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lundfamily3 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

Anime doesn't have description.... 

I know I am not part of the collab, but, you make insanely detailed stuff for Anime. Each character has pages of details,  and each episode... Well, lets say 2+ pages per a scene

Your completely exaggerating. 
A page of details.... Well 4 lines of details.  2+ pages for the story? The story is
this long... Coming from an Arabian Nights writing collab member that much is nothing.


*CRASH* *BANG* Lightning and Thunder overhead... Great Darkness

"Moonstone!" "Yes Queen Luna?" "Go! Get the other clans" "But Queen-" "I said GO Moonstone"

"Queen Frost?" "What now Hydro?"  "We need to help the other clans we are the only ones not fighting." "How dare you talk of the other clans Hydro!, Are you loyal to our clan or not?" "Yes but-" "No buts! We will not help those ridiculous clans".

"Queen Luna... Great Darkness is coming, I foresee it" "I know Echo (sigh) we are doing all we can to stop the typhoons but i'm afraid our magic is not strong enough even with all our added strength... I'm afraid unless the clan of water joins us we will fall." "But we can't give up hope!" "But Echo? Is their any hope to give up on?"

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-04-18 06:06:11)

Blazingwave wrote:

I have no idea why we now have two entries for earth healers...
Which one should I add?

Which two are there?

I prefer Petal 

i prefer Oak.

Clan: Time/ Space
Gender: Female
Name: Glimmer
Appearance: Is silver with very shiny hair.
Special Ability: She can create a shield that is very shiny, and it blinds opponents for 10 seconds.
Personality: She is up herself. Mean.(Her personality is a lot like a model. Not at all like Time/ Space people!)
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Avalanche
Appearance: Has brown hair, and has brown fur, with black mane.
Special Abilities: He can summon avalanches, and use them in battle.
Personality: Is shy, and very quiet.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Water
Gender: Male
Name: Bubble
Appearance: Is medium blue, with silver talons.
Special Abilities: Can throw Bubbles that can protect himself. Is considered the master of defense.
Personality: Is sharper than he looks. He is punctual, and as a carer, he takes is name seriously.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Female
Name: Flutter
Appearance: Wears a feather necklace.
Special Abilities: Can fly higher faster than anyone. She has razor sharp knives in her wings, that she can throw in battle.
Personality: Selfish, and only cares about her training.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Ravine
Appearance: Chestnut hair, mane and coat.
Special Abilities: Has an amazing sense of smell.
Personality: Shy and Quiet.
Position: Student

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Rockslide
Appearance: Grey mane and coat, black hair.
Special Abilities: Can summon rockslides.
Personality: Shy and consistent during training.
Position: Student

Clan: Space/ Time
Gender: Female
Name: Aura
Appearance: Is a purplish grey.
Special Abilities: She can read peoples aura's, and sense when someone is near.
Personality: Intelligent, Graceful and Shy.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Male
Name: Swoop
Appearance: White feathers with brown fur.
Special Abilities: Can fly at full speed towards the ground, and 1cm of the ground, can turn, cleanly.
Personality: Determined, Brave and caring.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Female
Name: Twinkle
Appearance: Is normal phoenix colours, with purple eyes.
Special Abilities: She can make stars fall to the ground, but her aim is not precise.
Personality: Feisty, Determined, Powerful and quick.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Sparks
Appearance: He is yellow, with red tipped wings, and yellow eyes.
Special Abilities: He can make fireworks, and make them explode at any time.
Personality: Self centred, Individual and Ungrateful.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Inferno
Appearance: Normal Phoenix colours.
Special Abilities: He can throw fireballs, and make them go straight towards the target.
Personality: He is a smart aleck, sarcastic and mean.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Water
Gender: Male
Name: Sandy
Appearance: Medium blue, with yellow eyes.
Special Abilities: Can swim in shallow water.
Personality: Self centred, mean.
Position: Student
Relationships: His sister is shelly.

Clan: Water
Gender: Female
Name: Shelly
Appearance: Light blue, with a shell bracelet.
Special Abilities: She can shrink, to fit into a clam shell.
Personality: Is the complete opposite of Sandy.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Stalactite
Appearance: Grey mane and coat, with black hair.
Special Abilities: Can jump the highest.
Personality: Shy, Nervous and sticks to his twin.
Position: Student
Relationships: Is twins with stalagmite.

Clan: Earth
Gender: Female
Name: Stalagmite
Appearance: Same as his twin.
Special Abilities: Can jump the futherest.
Personality: Shy, Nervous and sticks to his twin.
Position: Student

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Boulder
Appearance: Black hair and mane, with a bay coat.
Special Abilities: Is very strong, and can lift boulders, to crush enemies.
Personality: Tough, Rough and Loyal.
Position: Carer

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Blaze
Appearance: Normal Phoenix.
Special Abilities:
Personality: Feisty, yet loyal and courageous.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Male
Name: Gust
Appearance: Normal Griffin.
Special Abilities: Can blow anything with his breath.
Personality: Brave and Loyal
Position: Warrior


You have to add these

Air Clan - Warrior

Name Boreas
Gender M
Unusual Appearance yellow-red beak
Special Ability can emit an aura from his open beak that cancels any spells or curses already in place, or prevents any from being cast as long as he is emitting the aura.
Personality Loyal, Squeamish, Brave.


And this one!

destructo-serpent wrote:

Blazingwave, read the last post of the ninth page and the first four of the tenth page.

Didn't see those! Will add them.

Yeah that's a good combonation!

