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i have an idea. i'm going to make core version of house pets. so far i have Tiyu-Tiyu (bird) and Yutr (cat)

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

That sounds like a pet I would want, quite honestly.

some of them are incredibly poisonous, some are as big as mountains, and some are cute xD
look up 'blobfish'. that's a pet you may want.

I would wan the cute one. Are they like human animals where they have different species inside the species like a Dalmation dog or a Boxer Dog

....umm.... what?

Waffle27 wrote:

So in the species of dog. There is a boxer. There is a dalmation. There is a retreiver. But they are all dogs. Do Tyu Tyus have anything like that?

ah. same genus different species. i get it.

no.  but you can make some if you want. that would actually be pretty cool 



mah first time evah w/ that smiley 



oh, my second time 

funny how all the book ideas i come up with sound like they're for an RPG. speaking of my ideas and RPG's, i wonder if CaptainCluck is going to take his/her gallery down.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

funny how all the book ideas i come up with sound like they're for an RPG. speaking of my ideas and RPG's, i wonder if CaptainCluck is going to take his/her gallery down.

I was just wondering about that. Its first on the gallery list, right now. So I'm guessing not.

i REALLY dont like that gallery



i have like thirteen animals, and the characters just found out where they were going. i guess i'd better work on the book.

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this probably the most boring part in the whole book. complaining about having to go down, getting prepared, yada yada yada. rats.



oh man, i gtg. see you tommorow.

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huh. i always have to go, but then i find one minute sometime after that to post something.


shuold Logan
A. teach them something about the core
B. not teach them anything
C. teach them, but have a transition thing so the reader doesn't know what there is down there. (this sounds weird. i dont think ill do this)

hm... i think ill go with b.

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Okay, these were my automatic reactions:

Love the title, it sounds Rick Riordan-y
[singing] "Put a banana in your ear~! [/singing]
[chanting]Pasta! Pasta! [/chanting]
Lesson learned. I shall never train with Logan.
Logan  sound like my hikemaster at camp.
That Arizona part came quickly. But okay.

I've got one so far 

Species: Tyu-Tyu
Subspecies:Hui-Kan (HOO-ee Can)
Has longer horns than most subspecies of Tyu-Tyu. They are almost the body length of the creature. It is exrememly viscous, and rarely messed with, or tamed. One or two among the most skilled can keep one. It stores poison in the tip of its horns, and in its saliva. Always wear gloves while handling.

Primary food source is small mammals, reptiles, or fish

Lol, guess so! Hm, I'll think up some not so poisonous ones. Ooh! I know, one that can attack really fast/fly really fast.

razorwing wrote:

Username: razorwing
What are you applying for?: idea thinker
What would you rate yourself on Writing/Editing/Ideas: 5/10
What kind of books would you like to see this group make?: Fantasy
Any other information you'd like to share:

Accepted, thanks razorwing! 
Our current books are Sea Searchers (AKA Ocean Explorers)
and SuperHuman

k, chapter 5 



Chapter 5: Into the Center of the Earth


Connor looked at his watch. They had been falling for ten minutes. And no sign of the bottom. Logan saw him. “Only about two more minutes!” Then Connor felt a force, pushing up. Pushing him up. He could see the other felt it too. “It’s air. There’s a geyser at the bottom that gradually slows your descent. That’s why you don’t die.” Two minutes later, Connor was barely falling. And he could see the bottom. It was barely five feet away. There was a hole that spurted hot air up, preventing him from dying. “You have to do this carefully.” Logan said slowly rolling out of the stream of air and landing on the ground. The others tried, mostly falling on their backs. After a minute to catch their
breath, everyone stood up. They were in a cave. A cave in the center of the Earth. Everyone stood there, amazed. Not Logan. He knelt and touched the ground with a finger. He looked up. Then he stood and whipped out his katanas. “Weapons!” there was some confusion at the new concept of extracting weapons from scabbards. But soon everyone was armed. “We know you’re there!” Logan called into the shadows. A figure emerged from the darkness. It looked like an orc from movies and books, but white. “A Weguet.” Logan muttered. “Don’t attack it. Let it try to attack me.” Logan stepped forward, katanas ready. The Weguet looked at him, probably considering why this human had stepped forward, and how easy it would be to kill it. The Weguet opened its mouth a horrible sound echoed through the cave. It sounded like the rock was roaring. Then the Weguet raised a huge club. Logan stood there, waiting. The others screamed at him to get out of the way. Then the club came down.

