super forms, and when all five of us do, the chaos emeralds will go to the planet, and peace will be restored.
Shadow: But Gary is in the Parallel universe.
Storm: He should be arriving any day now, since he can rember also.
Shadow: Wow. Hey... it's getting kind of late.
(Sonic looked at his phone, it was already 7.)
Sonic: Yeah, I guess.Hey, do you two girls wanna sleep at Cream's house tonight?
Storm: I guess.
Sonic: Good! Once Gary get's over here, we will start looking for the Emeralds
??? (coming out of bushes nearby): Emeralds, you say? Would it happen to look like one of these?
(A sort of dark green hedgehog holds out a chaos emerald)
Sonic: Oh yeah! How did you find it?
???: I have been folowing you, invisible, for the past few days. While Jaaku went to look for you after you escaped, I took the seven emeralds.
Storm: That is Great! What is your name?
???: My name is Juusan the hedghog.
Glow: Well, Juusan, can we have the emeralds?
Juusan: Yes, but only if you can let me do something.
Sonic: What is it?
Juusan: I kind of admire you Sonic. I have been watching you even before all this nonsense. I want to fight evil like you, and I also want a house I can sleep in.
Sonic: We can build a house, and sure, anyone can fight evil! You do not need to ask me!
Juusan: Thank you so much! Here, have the emeralds!
(Juusan hands Sonic all seven emeralds)
Sonic: Great! Now we just have to wait for Gary!
Gary: Looks like arrived right on time, then!
(Everyone turns around)
Sonic: Gary! You're here! Let's do this!
(They all get in a circle and Sonic puts the seven emeralds in the middle. Sonic tells Storm and Glow how to turn into Super form, and they start.)
(Sonic and Shadow turn into their Super forms. Storm turns into hers, which is a light blue, with yellow on the top like Shadow, Glow turns into a light pink, almost like Amy color. Gary turns into his Super form, which is a Dark blue.)
(They waited)
Super Sonic: Storm, check the telescope and see if it the chaos planet is back to it's position yet.
(Super Storm check's the telescope)
Super Storm: Nothing.
(The emeralds don't move)
Super Sonic: Are you sure this is the way to do this?
Super Glow: Positive.
Super Shadow: Wait! Remeber what Nazo said? There are---
Everyone: Eight Emeralds!
Super Gary: How did we forget that?

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Thank-you

(Sonic and Shadow turn into their Super forms. Storm turns into hers, which is a light blue, with yellow on the top like Shadow, Glow turns into a light pink, almost like Amy color. Gary turns into his Super form, which is a Dark blue.)
(They waited)
Super Sonic: Storm, check the telescope and see if it the chaos planet is back to it's position yet.
(Super Storm check's the telescope)
Super Storm: Nothing.
(The emeralds don't move)
Super Sonic: Are you sure this is the way to do this?
Super Glow: Positive.
Super Shadow: Wait! Remeber what Nazo said? There are---
Everyone: Eight Emeralds!
Super Gary: How did we forget that?

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(Everyone powers down)
Sonic: Man! Well, Nazo will turn up any day now. Oh wait! Amy and Cream will be captured tommorow. Since we don't have to show off our powers, Storm and Glow, you will protect them. Shadow, Gary, Juusan and I will stop Nazo from hurting Tails and explain to him. Jussan, do you want to show us what you can do?
Juusan: Sure!
(Juusan tuns invisible, becomes un-invisible and then starts vibrating so hard that everyone else fell down)
Storm: Whoa!
Juusan: That was one of my lighter earthquakes. I could vibrate so much, I could make one of your limbs fall off. I can also controll where my earthquakes effect.
Sonic: Cool! Well, let's go get a good nights sleep and then we will go protect Amy, Cream and Tails!
(Cream's house)
Vanilla: Of course they can stay.
Storm: Thank you! (under her breath) again.
Vanilla: What?
Storm: Nothing. See you tommorow, Sonic!
Sonic: Bye. See you tomorrow.
Glow and Storm: Bye!
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Episode 16: Protecting.

