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#2151 2013-04-06 20:40:00

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

"Alright class," Miss Robin continued, "your homework for tomorrow is-"
R-i-i-i-i-n-n-n-g-g-g! The kids jumped from their seats, eager to get out of the classroom before the homework sheets were passed around.
     In a flurry of movement and yells as kids fell over, the room was nearly empty, except for the kids who had dropped their papers and were hurrying to pick them up, and Trevor.
     Trevor had dirty blonde hair, and large brown eyes. Freckles spotted his face in various places, but he had little acne and chocolate tan skin. He didn't wear glasses, but was a school maniac, and would do anything for more information to squeeze in his already crammed brain. He sat at his desk expectantly, oblivious to the hurried departure of the other students. Miss Robin looked up, bundles of papers held tightly in her hand. Looking around the empty classroom, she sighed sadly, but noticing Trevor, broke into a pleased grin.
     "Trevor! I see you're the only one in the classroom, again," she surveyed the classroom again and took a deep breath. Trevor stood, and collected his pre-test papers from the teacher before smiling and walking out the door with his backpack swung over his shoulder. Most people that saw him without knowing him personally would assume he was a normal kid. He ran marathons, but was terrible at skateboarding, and couldn't ride one if his life depended on it. So once they got to know him, others would normally stay away from him, except one.
     
Camilla catches up with him (They already know each other and are friends maybe, if madbunny agrees.), Skipping to the ant part...

Trevor studied the alleyway as he and Camilla walked through it. He could see it was a good shortcut, but that didn't stop him from getting the chills. The path cut through two abandoned apartment buildings, with their windows closed and the lights out. He moved faster as the cold dank air pressed against his skin. But something was wrong.
     There was a scuttling sound behind them, and Trevor spun around and gasped. A large ant, bigger then any insect he'd ever seen, was crawling on six legs toward them, its pinchers clicking together.
     The ant marched toward Trevor, and he backed against the wall. He tried to run, but his feet felt rooted to the ground. He turned and his eyes went wide as he saw Camilla wasn't standing next to him anymore.


A moment ago, Camilla was standing next to Trevor, who was flat against a wall with a giant ant cornering him. That was when everything changed. Her view lowered, and something had struck her. Hard.
"Why now?" She thought. "Not in front of Trevor!"
Standing in a pile of crumpled clothes, was a white tiger with sharp claws and a ribbon tied round it's neck. Camilla's ribbon.
"Trevor!" The tiger roared!
"I.i.i.it talks!" Trevor stammered.
"Trevor, I am Camilla" she roared again.
"What?" he screamed, but Camilla could no longer hear him, because she had jumped at the giant ant, and clawed at its stomach. The giant ant freed Trevor, and stumbled into one of the buildings.
"Trevor, Run!" Camilla screamed.
Trevor stood staring at the ant in horror and disbelief.

Camilla faced the ant. "Now for you! Anyone who hurts my friend will get an extra serving of my claws!" and with that, she jumped, swiping at the creature’s stomach until finally it fell into one of the buildings, leaving only Trevor.
“Trevor, follow me” Camilla said
“Y.y.you’re a tiger!”
“Don’t talk! Just follow.”

Camilla led Trevor into a deserted park. The grass was a dull dark green, and the sky was grey.

“I know you’re there!” Camilla called, as it came to their attention that something was slowly making its way out of the shrubs, towards them.



And then shadow could write something about when they meet each other. “I know you’re there!” is referring to when they meet the others


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#2152 2013-04-06 20:41:45

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

the others wouldn't be in the shrubs, would they? they haven't teamed up yet. my plan was that ula, trev, and cami would encounter the monster army, someone wuold scream or something, then mel and Ethan would come to see why.

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#2153 2013-04-06 20:48:10

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

the others wouldn't be in the shrubs, would they? they haven't teamed up yet. my plan was that ula, trev, and cami would encounter the monster army, someone wuold scream or something, then mel and Ethan would come to see why.

Maybe, in the park, they encounter another monster, Ula somehow arrives, mel and ethan see what the commotion is?


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#2154 2013-04-06 20:52:23

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

the others wouldn't be in the shrubs, would they? they haven't teamed up yet. my plan was that ula, trev, and cami would encounter the monster army, someone wuold scream or something, then mel and Ethan would come to see why.

Maybe, in the park, they encounter another monster, Ula somehow arrives, mel and ethan see what the commotion is?

...I geuss that would work.

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#2155 2013-04-06 20:57:17

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

the others wouldn't be in the shrubs, would they? they haven't teamed up yet. my plan was that ula, trev, and cami would encounter the monster army, someone wuold scream or something, then mel and Ethan would come to see why.

