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#2226 2013-04-07 14:55:01

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

i cant find Trevor's sheet. so many pages of post {{{._.}}}

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#2227 2013-04-07 15:03:17

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

I tried, went back to the 76th page but couldnt find it. I havent read it all closely though. I'll doublecheck.

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#2228 2013-04-07 15:05:26

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

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Waffle27 wrote:

No history? Whatever teeters your totter. I like it! The only one Mel knows about is her predict the future through dreams thing, because she has this vision in her dream of either the monsters or the thing. How do they meet the thing?

they're wondering what the monsters were, and why they got attacked, then it appears.

Nomo, Trevor is 13, and camilla is 18

Whoa, lol. I'll change his age to 18 also then. I thought we were doing younger ages.

Name: Trevor/Trev
Age: 18  tongue
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Raggedy brown hair, large chocolate brown eyes, freckles, pretty tan, likes wearing bright solid colors.
Personality: Not brave, but smart mentally. A tiny bit shy, if not shy, he's most definitely not outgoing and "Hi guys!"
Power 1 (Big): Teleportation. Can teleport anywhere he's already been, but the farther the distance, the more it drains him.
Power 2 (Small): Invisibility. Can turn invisible (Not invisible, but you have to look pretty
hard to see him) for a very short amount of time.
Power 3 (Small): Static electricity. Can shut down electric machines, and can slightly shock humans.
History: None.
Other: He does not know about any of his powers except the electric one until he is told by the thing-a-ma-jigger.

Find it! Yay!


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#2229 2013-04-07 15:08:11

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Oh! There it is! Where was it? (that would be ironic if it was in the 75th page)

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#2230 2013-04-07 15:11:52

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

lundfamily3 wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:


they're wondering what the monsters were, and why they got attacked, then it appears.

Nomo, Trevor is 13, and camilla is 18

Whoa, lol. I'll change his age to 18 also then. I thought we were doing younger ages.

Name: Trevor/Trev
Age: 18  tongue
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Raggedy brown hair, large chocolate brown eyes, freckles, pretty tan, likes wearing bright solid colors.
Personality: Not brave, but smart mentally. A tiny bit shy, if not shy, he's most definitely not outgoing and "Hi guys!"
Power 1 (Big): Teleportation. Can teleport anywhere he's already been, but the farther the distance, the more it drains him.
Power 2 (Small): Invisibility. Can turn invisible (Not invisible, but you have to look pretty
hard to see him) for a very short amount of time.
Power 3 (Small): Static electricity. Can shut down electric machines, and can slightly shock humans.
History: None.
Other: He does not know about any of his powers except the electric one until he is told by the thing-a-ma-jigger.

Find it! Yay!

Guys, I think we should change the character's ages all to around 13-12, because it's so hard for me to write an age I haven't experienced. You don't need too, I just would appreciate it, because that's what I'm thinking of doing to Trevor.


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#2231 2013-04-07 15:12:25

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that's an old version. now hes sixteen and has current electricity.



part of what i have. its just the preperation.


Ethan froze at the sight of the myrmekes. There were a dozen of them. It didn’t seem like such a large number until you saw their huge sizes and steel-like shells. Five kids, even if one could somehow turn into a tiger, couldn’t defeat them all. Could they? Ethan’s mind raced, thinking of plans, running through them, discarding them. Then he thought of one that might work. He looked around quickly. The myrmekes hadn’t seen them, so maybe they had a chance to pull this off. Ethan’s eye settled on a long, straight, tapered limb on a nearby tree. “Hey, Camilla?” Camilla turned to look at him. “Can you get that branch down?” “Sure.” She replied. She transformed into a tiger and jumped at the tree, snapping the limb off. Then he got another meter-long stick from an oak tree not far away. He tied the rock to the end of the branch with some string lying on the ground. They were ready.

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#2232 2013-04-07 15:19:40

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finished. it's kind of short though.



Ethan froze at the sight of the myrmekes. There were a dozen of them. It didn’t seem like such a large number until you saw their huge sizes and steel-like shells. Five kids, even if one could somehow turn into a tiger, couldn’t defeat them all. Could they? Ethan’s mind raced, thinking of plans, running through them, discarding them. Then he thought of one that might work. He looked around quickly. The myrmekes hadn’t seen them, so maybe they had a chance to pull this off. Ethan’s eye settled on a long, straight, tapered limb on a nearby tree. “Hey, Camilla?” Camilla turned to look at him. “Can you get that branch down?” “Sure.” She replied. She transformed into a tiger and jumped at the tree, snapping the limb off. Then he got another meter-long stick from an oak tree not far away. He tied the rock to the end of the branch with some string lying on the ground. They were ready.

XXXtransitionXXX

It seemed that as soon as he had gone over the plan with everyone, the myrmekes noticed the group of kids standing there. They quickly started to advance. the long stick was ready. It’s middle was on top of a large stone. The small end was on the ground, facing the myrmekes. The large end was in the air, held by Mel, Ula, and Trevor. Camilla stood beside it, in tiger form. Ethan stood close to the stick, holding the makeshift spear. The myrmekes hung back, puzzled by the strange arrangement. But one ran forward, straight onto the end of the stick, partway covered with leaves. Ula, Mel, and Trevor instantly pulled down end hard. The lever flipped the myrmeke into the air, and it landed on it’s back. Ethan rushed in, slamming the spear into the exposed stomach. Then the lever was engaged again, flipping the body away. Camilla’s job was to protect Ula, Mel, and Trevor while they operated the stick. More myrmekes came, but they were killed either by Ethan or Camilla. Then there was only one left. It rushed forwards. Seeming to be about to go onto the stick. The lever was engaged too early, and the ant’s mandibles snapped the rising stick in half. Then the myrmeke retreated back. No they had no lever. But one myrmeke was no problem. Camilla and Ethan rushed forward. Camilla swiped at the myrmekes’s mandibles, smashing them, while Ethan drove the spear into it’s brain. The battle was over.