I'v added the other characters that were in code.

madbunnygal wrote:

Clan: Time/ Space
Gender: Female
Name: Glimmer
Appearance: Is silver with very shiny hair.
Special Ability: She can create a shield that is very shiny, and it blinds opponents for 10 seconds.
Personality: She is up herself. Mean.(Her personality is a lot like a model. Not at all like Time/ Space people!)
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Avalanche
Appearance: Has brown hair, and has brown fur, with black mane.
Special Abilities: He can summon avalanches, and use them in battle.
Personality: Is shy, and very quiet.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Water
Gender: Male
Name: Bubble
Appearance: Is medium blue, with silver talons.
Special Abilities: Can throw Bubbles that can protect himself. Is considered the master of defense.
Personality: Is sharper than he looks. He is punctual, and as a carer, he takes is name seriously.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Female
Name: Flutter
Appearance: Wears a feather necklace.
Special Abilities: Can fly higher faster than anyone. She has razor sharp knives in her wings, that she can throw in battle.
Personality: Selfish, and only cares about her training.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Ravine
Appearance: Chestnut hair, mane and coat.
Special Abilities: Has an amazing sense of smell.
Personality: Shy and Quiet.
Position: Student

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Rockslide
Appearance: Grey mane and coat, black hair.
Special Abilities: Can summon rockslides.
Personality: Shy and consistent during training.
Position: Student

Clan: Space/ Time
Gender: Female
Name: Aura
Appearance: Is a purplish grey.
Special Abilities: She can read peoples aura's, and sense when someone is near.
Personality: Intelligent, Graceful and Shy.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Male
Name: Swoop
Appearance: White feathers with brown fur.
Special Abilities: Can fly at full speed towards the ground, and 1cm of the ground, can turn, cleanly.
Personality: Determined, Brave and caring.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Female
Name: Twinkle
Appearance: Is normal phoenix colours, with purple eyes.
Special Abilities: She can make stars fall to the ground, but her aim is not precise.
Personality: Feisty, Determined, Powerful and quick.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Sparks
Appearance: He is yellow, with red tipped wings, and yellow eyes.
Special Abilities: He can make fireworks, and make them explode at any time.
Personality: Self centred, Individual and Ungrateful.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Inferno
Appearance: Normal Phoenix colours.
Special Abilities: He can throw fireballs, and make them go straight towards the target.
Personality: He is a smart aleck, sarcastic and mean.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Water
Gender: Male
Name: Sandy
Appearance: Medium blue, with yellow eyes.
Special Abilities: Can swim in shallow water.
Personality: Self centred, mean.
Position: Student
Relationships: His sister is shelly.

Clan: Water
Gender: Female
Name: Shelly
Appearance: Light blue, with a shell bracelet.
Special Abilities: She can shrink, to fit into a clam shell.
Personality: Is the complete opposite of Sandy.
Position: Warrior

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Stalactite
Appearance: Grey mane and coat, with black hair.
Special Abilities: Can jump the highest.
Personality: Shy, Nervous and sticks to his twin.
Position: Student
Relationships: Is twins with stalagmite.

Clan: Earth
Gender: Female
Name: Stalagmite
Appearance: Same as his twin.
Special Abilities: Can jump the futherest.
Personality: Shy, Nervous and sticks to his twin.
Position: Student

Clan: Earth
Gender: Male
Name: Boulder
Appearance: Black hair and mane, with a bay coat.
Special Abilities: Is very strong, and can lift boulders, to crush enemies.
Personality: Tough, Rough and Loyal.
Position: Carer

Clan: Fire
Gender: Male
Name: Blaze
Appearance: Normal Phoenix.
Special Abilities:
Personality: Feisty, yet loyal and courageous.
Position: Carer

Clan: Air
Gender: Male
Name: Gust
Appearance: Normal Griffin.
Special Abilities: Can blow anything with his breath.
Personality: Brave and Loyal
Position: Warrior


You have to add these

You didn't put them in the code...

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-04-19 04:34:13)

Blazingwave wrote:

Here are the series of events for chapter one! (in event order)

1. Twins of Sun missing
2. External Darkness
3. When trying to raise the moon, Queen Luna faints and is put in bed by her clan.
4. In the morning Queen Luna has disappeared.
5. All clans panic as the pegasi/unicorn clan and palace is gone the morning after Queen Luna's disappearance
6. Hydro finds a note from Queen Luna giving a strange spell
7. Hydro uses the spell though she has no idea what it does, she trusts Queen Luna
8. When Hydro goes to visit Queen frost, Queen Frost strangely wants to help the other clans even though yesterday she had been absolutely opposed to the idea.

Btw i'v made more music.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/BWTestProjects/3274757

Goodbye Moonstone sad song
This one is played when Queen Luna tells moonstone to go in the prologue.

Disappearance of Queen Luna
The start is similar to Moonstone sad song but then it changes.
This song is played when the pegasi/unicorn's find that Queen Luna has gone.

Centaur in forest
Sound effects for a centaur messenger carrying a message to the pegasi through a forest.

Typhoon attack song
When you click the song the description comes up

War sound effects
The sound effects for the war (before the water dragons joined)

Water dragons join battle
When Queen Frost leads the water dragon's to battle


Also for others who haven't heard the other music I did it's here.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/BWTestProjects/3260482

Last edited by Blazingwave (2013-04-19 22:27:27)

That's really good storyline 

Just looked at the sounds and they are awesome @blazing 

Will do just give me a script and a charchter, just tell me how you want it