(Next day at Cream's house)
Storm: Thank you so much for taking care of us Vanilla. (under her breath) again.
Vanilla: What was that last part?
Storm: I said "for taking care of us"
Vanilla: Your very welcome. Do you want some more bacon?
Storm: No thank you.
(There's a knock at the door, Cream gets it. It's Sonic)
Cream: Hi Sonic.
Sonic: Hey. Are Storm and Glow up?
Cream: Yes. They are eating breakfast.
Sonic: Okay. May I come in?
Cream: Sure!
(Cream steps aside. Sonic walks into the living room and sits down. Storm and Glow walk in.)
Sonic: Morning.
Storm and Glow: Morning.
Sonic: Are you ready for you know what?
Storm: Sure.
[Theme song]
(Outside Amy's house)
Cream: Thanks for coming to play with me, Storm and Glow!
Storm and Glow: You are welcome!
(Glow rings the door bell)
(A few seconds pass)
(Amy opens the door)
Amy: Cream! You are here! Who are these two girls?
Storm: I am Storm. This is Glow. We came here to play with you two.
Amy: Alright then, come on in!
(They go in, but as soon as the door closes, the camera backs up to some woods across the street, where you hear a rustling in the trees)
(Tails' lab)
(Sonic and the other male hedgehogs walk into the room)
Tails: Hi, Sonic and Shadow! Gary! I have not seen you in a while! Who is this?
Juusan: I am Juusan the hedgehog. It is very nice to meet you in person.
Tails: Oooooooooookay. So what did you guys come over for?
Sonic: We wanted to see if we could help.
Tails: If you could run some errands, that would be nice...
Sonic: NO! I mean, is there something we can do here?
Tails: Well, I was bored, so I was working on the X Tornado, so if you wanted to help with that...
Sonic: Do you keep the X Tornado here?
Tails: Yeah.
Sonic: O.k, we can help with that.
Gary: Sure!
Juusan: I'd love to!
Shadow: Whatever.
(Amy's house)
(Amy, Cream, Storm, and Glow are playing a board game.)
(There is a knock on the door)
Amy: I'll get it!
(Amy stands up to go to the door)
Storm: I think I'll go to with you.
Glow: As will I.
Amy: Ooookaaaaaay...
(They go to the door)
(Amy opens it)
(A long mechanical arm reaches in and grabs Amy)
Amy: Aaaaiiiiiiiieeeeee!
(Amy gets dragged out)
Storm and Glow: Amy!
(Storm and Glow run out and see a large octopus like machine with many arms.)
Cream (skipping to the door): What's wrong?
(Cream sees the robot)
Cream: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
(Another robot arm grabs her)
Cream: Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!
Sonic and Glow: Cream!
Storm: I can't use my lightning because it will shock Amy and Cream too!
Glow: Leave this to me!

