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The end is coming
The end, The end
Its the end of this world
The end, The end
Just another end
(Starts in screamo voice xD)
The en--------d the e-----------eh-eh end.
The world is just another end-
(More of a normal fluent voice) (Like in vegas by kate perry at the end when she says "Remember what you told me" Don't get it then just listen to the song xD)
The end. Is here. Nothing we can do.
Just another way to end.
The end brings fear. and all loved ones near.
The end. The end (Crescondo) The end! The en---------------d!

So depressing is a theme. more of a song you would call "Emo" But still. IF someone said "To uplifting 1/10" It depends on who is singing/writing/listening to it

lol did you create that? 8/10

7/10, I have a mixed opinion because I like Anthros but the way the song is sung is pretty good.

I was walking the street. *snap, snap*
When along came some guy. *snap, snap*
So I said hi . *snap, snap*
Then he shot me with an AK-47 (Dun dun duuuun.)

One dark evening,
in a city called Reven,
I was walking in the cool breeze.
I sat down on a bench,
and waited for something to happen,
then something grabbed me,
and I turned around quickly,
but nothing was grabbing me anymore,
but I saw a wolf and a man,
the man laying on the ground,
the wolf was attacking him,
I looked fascinated,
the wolf seemed to be made of the shadows themself.
the wolf came to me and licked my hand.
I lweft shocked,
but the wolf had followerd me.
And now it still does.

Elementals,
dark, light,
fire, water,
earth, wind,
and much to be named.

The elemental;, as I call it,
never left me,
it slept by my side,
it saved in the darkest times,
it would stick with me,
cause it's my elemental.

Elementals,
dark, light,
fire, water,
earth, wind,
and much to be named.

(quieter)
Elementals,
dark, light,
fire, water,
earth, wind,
and much to be named.

(even quieter)
Elementals,
dark, light,
fire, water,
earth, wind,
and much to be named.

Verse 1:
Now I say, why are you sleeping, cuz I know in your dreams you’re weeping, about that past you used to know
Now I say, why’re you wasting your life away, for on the path of broken glass you lay, thinking about all the things that you’re not
Now I say, what is forgotten is not lost, earn back what you deserve, no matter what the cost.  Singing about the things that you lost

Chorus:
While you are sleeping I’m awake in the dark, thinking about things that tore us apart
Rationality, of my personality, threatening to blow, but I say no!
Awake in the dark is not the way things should be, save me from this hell just promise me!
I can’t stand not knowing how I should feel, I beg you to save me!

Bridge: (short, no vocals needed)

Verse 2:
Now I say, hardships bring us together; you may think that two wrongs don’t make a right, but girl, it’ll save us from our constant plight.
Now you say, it’s meant to be this way, but why be society’s own prey, cuz really that doesn’t make sense.
Now why say!  That nothing will ever change!  That everything will always be this way!  So girl I promise you.

Chorus:
While you are sleeping I’m awake in the dark, thinking about things that tore us apart
Rationality, of my personality, threatening to blow, but I say no!
Awake in the dark is not the way things should be, save me from this hell just promise me!
I can’t stand not knowing how I should feel, I beg you to save me!

Bridge: (nothing)
Solo… (It’s a solo so obviously you don’t sing)
Outro: (nothing again looks like your done!)

i wrote that for ma band it has guitar too, its got a pretty good beat and if you steal it i'll sue you!

FantasyTales wrote:

Verse 1:
Now I say, why are you sleeping, cuz I know in your dreams you’re weeping, about that past you used to know
Now I say, why’re you wasting your life away, for on the path of broken glass you lay, thinking about all the things that you’re not
Now I say, what is forgotten is not lost, earn back what you deserve, no matter what the cost.  Singing about the things that you lost

Chorus:
While you are sleeping I’m awake in the dark, thinking about things that tore us apart
Rationality, of my personality, threatening to blow, but I say no!
Awake in the dark is not the way things should be, save me from this hell just promise me!
I can’t stand not knowing how I should feel, I beg you to save me!

Bridge: (short, no vocals needed)

Verse 2:
Now I say, hardships bring us together; you may think that two wrongs don’t make a right, but girl, it’ll save us from our constant plight.
Now you say, it’s meant to be this way, but why be society’s own prey, cuz really that doesn’t make sense.
Now why say!  That nothing will ever change!  That everything will always be this way!  So girl I promise you.

Chorus:
While you are sleeping I’m awake in the dark, thinking about things that tore us apart
Rationality, of my personality, threatening to blow, but I say no!
Awake in the dark is not the way things should be, save me from this hell just promise me!
I can’t stand not knowing how I should feel, I beg you to save me!

Bridge: (nothing)
Solo… (It’s a solo so obviously you don’t sing)
Outro: (nothing again looks like your done!)

i wrote that for ma band it has guitar too, its got a pretty good beat and if you steal it i'll sue you!

Pretty Good! It is hard to imagine how it would sound like so you get a 7/10

I love that song xD I can sing it faster than my sisters and friends

Doing duh deh dee doo dee
i like ham you can see
doing duh deh duh doo
and sometimes i can fly too!
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
doing dee doo deh der
This is almost over
doing der doo der duh die
its because i like pie.
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
MMMMMMMM-MMMMMM! that's some good pie!

Last edited by samurai768 (2009-08-08 16:07:19)