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#1 2009-11-25 08:44:56

08jackt
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My First Attempt at a Manga Drawing

Anyway, this is my first attempt at a Manga type drawing. really though, it still has hints of my normal style (big heads, big eyes) but i did what i could, and this is what i came up with....

http://i50.tinypic.com/jic55s.jpg

please give tips and stuff on what i should work on, as i really want to start getting good at this type of drawing...

thanks  big_smile


http://i39.tinypic.com/jgtswi.png

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#2 2009-11-25 09:31:14

pinochio
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Re: My First Attempt at a Manga Drawing

Thats really good, I dont really like manga so I can not give you any tips... But its kinda like you added some originality to manga! It should janka  tongue


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#3 2009-11-25 10:58:29

Mr_X
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Re: My First Attempt at a Manga Drawing

What's a manga?
Here are Blade's suggestions, since he can't say them
1. Make the chin or it'll look wierd
2. The nose looks crooked. If it's looking forward, then the nose should be like a V or U shape. Not a really drastic one of course, subtle
3. Something about the eyes being too close together

Ok, posting it now. It's getting boring listening to him talk

Last edited by Mr_X (2009-11-25 10:58:52)


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#4 2009-11-26 03:12:12

08jackt
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Re: My First Attempt at a Manga Drawing

Mr_X wrote:

What's a manga?
Here are Blade's suggestions, since he can't say them
1. Make the chin or it'll look wierd
2. The nose looks crooked. If it's looking forward, then the nose should be like a V or U shape. Not a really drastic one of course, subtle
3. Something about the eyes being too close together

Ok, posting it now. It's getting boring listening to him talk

lol, thanx  smile


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#5 2009-11-26 13:32:52

animeboy605
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Re: My First Attempt at a Manga Drawing

good jPr

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