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Storm and Glow: Cream!
Storm: I can't use my lightning because it will shock Amy and Cream too!
Glow: Leave this to me!
(Glow shot out 5 fire balls, but the octopus machine uses two arms to block them, making those arms melt off)
Glow: Rats!
Amy: Storm! Catch my hammer!
(Amy tosses her hammer to Storm)
(Storm catches Amy's hammer.)
Glow: Storm! Use the hammer to try and knock off as many arms as you can! I will melt off as many as I can!
Storm: O.k!
(They melt and knock off arms rapidly until when Storm was raising the hammer, a arm struck her in the stomach like a base ball bat.)
Storm: Auggggh!
(Storm is hit through the window of Amy's house.)
Glow & Amy: Storm!
Amy: Eggman! You... you... JEEEERRRRRRRKKKK!
(Amy looks like she is on fire)
Eggman: Uh-oh...
(Suddenly Amy gets a hammer out of nowhere.)
Eggman: Drop her!
Docoe: Yes, sir!
(The arm let's go, but while in the air, Amy throws the hammer through the arm that was holding Cream, makes another hammer appear, and throws it through the center of the robot.)
(Nothing at first, then the robot explodes)
Explosion: BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!
(Eggman and the robots are sent flying. Amy lands on her feet and calms down, and Cream safely glides to the ground)
(They all run inside)
Glow: STORM! Storm! Are you okay?
(They run into the living room to find an unconcius Storm, badly battered and bruised, slumped next to the wall.)
Glow: STORM! STORM! SOME ONE CALL THE HOSPITAL NOW!
(Amy rushes into the kitchen. Cream and Glow are softly crying)
Glow (softly): It's okay Storm. You won't die. Don't die on me sis...
(Tail's lab 2:00 PM)
(Sonic, the other male hedgehogs, and Tails, are working on the X Tornado)
(Sonic gets a call on his cell phone)
(He answers it)
Sonic: Hello? Whoa! Amy! Calm down! Now, tell me what is wrong. Hmmm... yeah... o.k.... What! How bad is it? O.k, I am on my way now!
(Sonic hangs up.)
Sonic: Storm is badly injured! I need to get to Amy's house now! She is over there!
Tails: Who is Storm?
Sonic: A close friend that you have not met. I have to go now! Shadow, Gary, Juusan! If anything happens, you take care of it!
(Sonic runs out.)
Tails: Well, that was strange. Well, I guess it is just us.
(Some street somewhere. 3:01 PM)
(Sonic is running)
Sonic (thinking): I need to get there fast! Storm could be dying! Amy's house is 10 miles away! I need to run faster than I ever have before! Here I go...
(Sonic puts his head down, breathes in hard, and then uses all his power to run.)
(Sonic is just a blur going down the streets)
(Outside Amy's house. 2:55 PM)
Amy: Storm! Catch my hammer!
(Amy tosses her hammer to Storm)
(Storm catches Amy's hammer.)
Glow: Storm! Use the hammer to try and knock off as many arms as you can! I will melt off as many as I can!
Storm: O.k!
(They melt and knock off arms rapidly.)
Storm (thinking): We are doing prety well! I think we will have Eggman beat in no time!
(Storm raises the hammer, and an arm strikes her in the stomach like a base ball bat.)
Storm: Auggggh!
(Storm is hit through the window of Amy's house.)
(You see Storm hit the wall and fall to the ground. In the backround, you can hear Amy being angry)
Storm (thinking weakly): What happened? I am hurting all over. I can't feel my legs... Glow... help*
(Glow, Amy, Cream and Cheese all run inside)
Glow: STORM! Storm! Are you okay?
(They run into the living room to find an unconcius Storm, badly battered and bruised, slumped next to the wall.)
Glow: STORM! STORM! SOME ONE CALL THE HOSPITAL NOW!
(Amy rushes into the kitchen. Cream and Glow are softly crying)
Glow (softly): It's okay Storm. You won't die. Don't die on me sis...
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Episode 17: Nazo.... again.