Θ Θ Θ

The club was inches from Logan’s head when he ducked and rolled through the monster’s legs. Then he turned and leaped into the air. He raised the katanas. Seconds later, the Weguet’s head was sliced into three pieces. The monster’s body collapsed onto the cave floor. Then something happened purple light emanated from it. Then it dissolved into sand. The others just stood there. “That’s how it works down here. No risk, no reward. There are two types of un-plant creatures. Normal and monsters. monsters turn into sand when you kill them. Now let’s get out of here.” He led them towards a tunnel in the back of the cave. It was small and twisty. Eventually they made it out. And gasped.

Θ Θ Θ

They were on a ledge overlooking a vast jungle. It was composed of massive trees, dense undergrowth, and miles of hanging vines. Beyond it was a desert, ocean, and mountain range. But they were small with distance. Everything was encased in a huge cavern. Birds circled the jungle. the ledge they stood on sloped steeply down to the jungle floor. “Lopis Rifuses.” Logan said, pointing at the birds, which looked like giant white robins. “Down here, there are four different biomes you have to go through to get out. I should probably tell you guys what we’re doing here, though. First, we’re documenting everything. The plants, animals, monsters, geography and geology, everything. But we’re also looking for a special herb that only grows by the exit. It’s priceless for two reasons: it ONLY grows in one spot. And it’s a miracle heal. It can heal any sickness or disease. So, we need to get to the end, document everything we can, collect the herb, and escape. Without dying.”
“What are we, video game characters?” Conner joked.
Logan rolled his eyes. “Let’s go.” He said. He walked over to a single, huge, leafy bush that grew on the ledge they stood on. Then he took a knife out of his pocket and sliced off nine leaves the size of bathtubs. He dropped eight in a pile in front of everyone and held the leaf in front of himself, facing the ledge.
“Wait a minute, you can’t possibly be seriou-“Tony said, but was cut off as Logan jumped forward, into space.

Θ Θ Θ

The leaf hit the slope with Logan on top of it. Using it as a sled, he careened down the slope. “Only way down!” he yelled as he continued downwards. Everyone looked at each other. Then, two at time, they picked up a leaf and leaped over the edge.
    Connor laughed as he slid down a mile-long, seventy-five degree angle slope a few thousand miles below the Earth’s surface. Everyone did. Bu, halfway through the descent, Connor realized That Logan hadn’t told them something. At the very bottom of the ledge, the slope curved upwards, like a jump. Logan was just hitting it. He grabbed his leaf tightly as he hit the jump, where he flew into the air over the jungle. his fall was slowed by the leaf, which acted like a parachute. Logan disappeared beneath the leafy canopy. Conner tried to stop his leaf. But it was too late. He hit the jump, instinctively grabbing the leaf as Logan had done. He flew into the air above the jungle. Then the leaf billowed up and slowed his descent. But it still hurt when he hit the branches. He fell through the canopy, then the leaves faded away and he fell into a tangle of branches. After a minute of lying stunned, he tried to get out of the huge ball. No good. It was like he had fallen, creating a hole in the tangle, then it had sealed. He looked down. Something was moving.

razorwing wrote:

hi. glad to be here 
what should i work on??

We need ideas for SuperHuman right now. Actually, I don't know when Lund is finishing her part so...yeah, just loose brainstorms. 

kay    What is happening right now is Trevor (Nomos charrie) gets captured and while trying to save him, the others get spotted and picture taken. a giant monster comes and smashes the camera. At least, thats pretty close to what is happening.