Maybe, in the park, they encounter another monster, Ula somehow arrives, mel and ethan see what the commotion is?

...I geuss that would work.

maybe ula saw them attacking the ant?


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#2156 2013-04-06 20:59:21

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Ula could be in the shrubs and thats where Lund's part comes in? Like, another ant could be attacking them from behind but they don't know it.

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#2157 2013-04-06 21:39:49

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

not really anything to recap. we didn't do anything. except promoted world peace, landed the first man on mars, sent a probe to the center of the earth, made three blockbusters, and started trying to decide on ur guy's myrmeke encunter  tongue

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#2158 2013-04-06 21:50:36

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

not really anything to recap. we didn't do anything. except promoted world peace, landed the first man on mars, sent a probe to the center of the earth, made three blockbusters, and started trying to decide on ur guy's myrmeke encunter  tongue

lol!


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#2159 2013-04-06 21:52:57

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Ula could be in the shrubs and thats where Lund's part comes in? Like, another ant could be attacking them from behind but they don't know it.

That's a great idea!!


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#2160 2013-04-06 21:53:40

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

not really anything to recap. we didn't do anything. except promoted world peace, landed the first man on mars, sent a probe to the center of the earth, made three blockbusters, and started trying to decide on ur guy's myrmeke encunter  tongue

lol!

Someetimes I think I will turn into aa myrmeke and eat you all!

Anyway. Should I write Ula meeting them and pwning a myremeke that tries to eat them!? *Anthony's Assassin Face Here*


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#2161 2013-04-06 21:56:17

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

lundfamily3 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

not really anything to recap. we didn't do anything. except promoted world peace, landed the first man on mars, sent a probe to the center of the earth, made three blockbusters, and started trying to decide on ur guy's myrmeke encunter  tongue

lol!

Someetimes I think I will turn into aa myrmeke and eat you all!

Anyway. Should I write Ula meeting them and pwning a myremeke that tries to eat them!? *Anthony's Assassin Face Here*

dont they not know about their powers, except for camel, (XD) who knows she can turn into a tiger??

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#2162 2013-04-06 22:00:04

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Ethan and Mel only beat the myrmeke with a combination of karate, a janitor's cart, and a couple of heater hands XD XD

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#2163 2013-04-06 22:04:00

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:


lol!

Someetimes I think I will turn into aa myrmeke and eat you all!

Anyway. Should I write Ula meeting them and pwning a myremeke that tries to eat them!? *Anthony's Assassin Face Here*

dont they not know about their powers, except for camel, (XD) who knows she can turn into a tiger??

grrrrrrr (I don't think Cami liked that!!)


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#2164 2013-04-06 22:21:17

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

What is Liamadams doing on here...?

no idea.


so, what are we doing? merging the stories? trying to come up with how to merge them?

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#2165 2013-04-06 22:22:23

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

What is Liamadams doing on here...?

no idea.


so, what are we doing? merging the stories? trying to come up with how to merge them?

Didn't we already merge the stories?

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#2166 2013-04-06 22:24:04

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

What is Liamadams doing on here...?

no idea.


so, what are we doing? merging the stories? trying to come up with how to merge them?

Didn't we already merge the stories?

???
what about Ula??

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#2167 2013-04-06 22:24:55

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Oh, well I suggested something but no one said anything.

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#2168 2013-04-06 22:37:04

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Oh, well I suggested something but no one said anything.

I like your suggestion :3


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#2169 2013-04-06 22:46:38

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Ula could be in the shrubs and thats where Lund's part comes in? Like, another ant could be attacking them from behind but they don't know it.

Good!!


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#2170 2013-04-06 23:06:11

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Okay so would we use that idea?

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#2171 2013-04-06 23:14:25

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Waffle27 wrote:

Okay so would we use that idea?

K, should I start writing!


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#2172 2013-04-06 23:17:01

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

lundfamily3 wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Okay so would we use that idea?

K, should I start writing!

Okay!

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#2173 2013-04-06 23:25:10

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

i'm confused. were are going with this?

nvm. i dont care. i'll just read the finished section  smile

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#2174 2013-04-06 23:27:16

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Ula could be in the shrubs and thats where Lund's part comes in? Like, another ant could be attacking them from behind but they don't know it.

This was the idea I suggested, if thats what your confused about.

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#2175 2013-04-06 23:35:04

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Ula could be in the shrubs and thats where Lund's part comes in? Like, another ant could be attacking them from behind but they don't know it.

This was the idea I suggested, if thats what your confused about.

smile

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