(Amy's house. 3:02 PM)
(Sonic runs in)
Sonic: I'm here! Guy's?
Glow (part talking, part sobbing): In here!
(Sonic runs in)
Sonic: Oh my... I need to get her to the hospital NOW!
Amy: We already called the hospital. They should be here soon.
Sonic: The traffic is too busy. I will take her myself.
(Sonic leaps over and picks her up)
Sonic: Cream! Stay here and when the ambulance comes, tell them we have already left. Glow, I am going to run much faster than you, so I will see you at the hospital when you get there. Don't worry, she will be alright.
(Sonic runs out. Glow and Amy run after him.)
(Tails lab 3:10 PM)
(Tails is on the phone)
Tails: Yeah... O.k... Ouch... wow... I am so sorry, Cream. I hope she makes it.
(Tails hangs up)
Tails: It seems as if this Storm girl got hit through a window into a wall. She was badly injured.
Gary: I really hope she makes it. Don't you Shadow?
Shadow:...
(You see a flash back to Eggman's base.)
(Somewhere in the building)
Shadow: Alright, it says to go left.
Storm: Shadow? Are you okay? You seem… well…unhappy.
Shadow: I’m fine!
Storm: Your not fine! Something’s wrong and I know it. Now what is troubling you?
Shadow: Fine. I miss someone.
Storm: Who?
(Shadow clenches his fists and closes his eyes in anger and sadness.)
Shadow: Her name is Maria.
Storm:…. Where is she?
(Shadow looks at her, Gary turns away)
Shadow: She’s…..dead.
Storm: Oh Shadow….I’m so sorry.
(End flash back)
Shadow (thinking): She really was sorry. She was very comforting in that time. Very nosy, but very comforting.
Shadow: I also hope she does not die.
Juusan: Me too. Well, I guess we need to get back to work.
(You see them get back to work, and the clock rotate 20 minutes.)
Gary: We have got a lot done. We are doing well.
(A red light appears in the corner of the room.)
Tails: What is that?
(Gary, Shadow, and Juusan drop what they are doing.
(The light starts to take form...)
Tails (with fear in his voice): Guys? Do you know what is going on?
(You see Nazo has appeared)
Shadow: Nazo. Do you remember anything?
Nazo: How do you know my name? What do you mean by do I remember anything?
Gary: You are collecting the chaos emeralds to restore the chaos planet to its original position. You also need the five chaos emerald masters to do so. During our time together, we deafted Jaaku and Raion. That is what we mean when we say, do you remember anything?
Nazo: I do not remember that. But you two (he points at Shadow and Gary) do look famliar...
Shadow: Other people that are familiar are two girl hegehogs, one yellow, and one red, and a blue male hedgehog, right?
Nazo: Yes, I think I have seen them before... But how do I know I can trust you?
Gary: Uhmm... Uhmmmm... You will take our word for it?
Nazo: You must be lying! Now I will destoy you and find the Chaos emeralds and the masters.
Shadow: When Sonic gets back, we will explain it to him. But right now, I want to get him back for our very first encounter!
Gary: Lets do it!
( Hospital 3:35 PM)
(Sonic rushes in with Storm in his arms)
Sonic: I NEED SOME HELP HERE!
(Doctors rush over, one of them wheeling a bed over)
(Sonic puts her on the bed)
(The doctors wheel her through a door. Sonic follows. The doctors take her into another room. Sonic looks through a window)
(You see them hook her up to a lot of stuff. A doctor comes out of the room)
Doctor: I need to ask you some questions about her.
Sonic: O.k
Doctor: Her name.
Sonic: Storm.
Doctor: How it happened.
Sonic: I don't know, but some other people do. All I know is Eggman did it.
Doctor: Relatives?
Sonic: Sister named Glow.
Doctor: Thank you very much.
(Glow and Amy bursts in to the room)
Glow: Where is my sister?
Doctor: She is in there. Do you know how she got hurt?
Glow: She got hit through a window into a wall.
Doctor: Thank you. You can watch if you want through this window.
(Glow sits on a bench below the window.)
Sonic:.... I am sorry Glow...
Glow: *Sniff* It is not your fault
Sonic: Don't worry, she will be fine. I will stay here with you.
Glow: *sniff* thank you...
(Glow burts out into tears)
(Tails lab. 3:45)
(Gary and Tails are unconcius, Shadow and Juusan are still fighting Nazo)
(They stop fighting)
Shadow: *huff* You are *puff* still hard to beat.
Juusan: We can do this!
(Juusan uses his earthquake move to make Nazo fall out of the air onto the ground, and Shadow kicks him in the ribs)
Nazo: Ugh! Well, I have a few tricks of my own!
Juusan: Like your red beam that comes out of your hand?
Nazo: How do you know that?
(Nazo fires his red beam at Juusan)
(Juusan disapears right before it hits him)
Nazo: Where did he go?
Juusan's voice: Behind you.
(Nazo turns around. Shadow kicks Nazo in his back.)
Nazo: Ugh!
Juusan: Nice thinking, Shadow!
Nazo: How could you have that much power? You would have to be a... no... you can't be!
Juusan: I am not, but Shadow and Gary are.
Shadow: Now do you believe us? We have the first seven emeralds, but we need the eigth one. The one you have.
Nazo: Oh yeah? Show me the seven.
Juusan: Uhh... They are with one of the other masters.
Nazo: Hah! You do not have them! Now I will destroy you!
Shadow: Wait! If we show you, will you believe us?
Nazo:....... Fine,
Shadow: O.k, come with us.
(Hospital. 4:00 PM)
(Glow is done crying, but it is evident that she was.)
( A doctor comes in)
Doctor: We are not sure, but it looks like she might have lasting damage...
Glow: No.... No.... No! It can't be possible! She has to be okay!
Sonic (To the doctor): Could you please tell your friends to leave the room?
Doctor: Why?
Sonic: I want to try something.
Doctor: Fine.
(Doctor walks into the room for a second, then walks right out with the other doctors)
Sonic: Thank you.
(Sonic enters)
(He closes the shade over the window)
Glow: *sniff* What is he doing?
Doctor: I am just as clueless as you.
(You see a clock's hand pass by for five minutes)
(Shadow, Juusan, and Nazo enter)
(You see the door open)
Storm: Hi, Glow!
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Episode 18: Restored

