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lundfamily3 wrote:

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Your in!! You can be Graphics Designer

Hey just signing in I can record any male voices not been chosen if neede just give me a script

Ok, Scratch my first idea. (No pun intended). It was bad for three reasons:
1: Not a griffin.
2: Cliche'd origin story
3: Nobody even bothered to look at it anyway.
Instead, I'm modifying it.
Air Clan, Student

Anemos name here
Male gender here
Dark streak of feathers around his left eye any unusual features about their looks
Really Fast any powers/special ability's
Good Traits: Smart, willing to do whatever it takes to succeed, honest
Bad Traits: Headstrong, Overly-confident, When something makes him feel bad, he doesn't treat others very well their personality

ieu99 wrote:

Cool I can record topaz lines!

Yep 

Chapter 1 will be through Echo's eyes.


"Aren't you so glad the war finished?' Queen Luna remarked to Echo

"I certainly am. Let us hope that nothing like this ever happens again"

It was the night after the typhoons has been overthrown. All the clans were having a celebration party down near the Ancient Pyramid of the sun, home to the twins of the sun.

"Attention Every Clan! Queen Luna is about to make an announcement" Said Sparkle into the microphone. "Queen Luna please come up onto the stage"

"I would like to thank every clan for their help, we couldn't have done it without you!" Said Queen Luna.

"But we all owe our thanks to the two phoenixes that destroyed the King of Typhoons, I present to you THE TWINS OF THE SUN!"

Two curtains open behind Queen Luna. Nothing is there.

Queen Flame fies onto the stage
"The twins of the sun are missing!"

Gasps break out.

The night erupts into Chaos, Clans running everywhere screaming.

"Calm Down Everybody" Shouts Queen Luna. They probably just are extra busy and couldn't make it"

Queen Luna glares at Queen Flame

"Uh, yes that's what happened" said Queen Flame

The clans begin to calm down.

"But it isn't like the Twins of the sun to be late or not notify us if they can't make it" Remarks Queen Frost

Clans burst into Chaos again.





1 hour later...

"I'm worried about the twins" Echo mentions to Queen Luna
"I know, where is the sun? Sunrise is supposed to be raising the sun now"

12 hours later
The sun still hasn't made an appearence
"Queen Luna it is time for you to raise the moon" Says Echo
"Ok."
Queen Luna goes onto the balcony and frowns as she spreads her wings out.
Echo watches in horror as suddenly Queen Luna spasms and falls.
Quickly Echo dives down and picks her up.
"The omen of Tanza-" Stutters Queen Luna
Then she faints

I hour later
The clans are extremely shaken up after the disappearance of the Twins of the Sun, no other clans are aware of Queen Luna's disappearance.

It is time for the meeting of the healers.

Echo meets the other Healers.

"This is a time of crisis" Announces Echo
"Queen Luna has disappeared!"
The healers gasp
"But Queen Luna is the most powerful pegasus" gasps Oasis
"Could this be related to the disappearance of the twins of the sun?" Asks Oak
"I think so" Answers Echo
"You need a temporary leader" remarks Flare
"But who?" Asks Echo
"How about Sparkle?" Asks Cloud
"No, he is too self confident"
"Well, the healer of the clan chooses their leader so you need to find one" Says Oasis
"I think you should be the leader temporarily" Says Flare
"ME?" Shrieks Echo
"Are you out of your mind?1"
"We don't know who to trust in this time of chaos" says Oak "You are our only hope..."

Next Day
"Behold Queen Echo" Announces Sparkle

Instead of the usual cheers of the clans, it is a gloomy atmosphere

After the ceremony Queen Echo flies onto the balcony to try to raise the moon.

Before she can, she suddenly feels a wave of coldness.

Sparkle is standing before her

"I have had enough of you Echo" Says Sparkle
"Time to put an end to this"
"Sparkle?" Echo faints



I haven't checked this, so i'll edit it later.

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-05-02 00:30:37)

Waffle27 wrote:

YES!! I HAVE A LINE! TWO LINES! Thank you!      Whoo! I'll put it on a project in my stuff, soon. I'll give you a link when I'm done 

Awesome 
You'll have a lot more in the future 

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-05-02 00:28:38)

Waffle27 wrote:

Whoo hoo!
Oh, btw did you want me to be Crystal?

Yes please! I'll put you as her now!

Blazingwave wrote:

Chapter 1 will be through Echo's eyes.