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#2233 2013-04-07 15:19:56

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Ula was hiding in the ferns of the park. She had heard two kids running. At first she thought nothing of it, but then she smelled the scent of a tiger. She had promptly melded in the ferns, waiting. Why had a tiger been in the park? Shouldn't they be in the zoo? Or the circus?

As Ula waited the pain from earlier seeped away. The pain had started a little while a go, and it was like a burning sensation. The ferns had snagged into her dark hair, but this didn't mind Ula. She always had something in her hair, though usually it was only two blue feathers. She wore the feathers as a symbol of her longing to live in the wild. She didn't want to be thought of as crazy, so she simply wore the feathers.

The kids she had heard finally came into view. A boy and a girl, both looking to be 18. Ula gasped. The boy was her crush. The crush she had every since she had seen him. She never really talked to him, and never learned his name. He was new though. She did know that.

Ula decided to move forward. She had seen something behind the girl and boy... A giant ant? Not just one, two! Ula began to stalk through bushes, like a wolf, around the kids. She needed to surprise the ants. Ula had spent time in the forest, and she knew to never rush out at an animal. Ula stepped on a branch. She cursed.

The girl turned, "I know you're there!" Behind her, the ants were about to charge! Ula didn't have time to think. She leapt from plants, landing in front of the bronze creatures. Something was wrong, though. She landed on all fours... Her hands felt different... Ula felt herself leaping onto one of the ants, slicing through its soft neck and reaching the brain. It died swiftly. She turned to be tackled by the other ant. It's pincers were above her neck, ready to kill. Ula felt normal again, whatever had happened, she was a normal, weak, human. The ant fell over, something else had attacked it. A huge white tiger had tackled it. It bent over the ant and bit down, killing the poor creature.

Ula felt exhausted. She didn't know what was,happening. Black appeared around the edges of her vision. "Calm down, calm down. You won't have a panic attack. Everything's fin-" Everything went black. She had fainted.


This good? Ula doesn't know how to transform yet, by the way. She doesn't even knew she did.  tongue


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#2234 2013-04-07 15:20:01

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Nomolos wrote:

Guys, I think we should change the character's ages all to around 13-12, because it's so hard for me to write an age I haven't experienced. You don't need too, I just would appreciate it, because that's what I'm thinking of doing to Trevor.

When I write my character, I sort of picture her as 12 or 13  hmm  I agree with you, I'm just not good at writing ages that I haven't experienced. But this is already set to take place in High School (Or ages 14-18 for those of you who dont live in the US) so I think we should just keep it like this.

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#2235 2013-04-07 15:22:50

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Yeah, both of those are really good!!!!! big_smile

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#2236 2013-04-07 15:50:30

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ants dont have necks  hmm

and the only part of myrmekes that is unprotected is the legs and head

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#2237 2013-04-07 15:51:47

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Is the belly protected?

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#2238 2013-04-07 15:52:16

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Waffle27 wrote:

Is the belly protected?

oh yeah, i forgot about that. it's their biggest weakness.

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#2239 2013-04-07 16:01:06

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can't wait for the yugolunite. then Ethan will be so much awesomer  big_smile  big_smile

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#2240 2013-04-07 16:02:48

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big_smile  I'm out of my lazy mood now so I'm going to continue. Question before I write it, are they part of a special race that has powers or just humans with powers?

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#2241 2013-04-07 16:05:45

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Waffle27 wrote:

big_smile  I'm out of my lazy mood now so I'm going to continue. Question before I write it, are they part of a special race that has powers or just humans with powers?

ancient race of humans with powers i think.

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#2242 2013-04-07 16:07:03

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destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

big_smile  I'm out of my lazy mood now so I'm going to continue. Question before I write it, are they part of a special race that has powers or just humans with powers?

ancient race of humans with powers i think.

Okay, so i'll just say "Each of you are part of an ancient race of humans..."

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#2243 2013-04-07 16:09:54

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

big_smile  I'm out of my lazy mood now so I'm going to continue. Question before I write it, are they part of a special race that has powers or just humans with powers?

ancient race of humans with powers i think.

Okay, so i'll just say "Each of you are part of an ancient race of humans..."

big_smile

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#2244 2013-04-07 17:08:56

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hay waffle, when did you get 1000+ posts?

1000+ post party  big_smile  i gotz ballonz


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#2245 2013-04-07 18:20:00

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WHAT?!?
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have 1000+ Posts!!!!!!!!!!
I didn't even notice!
YAY!!!!!!
Milestones~

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#2246 2013-04-07 18:25:55

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Waffle27 wrote:

WHAT?!?
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have 1000+ Posts!!!!!!!!!!
I didn't even notice!
YAY!!!!!!
Milestones~

:-D

hows the yugolunite encuonter coming?

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#2247 2013-04-07 18:32:54

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Sorry, I was at a dessert social for the last hour or so. He's still explaining there powers and how to use them.

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#2248 2013-04-07 18:43:58

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Waffle27 wrote:

Sorry, I was at a dessert social for the last hour or so. He's still explaining there powers and how to use them.

k.  smile

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#2249 2013-04-07 19:11:42

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hm.... x-ray/infrared vision is kind of a useless power. hm.....

oh! better idea! chameleon :3

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#2250 2013-04-07 19:12:56

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Chameleon? O-o

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