Narrator: Last time on Sonic X! Eggman hurt Storm badly, and Nazo came back, not remembering anything. Storm was rushed to the hospital, and Shadow, Juusan, and Gary fought Nazo to try and make him believe them. It seemed that Storm would be damaged for life, until she walked out of the room! Can they save the universe from total destruction? Find out on Sonic X!
(Streets. 4:00 PM)
(Shadow is carrying Tails, and Juusan is carrying Gary. Nazo is following behind)
Shadow: We are almost there.
(They reach the  hospital)
(They go in)
Shadow: Where is Sonic?
Nurse: In there.
(She points to a room)
(They enter)
Storm: Hi, Glow!
Glow: Sto...Storm? Are you okay?
Storm: Yep!
(Glow rushes over and hugs Storm)
Glow: Oh, I was so worried! I was afraid I wouldn't be able to spend time with you anymore!
Storm (turning blue): Igh! Igh! You want be able to spend time with me if you don't let go!
Glow: Sorry.
(She lets go)
Juusan: Nice to see you awake, Storm!
(Sonic enters)
Glow: How did you do it?
Sonic: I have my ways. Nazo! Hey! How you doing?
Nazo: How do you know me?
Sonic: He doesn't remember?
Gary (just waking up): Nope. Show him the 7 emeralds.
(Sonic holds out the 7 emeralds)
Nazo: So, you were telling the truth! Here you go, then.
(Nazo gives him the eigth emerald)
Sonic: Alright! Lets go out side and do this!
(They go outside)
Shadow: Lets get it ove with.
(They turn into their super forms)
(They hear a big booming voice from nowhere.)
Voice: IF YOU WANT TO RESTORE THE CHAOS PLANET TO WHERE IT WAS, YOU HAVE TO KNOW THAT THE ONE FROM THE FUTURE WILL BE NO MORE! IF YOU WISH TO STOP THIS SAY SO, ONE FROM THE FUTURE!
Sonic: What! You mean Nazo won't exist?
Voice: THAT IS CORRECT.
Glow: Don't do this! We can find another way!
Voice: IT IS FOR THE ONE FROM THE FUTURE TO DECIDE, AND ONLY HIM!
Nazo: I have to do it. The universe will be destroyed if I don't. Anyway, if I am lucky, I will be born 2970 years from now.
Voice: CHOOSE NOW!
Gary: Don't do it!
Nazo: I have to! I accept!
Voice: VERY WELL!
(The emeralds start shaking)
Storm: What is happening?
(Suddenly Nazo is turned into a liquid.)
Juusan: Woah!
(A little bit of Nazo went into each of the emeralds)
Voice: THE EMERALDS WILL BE TAKEN NOW!
(The emeralds suddenly fly into the air.)
(Everything is quiet)
Sonic: Did it happen?
Storm: Do any of you doctors have a telescope?
Doctor: I do!
(He runs in)
(A few minutes later...)
(He comes out with telescope in hand)
Doctor: Here!
(They set up the telescope and look.)
Sonic: It is fine. It has moved back to its orriginal position.
Everyone: Yay!
Shadow:Well... Now what?
Tails (just waking up): Ughh... what happened?
(Everyone laughs)
Tails: What is so funny? Where is that Nazo guy?
(Earth)
(Chris Thorndyke is now in his early twenties. He is swimming in the river)
Chris (thinking): I wonder how everyone back on Sonic's world are doing? I miss them. It has probally only been 4 months since they defeated the Meterex. I wonder if Shadow is okay... Huh, what is that?
(He sees some thing down at the bootom of the river.)
Chris: I wonder what that is? I will get it out and take a look at it.
(Chris gets out of the water, dries off, and runs home.)
(Later...)
(Chris comes back to the river in casual clothes. He has a robotic arm with him.)
Chris: This will get it!
(Chris measures with the arms controls until it goes down in the water. He gets on his belly and leans over the edge. He messes some more with the controls until the arm grabs the object. He brings it up.)
Chris: Now to see what I caught...
(When the arm surfaces, it is holding Emerl.)
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So that is the first half. If when you where following and you see that I skipped a chapter, it is because I added a new chapter 1, so moved eveery thing else up 1. Here is the first chapter.
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Episode 1: Shadow...

