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Ok, I will try to continue it on


A moment ago, Camilla was standing next to Trevor, who was flat against a wall with a giant ant cornering him. That was when everything changed. Her view lowered, and something had struck her. Hard.
"Why now?" She thought. "Not in front of Trevor!"
Standing in a pile of crumpled clothes, was a white tiger with sharp claws and a ribbon tied round it's neck. Camilla's ribbon.
"Trevor!" The tiger roared!
"I.i.i.it talks!" Trevor stammered.
"Trevor, I am Camilla" she roared again.
"What?" he screamed, but Camilla could no longer hear him, because she had jumped at the giant ant, and clawed at its stomach. The giant ant freed Trevor, and stumbled into one of the buildings.
"Trevor, Run!" Camilla screamed.
Trevor stood staring at the ant in horror and disbelief. He only then realised that Camilla

Camilla faced the ant. "Now for you! Anyone who hurts my friend will get an extra serving of my claws!" and with that, she jumped, swiping at the creature’s stomach until finally it fell into one of the buildings, leaving only Trevor.
“Trevor, follow me” Camilla said
“Y.y.you’re a tiger!”
“Don’t talk! Just follow.”

Camilla led Trevor into a deserted park. The grass was a dull dark green, and the sky was grey.

“I know you’re there!” Camilla called, as it came to their attention that something was slowly making its way out of the shrubs, towards them.



I did this in 5 mins, It will definitely need more description

destructo-serpent wrote:

i still think she should be able to turn into a tiger, not be part tiger.

anyway, it's good 

thanks, she does turn into a full tiger! The ribbon round the neck was to show that she was Camilla. Thanks! I might change her 3rd power to she can see into the future 

how about she knows she can turn into a tiger, doesnt know why, she doesn't know she can do anything else, and no one else knows she can turn into tiger. shes the ancient race evryone else is, she also doesnt know that. and i had an idea. anyone who is that ancient race can understand other members of that race, no matter what form they are in.

is that Ok, or not?

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

how about she knows she can turn into a tiger, doesnt know why, she doesn't know she can do anything else, and no one else knows she can turn into tiger. shes the ancient race evryone else is, she also doesnt know that. and i had an idea. anyone who is that ancient race can understand other members of that race, no matter what form they are in.

is that Ok, or not?

That's awesome! The only reason why Trevor was scared though was because she had just transformed into a tiger! Is Trevor 16? I think I might change Camilla to 16, because an 18 year old would be in uni!

He's 16, yes.

destructo-serpent wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

how about she knows she can turn into a tiger, doesnt know why, she doesn't know she can do anything else, and no one else knows she can turn into tiger. shes the ancient race evryone else is, she also doesnt know that. and i had an idea. anyone who is that ancient race can understand other members of that race, no matter what form they are in.

is that Ok, or not?

That's awesome! The only reason why Trevor was scared though was because she had just transformed into a tiger! Is Trevor 16? I think I might change Camilla to 16, because an 18 year old would be in uni!

yeah, sixteen might be better. eighteen would be just out of range to call them kids in the sypnosis.

so you agree with those? they make ur charrie fit better in with the story. 

Yes 

now we have three different myrmekes meetings, all involving trevor. i'm not sure how this will work 

Well yours and Madbunny's could combine fairly easily, but theres also the one where Ula sees thm in the forest.         /\ /\
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                                     Jl     <---Fail Kitty

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-06 19:55:39)

...So should we put the parts on the wiki, or wait until we get the first chapter done (whenever that ends?)

Do you mean we all do the same chapter with different points of views? Or what we're doing now?

Waffle27 wrote:

Well yours and Madbunny's could combine fairly easily, but theres also the one where Ula sees thm in the forest.         /\ /\
                                  _ 00_
                                     Jl     <---Fail Kitty

Yeah, it could work, because they meet up with them in the park. Ula's part could follow on from there.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Do you mean we all do the same chapter with different points of views? Or what we're doing now?

nomo/shadow/madbunny should d what we did. it's easier.

Yeah, that would be easier. Would that work for you guys?

What did you guys do?

Couldn't we just have Nomo's part, mine and then Shadow could write the meeting at the park?