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lundfamily3 wrote:

Um, guys, we don't decide major plot stuff without everyone. 

Sorry!! 

How is Nomo going with SS?? Also, Can I put all the stories in a word document, so they don't get lost in the pages of comment?

madbunnygal wrote:

How is Nomo going with SS?? Also, Can I put all the stories in a word document, so they don't get lost in the pages of comment?

That might be a good idea

Sorry doesn't cut it. You already started writing it.

Also, we put the pages on the wiki, thats why we created it? 

lundfamily3 wrote:

Sorry doesn't cut it. You already started writing it.

Also, we put the pages on the wiki, thats why we created it? 

We really are sorry is there anything we can do to make it up to you?

If it makes you any more forgiving, your not the only one we do it to. There was that one time in the early pages where you thought of the dragon idea and everyone decided on it without me and I was left with Earth. We didn't even vote on the idea, you just chose it while I was at school. In my opinion, that is bigger than a plot change. I think only one person said sorry to me for that. At least we are truly sorry and expressing our guilt.
I really am sorry.  If sorry doesnt cut it what will?

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-09 18:57:09)

I dont know. Waiting for Lund and Nomo to suggest some ideas. We've been doing too much without them.

Waffle27 wrote:

Hey Dserpent, I forgot if you or me did the last section?

the camping one?? i did that.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Hey Dserpent, I forgot if you or me did the last section?

the camping one?? i did that.

Oh sorry I meant for the Nightmare.

um.... i think you did. idk.

Once Camilla knew that everyone was asleep, she decided that she would go out to get some fresh air.
"Great" she thought "I wish they would stop!"
She made her way through the shrubs and transformed into a tiger.
"This way," she thought "I will scare them more."

One million things seemed to be running through her mind at the moment. Especially when she had heard everyone else's powers.
"Ula," she thought "Ughh"

She was where she wanted to be. Carnival music ran through her ears, rats scurried over pop corn and the smell of the hot food. In the middle of all this was a huge tent that contained what she feared most. The tent was red and yellow, and hundreds of people were running in there just before the show was about to start.
"I remember now. I 'm a tiger now. I can't just barge in normally!" She thought.

At the back of the tent, all the performers practised until they were dizzy. The animals were whipped until they finally completed what their masters were telling them to do.
"This is terrible!" She thought as she watched all the animal cruelty laws being broken in front of her. "I'm putting a stop to this!"

As she was formulating a plan, she noticed a tiger who was trapped in a cage that was clearly to small for her. Over the other side of the practice room was her cub who was being hurt by the stronger animals.

She was just about to help when she heard a familiar voice.
"Camilla! Is that you?" someone whisphered.
"Trevor! What are you doing here?"
"I saw you going out of camp, and I came to see what you were doing."
"You have to get away. There are strong people here who will hurt you."
"You seem to know everything about here!"

Tears welled in her eyes.
"That's my business." She whispered abruptly.
"I'm helping you."
"No!"
"You are very stubborn! Aren't you!"
"Fine! You can help!"

Camilla quickly explained the plan to Trevor.
"Ok, lets go!" Trevor said.

Trevor walked confidently to the centre of the room.

"Hey what are you doing here kid?" One of them yelled.
"Let's get him!"
"Yeah!"

They all surrounded in the middle of the room to witness the fight between Trevor and a man with a Hulk like figure.

"Good" Camilla thought "I hope he doesn't get hurt though."

She made her way over towards the big tiger.
"Come on!" she whispered to it "Lets go!"

The tiger tried to get out of its cage with the help of Camilla, but couldn't get out.
"Great. Tranform! Lion!" She thought.
Camilla was no longer a tiger, but a lioness.
"This should be easy to claw through now!" She thought.

She transformed back to a tiger and the big tiger got out of the cage.

"Now for the smaller one." She thought.

They both sneaked across the room to the small tiger. They grabbed him, and mother and cub ran out of the room, unnoticed.

"Now, come on Trevor!" She whispered.

But Trevor was no where to be seen.

She looked everywhere, but he was gone.
She sprinted as fast as she could back to the camp. When she arrived she screamed "WAKE UP!!!!!!! TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED!! ETHAN, MEL AND ULA! WAKE UP!!!"
"What?" Ethan said groggily.
"TREVOR'S BEEN CAPTURED, AND ITS ALL MY FAULT!!"


Are we scraping this?

i'm doing the hacker section, and we can insert it anywhere in the book if we need another scene. 

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Idk. I think Lund had an idea for what came next, but when I asked her she didnt reply, so I guess we'll wait for them and Nomo to decide if they think it fits next or if they have a better idea. 

OK. I hope nomo finishes SS soon 

Me too    Weve been pretty unactive on SS

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

OK. I hope nomo finishes SS soon 

Me too    Weve been pretty unactive on SS

Do you know where Nomo is up to with it? Has he/she started it?

Um...idk. We can ask them next time they et online 

this hacker scene isn't coming very well. i was doing fine writing, then, BAM! out of ideas.