(Screen black)
Shadow's voice (weak): Where am I?
(You see Shadow lying on the ground, battered and bruised)
Shadow (weak): What happened?
(You see Eggman's ship flying overhead)
Shadow (weak): Eggman! He will help me!
Shadow (weakly yelling): Eggman! Help me...
(You see Eggman see Shadow)
Eggman: Shadow! You are alive! One second, I will be right there!
(You see Eggman extend a long arm from his ship and it grabs Shadow)
[Theme Song]
(You see Shadow on a hospital bed, but in a room that looks like one that Eggman would use. Shadow is not connected to anything and is sitting upward)
(Eggman walks in)
Eggman: Shadow! You are awake! Great! Now I can tell you what you missed! After the Meterex were destoyed, I sent Chris back to his time again, so we do not have to worry about him. I am working on a self- destruct device in case Sonic tries to ruin my plans, so we know we will kill him.
Shadow: You sent Chris to his world again? Why? He was a go-- ahhhh!
(You see Shadow clutch his head)
(You see Shadow remember his time with Maria, and meeting Sonic for the first time, and saving the world from space colony ARK, he remembers everything that Eggman told him, how Sonic was evil)
Shadow (repeatedly): Ahhh! Ahhh! Ahhh!
Eggman: What is wrong?
Shadow (calming down): You! You are the one who was evil! Not Sonic and his friends! Maria wanted me to do good! But you led me down the wrong path! Ahhh!
(You see Shadow clutch his head again)
(You go back to the space station that at one point becomes the black hole)
Super Sonic: Eggman's really got you fooled, doesn't he pal?
(You go to Shadow walking with Rouge and Chris)
Rouge: Hey Chris, doesn't this remind you of being on space colony ARK?
Chris: You bet! We were all on there!
Rouge: That's right! Hey Shadow, isn't that where your friend Maria lived?
(You go back to present time)
Shadow (calming down again): You are the one that is evil, Eggman! I won't help you any more!
(Shadow jumps out of bed, kicks Eggman in the stomach, and runs out)
Eggman: Oooof!
(Outside somewhere)
(Shadow is running and running. After a few miles, he stops.)
Shadow: I can't believe it!
??? (whispering): Psssst. Psssst. Shadow!
Shadow: Huh?

omg this is so cool. keep writing. p.s sonic x rocks! i hope they use this 4 the show!

sonic x is overrated cuz its owned by 4kids and mario is WAY better.

VolknerN7Xfish wrote:

sonic x is overrated cuz its owned by 4kids and mario is WAY better.

phooey on you!

i dont hate mario but, im not a fan. p.s, winner if they put this on tv, sega animation studio should do it cuz they make cool videos.

Winner wrote:

VolknerN7Xfish wrote:

sonic x is overrated cuz its owned by 4kids and mario is WAY better.

phooey on you!

Let's try and keep the conversation polite, please.  It looks like VolknerN7Xfish is just expressing an opinion - although it does seem a bit out of place in a thread discussing show scripts, not the worth of the show 

wow you are good at doing this  and stuff    . im just starting to  make a story  caled tails adventure!  and your right  JESUS is the the true winner!