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Waffle27 wrote:

Maybe they have superpowertype thing that hides them or there too quick to see? Or maybe the humans can see them and think its the apocylypse or something 

i think they shoul only see what they want to see. thats easiest :p

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Maybe they have superpowertype thing that hides them or there too quick to see? Or maybe the humans can see them and think its the apocylypse or something 

i think they shoul only see what they want to see. thats easiest :p

But like Nomo was saying its a lot like the Percy Jackson series. Maybe we'll just put the Percy Jackson in our credits.

all the good ideas are already taken. ugh.

so, how about the basics. MONSTER APOCALYPSE!!!!    no disguise?

i suppose so. now, wht sre we writing next, and whos doing it? i cant do any of it for a while, or it will look like Ethan is doing all the narrating and stuff 

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i suppose so. now, wht sre we writing next, and whos doing it? i cant do any of it for a while, or it will look like Ethan is doing all the narrating and stuff 

Good point. Um so next is the news clip? Mel's been doing quite a bit, but I can do it if no one else wants to do it.

Camilla, Ula, or Trev should do it. they've barely done any narrating so far. anyway, where is their myrmeke attack? i cant find the finished version of that.

"Alright class," Miss Robin continued, "your homework for tomorrow is-"
R-i-i-i-i-n-n-n-g-g-g! The kids jumped from their seats, eager to get out of the classroom before the homework sheets were passed around.
     In a flurry of movement and yells as kids fell over, the room was nearly empty, except for the kids who had dropped their papers and were hurrying to pick them up, and Trevor.
     Trevor had dirty blonde hair, and large brown eyes. Freckles spotted his face in various places, but he had little acne and chocolate tan skin. He didn't wear glasses, but was a school maniac, and would do anything for more information to squeeze in his already crammed brain. He sat at his desk expectantly, oblivious to the hurried departure of the other students. Miss Robin looked up, bundles of papers held tightly in her hand. Looking around the empty classroom, she sighed sadly, but noticing Trevor, broke into a pleased grin.
     "Trevor! I see you're the only one in the classroom, again," she surveyed the classroom again and took a deep breath. Trevor stood, and collected his pre-test papers from the teacher before smiling and walking out the door with his backpack swung over his shoulder. Most people that saw him without knowing him personally would assume he was a normal kid. He ran marathons, but was terrible at skateboarding, and couldn't ride one if his life depended on it. So once they got to know him, others would normally stay away from him, except one.
     
Camilla catches up with him (They already know each other and are friends maybe, if madbunny agrees.), Skipping to the ant part...

Trevor studied the alleyway as he and Camilla walked through it. He could see it was a good shortcut, but that didn't stop him from getting the chills. The path cut through two abandoned apartment buildings, with their windows closed and the lights out. He moved faster as the cold dank air pressed against his skin. But something was wrong.
     There was a scuttling sound behind them, and Trevor spun around and gasped. A large ant, bigger then any insect he'd ever seen, was crawling on six legs toward them, its pinchers clicking together.
     The ant marched toward Trevor, and he backed against the wall. He tried to run, but his feet felt rooted to the ground. He turned and his eyes went wide as he saw Camilla wasn't standing next to him anymore.


A moment ago, Camilla was standing next to Trevor, who was flat against a wall with a giant ant cornering him. That was when everything changed. Her view lowered, and something had struck her. Hard.
"Why now?" She thought. "Not in front of Trevor!"
Standing in a pile of crumpled clothes, was a white tiger with sharp claws and a ribbon tied round it's neck. Camilla's ribbon.
"Trevor!" The tiger roared!
"I.i.i.it talks!" Trevor stammered.
"Trevor, I am Camilla" she roared again.
"What?" he screamed, but Camilla could no longer hear him, because she had jumped at the giant ant, and clawed at its stomach. The giant ant freed Trevor, and stumbled into one of the buildings.
"Trevor, Run!" Camilla screamed.
Trevor stood staring at the ant in horror and disbelief.

Camilla faced the ant. "Now for you! Anyone who hurts my friend will get an extra serving of my claws!" and with that, she jumped, swiping at the creature’s stomach until finally it fell into one of the buildings, leaving only Trevor.
“Trevor, follow me” Camilla said
“Y.y.you’re a tiger!”
“Don’t talk! Just follow.”

Camilla led Trevor into a deserted park. The grass was a dull dark green, and the sky was grey.

“I know you’re there!” Camilla called, as it came to their attention that something was slowly making its way out of the shrubs, towards them.

As Ula waited the pain from earlier seeped away. The pain had started a little while a go, and it was like a burning sensation. The ferns had snagged into her dark hair, but this didn't mind Ula. She always had something in her hair, though usually it was only two blue feathers. She wore the feathers as a symbol of her longing to live in the wild. She didn't want to be thought of as crazy, so she simply wore the feathers.

The kids she had heard finally came into view. A boy and a girl, both looking to be 18. Ula gasped. The boy was her crush. The crush she had every since she had seen him. She never really talked to him, and never learned his name. He was new though. She did know that.

Ula decided to move forward. She had seen something behind the girl and boy... A giant ant? Not just one, two! Ula began to stalk through bushes, like a wolf, around the kids. She needed to surprise the ants. Ula had spent time in the forest, and she knew to never rush out at an animal. Ula stepped on a branch. She cursed.

The girl turned, "I know you're there!" Behind her, the ants were about to charge! Ula didn't have time to think. She leapt from plants, landing in front of the bronze creatures. Something was wrong, though. She landed on all fours... Her hands felt different... Ula felt herself leaping onto one of the ants, slicing through its soft neck and reaching the brain. It died swiftly. She turned to be tackled by the other ant. It's pincers were above her neck, ready to kill. Ula felt normal again, whatever had happened, she was a normal, weak, human. The ant fell over, something else had attacked it. A huge white tiger had tackled it. It bent over the ant and bit down, killing the poor creature.

Ula felt exhausted. She didn't know what was,happening. Black appeared around the edges of her vision. "Calm down, calm down. You won't have a panic attack. Everything's fin-" Everything went black. She had fainted.

ants dont have necks 

gtg. i may be on later tonight. maybe not. see you.

because i've seen ants. just a head, thorax, and abdomen.

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-04-08 23:55:14)

how about a monster is hacking the internet, then they have to track it down and get rid of it?

destructo-serpent wrote:

hey madbunny, are you going to chance Camil's armor to some other material, or keep it gold?

Changing it. What material?

only registered user online 

so what should we have next for the story? nomo, hows SS coming? we need that chapter to continue

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Good point. Um so next is the news clip? Mel's been doing quite a bit, but I can do it if no one else wants to do it.

Camilla, Ula, or Trev should do it. they've barely done any narrating so far. anyway, where is their myrmeke attack? i cant find the finished version of that.

Can I do the next part?

Sure! Any ideas of what it should be about?

Yeah.
I cant think of anything either.