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#1 2009-11-11 00:01:47
Dress me up! A dress-up game!
It.
This is my dress-up game. After struggling to think of a pose for my first one, and then turning the person that you are dressing up into clothing on the second, my third attempt at making one is out and... maybe finished. At least it has the scripts.
When you see it, please leave me a comment! Do you think I should make more clothing? Should I improve the artwork? Tell me what you want, as long as the comment is constructive.
Thank you Scratch community!
Now only using this account to post in Miscellaneous, but when Miss_Webgal becomes a Scratcher I'm ditching this account.
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#2 2009-11-11 00:12:06
Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
Very nice. 
Some tips and pointers:
1. Can you take away the dots on her face. It kind of creeps me out... *shudder*
2. I never noticed the clothes fit! Great job!
3. Maybe make more clothing and maybe when you click her, she could say something or change a pose. (The clothing has to change too. 
)
That'a all I can think of.
Nice project! BTW, are you a boy or girl. (Just wondering. I won't insult or tease you. )
Hai.
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#3 2009-11-11 07:50:15
Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
fg123 wrote:
Very nice.
1. Can you take away the dots on her face. It kind of creeps me out... *shudder*
2. I never noticed the clothes fit!
3. Maybe make more clothing and maybe when you click her, she could say something or change a pose. (The clothing has to change too.
That'a all I can think of.
Nice project! BTW, are you a boy or girl. (Just wondering. I won't insult or tease you.
1. The dots are necessary because I have freckles! Should I put less or make them a different color than black?
2. Oh, it's easy. Copy my sprite, draw clothing on it, erase everything but the clothing, then turn the clothing costume into a new sprite.
3. I was thinking that I could make more clothing. This was late at night. And I'll think about the clicking idea. And what do you mean by "the clothing has to change"?
Overall, thanks! And I was thinking that you would assume this by now, with the character I use as myself being a girl...
...but if you really don't know, I'm a girl.
Now only using this account to post in Miscellaneous, but when Miss_Webgal becomes a Scratcher I'm ditching this account.
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#4 2009-11-11 08:15:58
- ChrissyPuff
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Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
<if on edge, bounce>Nice. I think you would have worked hard on it.
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#6 2009-11-11 08:44:41
Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
frih wrote:
I like the concept, but the face is not very clear, it has some spots. Overall it is good.
Spots= freckles. They are supposed to be there. I have freckles. So you're saying MY face is not clear. LOLZ.
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#7 2009-11-11 13:55:21
Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
webgal15 wrote:
fg123 wrote:
Very nice.
1. Can you take away the dots on her face. It kind of creeps me out... *shudder*
2. I never noticed the clothes fit!
3. Maybe make more clothing and maybe when you click her, she could say something or change a pose. (The clothing has to change too.
That'a all I can think of.
Nice project! BTW, are you a boy or girl. (Just wondering. I won't insult or tease you.1. The dots are necessary because I have freckles! Should I put less or make them a different color than black?
2. Oh, it's easy. Copy my sprite, draw clothing on it, erase everything but the clothing, then turn the clothing costume into a new sprite.
3. I was thinking that I could make more clothing. This was late at night. And I'll think about the clicking idea. And what do you mean by "the clothing has to change"?
Overall, thanks! And I was thinking that you would assume this by now, with the character I use as myself being a girl...
...but if you really don't know, I'm a girl.
I see...
"the clothing has to change" means that when the pose changes, the clothes has to change to match the pose. Make less freckles and maybe make them brown instead.
Hai.
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#8 2009-11-11 15:11:24
Re: Dress me up! A dress-up game!
fg123 wrote:
webgal15 wrote:
fg123 wrote:
Very nice.
1. Can you take away the dots on her face. It kind of creeps me out... *shudder*
2. I never noticed the clothes fit!
3. Maybe make more clothing and maybe when you click her, she could say something or change a pose. (The clothing has to change too.
That'a all I can think of.
Nice project! BTW, are you a boy or girl. (Just wondering. I won't insult or tease you.1. The dots are necessary because I have freckles! Should I put less or make them a different color than black?
2. Oh, it's easy. Copy my sprite, draw clothing on it, erase everything but the clothing, then turn the clothing costume into a new sprite.
3. I was thinking that I could make more clothing. This was late at night. And I'll think about the clicking idea. And what do you mean by "the clothing has to change"?
Overall, thanks! And I was thinking that you would assume this by now, with the character I use as myself being a girl...
...but if you really don't know, I'm a girl.I see...
"the clothing has to change" means that when the pose changes, the clothes has to change to match the pose. Make less freckles and maybe make them brown instead.
Ok.
Now only using this account to post in Miscellaneous, but when Miss_Webgal becomes a Scratcher I'm ditching this account.
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