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#1 2009-10-30 00:48:17
- samurai768
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Warriors of the Moonstone
I need to know if this would be cool:
AmberKit and Infernopaw (her friend) travel together as the warriors of the MoonStone in place of her father (who died). the MoonStone is a rock that summons anything you wish, DeathClaw (notice the name XD) is trying to get the moonstone to summon ultimate power.
Here's a teaser:
LightningPaw (AmberKit's dad)
DeathClaw
(LightningPaw, hanging off of a rock on the side of a waterfall, about to fall while DeathClaw tries to push him off)
You will never get away with this, DeathClaw!
Are you so sure? *sneer*
(DeathClaw scrapes at LightningPaws paw, making him fall closer to the edge)
By the power of the MoonStone, I summon a new Warrior of the MoonStone!
(MoonStone glows and makes a sonic boom that blows LightningPaw and the MoonStone off of a cliff.)
AAAAHH!
The MoonStone!
(LightningPaw plummets to his death)
Ooh, the suspense!
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#2 2009-10-30 04:02:34
Re: Warriors of the Moonstone
Nice, err, sentence... *remakes*
The bright yellow pelt shorthaired, LightingPaw, is scraping the sides of a cliff in fright. The raging current of the waterfall is roaring loudly behind making it hard for LightningPaw to hear. Bet ya didn't know I was watching you
"You will never get away with this, DeathClaw!" LightingPaw shrieked.
"Are you so sure?" said DeathClaw, with his broad muscular shoulders creating a ghastly shadow in the sunset. Boo!
DeathClaw is LightingPaw's enemy since she could remember. DeathClaw is a black and brown striped tabby tom with broad muscular shoulders. LightningPaw saw DeathClaw and her father, BrightWhiskers, involved in a terrible war between two clans. LightningPaw stared as her father wailed in defeat. She promised to avenge him and kill DeathClaw. Shes an evil kitty isn't she?
DeathClaw is playing with LightingPaw by just nudging her small claws closer and closer toward the edge.
"By the power of the MoonStone, I summon a new warrior!!" Yelled LightingPaw.
The MoonStone glows a bright luminecent green. Both LighthingPaw and DeathClaw are attracted to the glow, silent, and still. Then in the sky, a green light shines down and crashes into the MoonStone, creating an immense explosion causing LightningPaw and the MoonStone itself to plummet to the ground below.
“AAAAHHH!!!” wails LightningPaw.
“My MoonStone!” DeathClaw exclaimed. Greedy cat
DeathClaw looks over the edge of the cliff and distinguishes LightingPaw twisted in a way that she resembled two cats facing two different directions; the bottom half facing east, the top half facing west. This means she is dead, her spine snaped in twain.
“Now nothing can stop me at getting the MoonStone!!” DeathClaw snickered with joy. You read the whole thing... Good job
Regards,
Ralphjos
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#3 2009-10-30 12:30:16
- samurai768
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Re: Warriors of the Moonstone
Ralphjos wrote:
Nice, err, sentence... *remakes*
The bright yellow pelt shorthaired, LightingPaw, is scraping the sides of a cliff in fright. The raging current of the waterfall is roaring loudly behind making it hard for LightningPaw to hear. Bet ya didn't know I was watching you
"You will never get away with this, DeathClaw!" LightingPaw shrieked.
"Are you so sure?" said DeathClaw, with his broad muscular shoulders creating a ghastly shadow in the sunset. Boo!
DeathClaw is LightingPaw's enemy since she could remember. DeathClaw is a black and brown striped tabby tom with broad muscular shoulders. LightningPaw saw DeathClaw and her father, BrightWhiskers, involved in a terrible war between two clans. LightningPaw stared as her father wailed in defeat. She promised to avenge him and kill DeathClaw. Shes an evil kitty isn't she?
DeathClaw is playing with LightingPaw by just nudging her small claws closer and closer toward the edge.
"By the power of the MoonStone, I summon a new warrior!!" Yelled LightingPaw.
The MoonStone glows a bright luminecent green. Both LighthingPaw and DeathClaw are attracted to the glow, silent, and still. Then in the sky, a green light shines down and crashes into the MoonStone, creating an immense explosion causing LightningPaw and the MoonStone itself to plummet to the ground below.
“AAAAHHH!!!” wails LightningPaw.
“My MoonStone!” DeathClaw exclaimed. Greedy cat
DeathClaw looks over the edge of the cliff and distinguishes LightingPaw twisted in a way that she resembled two cats facing two different directions; the bottom half facing east, the top half facing west. This means she is dead, her spine snaped in twain.
“Now nothing can stop me at getting the MoonStone!!” DeathClaw snickered with joy. You read the whole thing... Good job
Regards,
Ralphjos
Thats not what I mean. when I wrote that, THAT WAS MEH SCRIPT.
Its more detailed in the show. BTW: LIGHTNINGPAW IS A FATHER. IN OTHER WORDS, A BOY.
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#6 2009-10-30 19:33:09
- samurai768
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Re: Warriors of the Moonstone
no, i dont like pokemon, this is a different thing.
yes, I said I dont like pokemon. I just dont like that kind of stuff, but pikachu is cute.
Oh, and sorry Ralphjos if I made you think I was yelling at you. Caps lock was on and I didnt look up.
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