"Aren't you so glad the war finished?' Queen Luna remarked to Echo

"I certainly am. Let us hope that nothing like this ever happens again"

It was the night after the typhoons has been overthrown. All the clans were having a celebration party down near the Ancient Pyramid of the sun, home to the twins of the sun.

"Attention Every Clan! Queen Luna is about to make an announcement" Said Sparkle into the microphone. "Queen Luna please come up onto the stage"

"I would like to thank every clan for their help, we couldn't have done it without you!" Said Queen Luna.

"But we all owe our thanks to the two phoenixes that destroyed the King of Typhoons, I present to you THE TWINS OF THE SUN!"

Two curtains open behind Queen Luna. Nothing is there.

Queen Flame fies onto the stage
"The twins of the sun are missing!"

Gasps break out.

The night erupts into Chaos, Clans running everywhere screaming.

"Calm Down Everybody" Shouts Queen Luna. They probably just are extra busy and couldn't make it"

Queen Luna glares at Queen Flame

"Uh, yes that's what happened" said Queen Flame

The clans begin to calm down.

"But it isn't like the Twins of the sun to be late or not notify us if they can't make it" Remarks Queen Frost

Clans burst into Chaos again.





1 hour later...

"I'm worried about the twins" Echo mentions to Queen Luna
"I know, where is the sun? Sunrise is supposed to be raising the sun now"

12 hours later
The sun still hasn't made an appearence
"Queen Luna it is time for you to raise the moon" Says Echo
"Ok."
Queen Luna goes onto the balcony and frowns as she spreads her wings out.
Echo watches in horror as suddenly Queen Luna spasms and falls.
Quickly Echo dives down and picks her up.
"The omen of Tanza-" Stutters Queen Luna
Then she faints

I hour later
The clans are extremely shaken up after the disappearance of the Twins of the Sun, no other clans are aware of Queen Luna's disappearance.

It is time for the meeting of the healers.

Echo meets the other Healers.

"This is a time of crisis" Announces Echo
"Queen Luna has disappeared!"
The healers gasp
"But Queen Luna is the most powerful pegasus" gasps Oasis
"Could this be related to the disappearance of the twins of the sun?" Asks Oak
"I think so" Answers Echo
"You need a temporary leader" remarks Flare
"But who?" Asks Echo
"How about Sparkle?" Asks Cloud
"No, he is too self confident"
"Well, the healer of the clan chooses their leader so you need to find one" Says Oasis
"I think you should be the leader temporarily" Says Flare
"ME?" Shrieks Echo
"Are you out of your mind?1"
"We don't know who to trust in this time of chaos" says Oak "You are our only hope..."

Next Day
"Behold Queen Echo" Announces Sparkle

Instead of the usual cheers of the clans, it is a gloomy atmosphere

After the ceremony Queen Echo flies onto the balcony to try to raise the moon.

Before she can, she suddenly feels a wave of coldness.

Sparkle is standing before her

"I have had enough of you Echo" Says Sparkle
"Time to put an end to this"
"Sparkle?" Echo faints



I haven't checked this, so i'll edit it later.

awesome 

madbunnygal wrote:

Omg I love the scripts!!

Just to tell you guys, sparkle is NOT evil, but the typhoons that escaped the war have mastered the magic of transformation. Sparkles voice will be by the voice actor of sparkle, not the voice actor of the typhoons though.

lundfamily3 wrote:

I am a she... BUT I LOVE DRAWING.

What shall I draw first     

Well, i'm getting nowhere with the map, so could you possibly draw the map of the kingdom. It should include

A waterfall with a water palace (preferably blue)
A volcano with a fire palace (preferably orange/red/yellow)
A mountain with a cloud and on the cloud a palace (preferably grey/white)
Two forests on each side of the map.
One forest should look nice happy and cheerful. This should have a brown palace in it.
The other should boundary part of the map and look evil and dark
Finally somewhere in the centre of the map should be a massive palace. (purple/black/darkblue)

You can use your imagination on the rest 

Waffle27 wrote:

AirClan Carer

Name Jade
Gender Female
Unusual Appearance her blue color is tinged with green
Special Ability idk
Personality helpful, gentle, caring

Sorry, bad at coming up with characters   

Anyway, I recorded Flare's lines, the first one three different ways and the second one two different ways XD I wanted to get it perfect and I can't say temporarily so thats why the first recording of the second line is a bit messed up   

I'll post it soon, then you can tell me which line you like best/if I should say it differently and I'll delete the other ones 

Awesome! 
I'll add the character in a second.

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-05-02 18:51:13)

Waffle27 wrote:

Here they are! 

Awesome! We'll use C and D.   
Thanks for that.